第一篇：英语老师作业评语

一、It's very clever of you to do so.It's nice of you to write this way.Wonderful!Your English is very good and your answers are correct.I'm sure you can do your work better next time.You've done a good job.You are doing wonderfully!

You can do better now than you did before.You have improved a lot.I am proud of you.That's great.Please never give up trying.Success comes through hard work and constant effort.No pains,no gains.I hope you will make more progress in the future.Whatgood work!You are the pride of our class.Work harder,and you will make more progress.The harder you work,the sooner you will improve.Come on!I am sure you will catch up soon.It's good to be correct.It's also important to be creative.Excellent.You haven't made any mistakes,but do try to make your handwriting neater.You had better be more careful!Pay more attention to the tenses.Your work is quite good

except for a few spelling mis-takes.Keep it up.Remember that little by little one goes far.则格言。例如：

●Great!／Perfect!／Good!／Wonderful!／Correct!／Excellent!B.短语：

●Well done!／Neat and tidy!C.句型：

●That's OK!

●What a good job you have done!●Now you can do better than before.●Your handwriting is excellent!●Keep it up.●Your English will become better if you work harder.D.段落：

●Although you have not been successful,you have done better than ever.Success belongs to the diligent learners.I am sure you will make more and more progress if you keep on practising your spoken English.E.格言：

●Practice makes perfect.●Where there is a will,there is a way.●Awillfulman willhave his way.●Failure is the only highroad to success.●Diligence is the mother of good fortune／good luck.●He who does not advance falls backward.●The water wears away stones.

第二篇：英语老师作业评语

一、作业评语要符合学生的实际水平

评语是写给学生看的，所以一方面评语要使用学生能看得懂的英语来写，所使用的词汇和语法不能过高或过低于学生的现有水平，要切合学生的实际水平，符合学生的个性心理发展需要；另一方面要做到循序渐进，由易到难，能够起到“跳一跳，摘到桃子”的作用，也就是说学生通过上下文的猜测或借助于词典就能理解。例如：

It's very clever of you to do so.It's nice of you to write this way.Wonderful!Your English is very good and your answers are correct.I'm sure you can do your work better next time.You've done a good job.You are doing wonderfully!

You can do better now than you did before.二、作业评语要有助于学生对所学知识的理解和记忆

语言的学习在于运用，所以教师在写评语时应运用所学的知识，以使学生能加强理解和记忆。例如：You have improved a lot.I am proud of you.That's great.Please never give up trying.Success comes through hard work and constant effort.No pains,no gains.I hope you will make more progress in the future.Whatgood work!You are the pride of our class.Work harder,and you will make more progress.The harder you work,the sooner you will improve.Come on!I am sure you will catch up soon.利用所学过的短语、句型和时态给学生写评语就能取得很好效果，可以帮助学生巩固和运用语言。

三、评语要有利于激发学生的学习热情

学生有被尊重、被表扬、被认可的需要。在写作业时，希望得到教师的表扬和鼓励，这是学生精神上的需要。如果精神上的需要长久得不到满足，他们就会产生消极的思想。因此，需要是学生学习行为的动力之一。需要的满足直接影响学生积极性的发挥，要充分发挥学生的积极性，对学生进行有效地鼓励是教育的策略之一。激励就是激发鼓励。一般地讲，激励就是以某种刺激为引诱，调动人的主动性、积极性和创造性。教师的评语就是刺激学生的诱因。学生有不同的性格，有不同的需要，那么激励的方法也不同。教师针对不同的学生及其作业，在不同场合所作的评语可激发学生的学习热情，让优等生更上一层楼，使中等生改正缺点、发扬优点，使暂时落后的学生能克服畏惧心理，树立信心。所以对优等生的作业表扬中要有指正，教师可通过评语向他们提出更高要求。例如：

It's good to be correct.It's also important to be creative.Excellent.You haven't made any mistakes,but do try to make your handwriting neater.对中等生的作业要慎重评价，在评语中要多督促。例如：

You had better be more careful!Pay more attention to the tenses.Your work is quite good

except for a few spelling mis-takes.Keep it up.Remember that little by little one goes far.对于差生的作业要多点激励，温和地指出错误的同时，也要指出他的优点以资鼓励。例如：

The structure of the composition is good,buttry to make sure the word order in your sentences is correct.Lily,I like your handwriting very much although there are some mistakes here.I am sure you can correct them.Bill,I think you can do better if you work harder.Your answers show you have real ability in the course,and you are developing increasing depth of thought and clarity of expression in your written work.However there are some grammar mistakes in the essay／here.Your work has improved.I am sure there is nothing too difficult for us to learn.You have done your work better this time.I believe that nothing is impossible as long as you work hard.Practice makes perfect.四、作业评语要能体现师生感情的交流

作业不仅是师生间教学信息的相互反馈，而且是联系和沟通师生感情的桥梁。在作业中教师可以觉察到学生的思想和自主学习情况，从评语中学生也能领悟出教师对他是否关心、有信心和责任心。因此我们要充分利用作业评语加深师生情感交流。评语言辞恳切，切中要害；或热情鼓励、或委婉告诫……始终使学生保持清醒的头脑、强烈的兴趣、昂扬的斗志，激励并坚定他们“青出于蓝而胜于蓝”的信念。通过评语，教师尽可把祝福、问候、关切、激励、真诚、信任之情化作甘甜的泉水，去滋润学生的心田，引起师生教与学的共鸣，达到教与学两者的和谐与统一。

例如在节假日或某学生生日前，教师可以给予学生一些祝愿语：

●Merry Christmas!／Happy New Year!／Enjoy yourself in the coming holidays!／Happy birthday1／Many happy returns!

又如某个学生因为生病缺课作业完成得很糟糕，教师就要说一些安慰的话：

●Lingling,you have made a few mistakes in your work.I know that is because you were absent...I think it is only natural.Don't lose heart.I am ready to help you.再如某个学生因为考试不及格失去信心，教师就要说一些激励的话：

●Iam sorry to hear that you didn't pass the exam.I hope you are not too disappointed.I want to cheer you up with the saying“Failure is the mother of success”.I nope to see much improvement in your future studies.五、作业评语形式要丰富多彩

作业评语不仅仅是对作业本身进行评价，也可以包括学习和生活的各个方面，它的语言形式更是丰富多彩，千变万化，既可以是一个词或一个短语，也可以是一句话、一个段落或一则格言。例如：

A一个词：

●Great!／Perfect!／Good!／Wonderful!／Correct!／Excellent!B.短语：

●Well done!／Neat and tidy!

C.句型：

●That's OK!

●What a good job you have done!●Now you can do better than before.●Your handwriting is excellent!●Keep it up.●Your English will become better if you work harder.D.段落：

●Although you have not been successful,you have done better than ever.Success belongs to the diligent learners.I am sure you will make more and more progress if you keep on practising your spoken English.E.格言：

●Practice makes perfect.●Where there is a will,there is a way.●Awillfulman willhave his way.●Failure is the only highroad to success.●Diligence is the mother of good fortune／good luck.●He who does not advance falls backward.●The water wears away stones.当然写好评语的方式和要求还有许多，教师不仅要不断提高自己的英语书面表达能力，更重要的是深入研究学生的心理特点、思想情绪、个人爱好、学生习惯及英语水平等，以便言之有理、以理服人，这样才能写出激励人的好评语，不断提高学生的书面表达能力，通过作业评语加强师生间的交流，促进学生各方面协调发展。

For Top-Level Student: This student listened attentively, took careful notes and completed the task within the given time in the past semester.And he/she demonstrated a strong self-study ability.Therefore , the student has the highest scores in English examinations for free times consecutively.Besides being academically outstanding, the student also exhibits a shini8ng personality, easy to get along with.Also, he/she has been actively involved in social practice and activities.Everything taken into consideration, the student is an excellent student with a strong potential to develop.You've improved a lot.I'm proud of you.It's good to be correct.It's also important to be creative.You are quiet and sensible，having dependable style of study，you always study hard and never give it up，even though you face some difficulties。You climb the knowledgeable peak all the time。I believe，you will get to the peak and enjoy the beautiful scenery soon after。

You are really doing a good job in your English.Your English is excellent, yon have achieved great success, of course this is because you work hard and you have interest in English.I hope you can continue to work hard and I believe you’ll be the best.I’ll be proud of you!

You are an honest student, respect the teachers, get along well with your classmates.you always take pride in our class and often do many things that can make our unit better.When you are in class, you always concentrate on what teachers say, this is the reason why you can get so good grades in each exam.However, I think you 5

should pay more attention to the way you study, and then I believe you can get better grades.Keep on!

The student is very careful in class.He takes notes and completed the homework with in the given time.Therefore, the student has got the highest score in English exam.At the same time the student has very good behavior.He is easy to get along with.He also respects teachers and the other students very much.Everything taken into consideration, the student is an excellent student.You study really hard and always eager to learn more.This is a good habit.You should keep it, and this can be helpful to you in all of your life.You can get good grades in exams and we know it the result of your hard working.But as a top student in our class, don’t you think it is better to help others so that the other students can make progress as you do?

You are an honest student, respect the teachers, get along well with your classmates.you always take pride in our class and often do many things that can make our unit better.When you are in class, you always concentrate on what teachers say, this is the reason why you can get so good grades in each exam.However, I think you should pay more attention to the way you study, and then I believe you can get better grades.Keep on!

You study really hard and always eager to learn more.This is a good habit.You should keep it, and this can be helpful to you in all of your life.You can get good grades in exams and we know it the result of your

hard working.But as a top student in our class, don’t you think it is better to help others so that the other students can make progress as you do?

This student has done a good job in this term!He/She listened and took note carefully in class, and finished homework on time.At the same time.He/she has very good behavior.He/She gets very well on his/her classmates.Everything taken into consideration this student is an excellent student.Because of your hard work and diligence, you really achieve great success.You deserve it!Especially, you are so active in my class that I’m so proud of you!Besides, you can take part in almost all the activities in this class, and you can get on well with your classmates.That’s really good.Hope you can keep on going like this and make more progress.The student can listen attentively, take notes carefully, and complete tasks within the given time.He knows good methods of study and has a strong sense of self-study., so he got a very good grade in this exam.Besides the good habits in study, he can get along well with his classmates and respects teachers.Being active in school activities and getting much practice, he is a really fully-developed and excellent student.First-Class students have a very firm foundation of English.They remember all words taught in Junior Middle School.And they find it is easy to learn new words in Senior Middle School.They are very familiar with the grammar.They know how to make correct sentences.As to the four skills---listening, speaking, reading and writing, most of them find listening, reading and writing are easier than speaking.They can understand my words, read different sort of passages and write coherent writings, but they feel hard to express themselves orally.As we all know, you are sharp in mind, diligent and never waste any time.That is why you can be always in the first rank.In your daily life, you are always ready to help others, which plays a leading role in our class.However, I also wish you could be more optimistic and active in your life.If so, you will face a brighter future.For Medium-Level Students: Academically, the student has a solid foundation in basic subjects, like Chinese, maths, physics and chemistry, but still needs to improve in arts subjects, like history and geography.especially interested in English, the student has won first prize n English Speaking contest.Morally, the student seems to have been well educated in family values, knowing specifically how respect others.In social practice, the student is always participating all possible activities, hence developing strong communication skills.Generally the students is likely to be an around talent.Do you know？the teacher likes you，because you listen to the teacher carefully，treating homework carefully too。Meanwhile，classmates like you because of your good temper and help。but you are so shy and not active in class。In fact，your answers are always pretty good Every time，you should believe yourself。New term is coming，the teacher hopes to see your raising hand，you can do it，can you？

You are so simple and kind-hearted that everyone in the class can get well along with you.Working hard in the main subjects makes you get more successful than before.But I also wish you could concentrate more attention on the subjects that you are bad in.what’s more, be optimistic and confident.You'd better be more careful.Your work is quite good except for a few......Second-Class students have a relatively good foundation of English.They can remember most of the words taught in Junior middle school, and find it is a little bit difficult to learn new words.They are not very familiar with the grammar.Sometimes they make obvious grammar mistakes.As to the four skills, they know how to read and how to write a readable writing, but they feel hard to do the listening exercise, and even harder to speak English with others.You have made progress in English.Word harder and I believe you mill be good at English.If you have any questions, please come to me for help I’d like to help your English.I hope you can become a top student.I believe yon can!

The student has some foundation in English.He is also very careful in class.He can finish the homework within the given time.The student seems to have been.Well education in traditional family values, knowing how to inspect others.He is also very active in all possible activities, Generally speaking, the student is fairly good.You are a so kind student that you would like to help anyone that is in trouble.You study quite hard in class and the teachers are all impressed.However, I think，to some extent, you are no hard-working enough;this is why some teachers are not satisfied with your homework or grades.Do hope you can get great progress in writing and study harder.Never give up and try hard, you will see a different world.You are so quiet in our class that it is very hard for teachers or your classmates to pay attention to you;although we know you yourself would like to communicate with us more.Maybe it is because you are too shy, when you have problems, you don’t ask for help as other students do.I think this is the reason why you can not get better grades in your subjects.So here I’d like to give you a suggestion: when you are in trouble, do ask us for help, let’s do better.You are a so kind student that you would like to help anyone that is in trouble.You study quite hard in class and the teachers are all impressed.However, I think, to some extent, you are no hard-working enough;this is why some teachers are not satisfied with your homework or grades.Do hope you can get great progress in writing and study harder.Never give up and try hard, you will see a different world.You are so quiet in our class that it is very hard for teachers or your classmates to pay attention to you;although we know you yourself would like to communicate with us more.Maybe it is because you are too shy, when you have problems, you don’t ask for help as other students do.I think this is the reason why you can not get better grades in your subjects.So here I’d like to give you a suggestion: when you are in trouble, do ask us for help, let’s do better.This student has a solid foundation in English.He/She is also hard—working in class and can finish homework within the given time.Generally speaking, the student is fairly good.One to your hard working.You really did a good job in your lessons.And you can join in the activities in this class.Your pronunciation is really so good that even I envied you.It’s good for you to make friends with the people around you.In a word.You’re quite good at your lessons.And you will get more progress if you can be more active and more diligent on your studies.By the may, It’s very good for your health to coming studies with pleasures.Wish you have a good time next semester!

The student can attentively obey the school and class rules.He has been listening carefully in this semester.He is interested in some science subjects, such as physics, math and chemistry.But he has weak subjects, such as geography and history.He treats his teachers and classmates politely.Therefore, if he can make progress in his teak subjects, he will be an excellent student.For Low-level students: In studies, the student is somewhat behind others, especially in science subjects, such as maths , physics and chemistry.And the student ,due to weak memory ,can’t remember the required English words.Therefore, he /she needs urgently to improve in basic knowledge.In morality, the student observes all the rules issued by the school authorities, but sometimes breaks class regulations.In a word, the student needs care and help both academically and psychologically.11

I'm sure you can do your work better next time.You have done your work better this time.I believe that nothing is impossible as long as you work hard.I like your handwriting very much although there some mistakes here.I'm sure you can correct them.You are an active student.Maybe other students envy your energy and your diligence.Sometimes, you are not strict with yourself, so you break the school rules unconsciously.In my opinion, if you can be stricter with yourself, you would become much better.Don’t lose heart, if you try, you are surely better.You are so talented in sports.and all of us are pride in what you did in the sports meeting.Maybe the training has taken too much of your energy, so When you are in class, it seems that you always want to sleep.Like that, can you get good result? We believe you have tried, but after your hard work, you didn’t see what you expected to see.So you gave up.So, if you share part of your energy in studying, I believe you can do quite better.Do not lose heart;we are all here with you.You are an active student.Maybe other students envy your energy and your diligence.Sometimes, you are not strict with yourself, so you break the school rules unconsciously.In my opinion, if you can be stricter with yourself, you would become much better.Don’t lose heart, if you try, you are surely better.You are so talented in sports.and all of us are pride in what you did in the sports meeting.Maybe the training has taken too much of your energy, so

When you are in class, it seems that you always want to sleep.Like that, can you get good result? We believe you have tried, but after your hard work, you didn’t see what you expected to see.So you gave

up.So, if you share part of your energy in studying, I believe you can do quite better.Do not lose heart;we are all here with you.The student is somewhat behind.Maybe he is somewhat lazy.“Perhaps his/her English foundation is not good.Therefore, he/she needs to improve basic knowledge.In a word, this student need to be more careful and to try his/her best to study.Your handwriting is really beautiful.I like it!You can take part in the acclivities in this class.That good!Besides.You’re quite good at making friend, with the people who around you.That’s great!But I hope you can pay more attention to your studies, especially those science subjects, such as physics.math and so on.And I’m sure you will and you can make progress on your lessons through hard work.The most important advice for you.Believing in yourself.You’re the best!

Your English is not very good, but I think if you work hard, you’ll mode much progress in English.Believe in yourself.I believe your English will be good if you work hard and come to ask me for help if you need.Don’t be afraid to ask questions I’d like to help you.Be active in class and you can hone chance to practice English!Remember practice makes perfect!

The student is behind especially in subjects like maths, physics and chemistry.In fact, the student has gook memory.But he is lazy.Perhaps he lost interest.But he is lazy.Perhaps he lost interest in English.Therefore he needs to improve in basic knowledge.Sometimes the student breaks class rules.In a word, the student needs care and help in every way.To some extent, the student is behind, especially in his subjects like math, physics, chemistry and English.Being lack of practice and good methods, he can’t work out the problems in his poor subjects.And because of his weak memory, he can hardly remember the English words and sentences.But he can keep the rules, respect the teachers, have good manners and take part in the school activities actively.So he just needs more care and instructions in study.You are a lovely and innocent boy。Although you are so active in class，your grade is just so-so。you are enthusiastic，getting along well with classmates，but you love fun and games，that effects your study。If you can deal with study and play well，you will be a great boy。

Third-Class students don't have a good foundation of English.They have forgotten many words taught in Junior middle school, even easy ones.And they are not familiar with the grammar.So they feel very hard to learn English in Senior middle school.As to the four skills, most of them can read, but feel very difficult on writing, listening, and speaking.As is known to everyone, you are smart and lovely.And you are good at drawing.Though you have to admit that you are lazy, which let your parents and teachers down.Why not make the most of your intelligence and the gift for drawing? You can do it!Never waste your time from now on, or you will regret someday in the future.

第三篇：英语老师听课评语

导语：英语是国际指定的官方语言，也是世界上最广泛的第一语言，也是欧盟以及许多国际组织以及英联邦国家的官方语言。以下是英语老师听课评语，希望能够帮助到大家！

英语老师听课评语一

我觉得这节课很成功，它较好地体现了课程的三维目标，具体我将从以下四个方面进行点评：

第一大点：教学目的。

这堂课的教学目的明确，教学效果好。

1.学生在课堂上用英语表达旅游景点和名胜古迹，培养了用英语思维的能力;

2.课文阅读教学目标如scanning、skimming 都能很好地完成;

3激发了学生对祖国美好河山的热爱。

第二大点：教学过程和方法。

1.整堂课的教学设计符合高中学生的实际和教学内容的需要，教学各环节过渡自然，从开头Free talk导入课文，通过图片启发提问到Quiz测试，再到词汇Paraphrase 和Reading阅读、Dialogue对话、Discussion讨论，完全符合学生认知水平;

2.设计有层次、有深度，特别是反馈形式多样，可见该教师花费了不少心思，如小测试、词汇解释、提问、填空、对话、预测等设计有坡度，并且都是为了一个共同的教学目标。

3.教学方法处处体现以学生为本,如注重对学生的语言只是检测(词汇学习时注重部分学生的单词拼写能力), 讨论时分为上海组、漓江组、香港组、长城组，充分尊重学生意愿和个性差异。

第三大点：学生学习情况。

因教师的教学设计有新意，学生始终保持良好学习心态。在获得知识的同时，思维能力也得到了锻炼，我粗略统计了一下，该堂课中，学生自主活动时间达2/3左右，学习兴趣高涨，课堂气氛热烈，参与面广，体现出学生乐于探索、乐于参与的精神，如有一位学生自己还准备了图片，准备补充，真可谓意犹未荆

第四大点：教师素养方面。

1.教师口语流利,发音标准,语言基本功扎实,可见教师对教材吃的很透彻,备课充分;

2.教师教态自然,有时配合手势,有亲和力,教师指令明确、到位，善于启发学生，因人而异，因材施教;

3.教学亮点:教师的教学机智，特别是善于抓住细节，处处体现二期课改目标，以学生为本，与学生“零”距离，如开始有一学生答不出，教师并未放弃，后经过反复启发诱导，学生答出landscape一词;再如一学生说的英语谚语“He who doesn’t reach the Great Wall is not a true man.”极好，但很多学生并没在意，教师故意装作没听清楚，却故意让学生再复述一遍，还有一学生答出rainbow一词，教师立刻表扬“imaginative”等等，所有这些，都给学生以极大的鼓励和信心，这正是该教师最成功之处，非常值得广大一线教师学习。所以说教师的理念十分重要，因为它决定了教学行为。

英语老师听课评语二

在课堂教学中表现出了扎实的教学基本功和丰富的教学经验，并展示出了教师关爱学生、循循善诱等方面的教学特点。特别是在知识的引入过程中，十分注重启发学生思维，并在这一过程中努力提高学生的想象力和益友语言知识的运用能力。

教学环节设计安排清晰明了，过渡自然。能结合学校分组分享教学法和英语教学的学科特点，有效开展分组活动。

学生能够积极参与，并能充分运用所学语言知识进行英语表达； 合理运用教学资源方面做得比较好。教师能组织学生开展教学活动。每个教学环节在开展教学活动的时候，能够清晰准确地交代教学任务。

认真备课，精心进行教学设计，课堂思路清晰，教学目标明确。教师关注问题导入，学生积极主动参与，课堂气氛活跃。教师教学目标明确，教学过程思路清晰，传授知识的量适中，突出重点，教学目标达成。加强情感交流，注重教学互动。点评学生把握很好。引人自然、合理，学生容易接受。

教学过程由浅到深，易于学生循序渐进地掌握知识点。将语法点与例句相结合，生动形象，从而达到事半功倍的效果。教师的板书思维严密，逻辑性强，浅显易懂。便于带动学生的思维跟着教师走。教师给学生更多的鼓励，培养了学生的学习兴趣。

师生互动活跃，从而带动了课堂的学习气氛。充分利用教学资源，计算机辅助教学模式，有效的提高了课堂效率。层层深入，逐步加深学生对课文理解。

小组讨论，不仅可以拂去阅读时的沉闷，同时可以调动学生积极性，活跃课堂气氛，开阔学生思维，启发学生自主思考问题能力。

这节课属于任务型教学，整节课老师与学生关系融洽，互相配合，默契度非常之高。老师引导学生积极参与教学活动，完成教学任务。老师熟悉新课标标准，面向全体同学，在达到要求的基础上，让不同学生有不同发展，同时也以学生为中心，整节课利用活动引导学生进行探讨学习，让学生积极主动的配合课程。

这节课属于任务型教学，这节课属于任务型教学，整节课流程流畅，任务直接斜街非常好，学生清晰明白老师的教学流程，学习任务。可见老师的教学设计的科学性，也看出老师的教学专业素质高。整节课有活动在支撑，自始至终的活动教学，梯度有序的学习过程，自始至终的形成性评价，有效的奖励，学生积极参与展示，培养创新思维能力的积极尝试。

第四篇：小学生赞美英语老师评语

小学英语教师评语

现在，在英语课堂上用英语教英语已成为共识。但在与学生通过书面表达方式进行交流时，多数教师往往只看到评语的评价功能，却忽略评语的语言示范功能与交际功能。例如，很多英语教师在批改作业时，除了打上一些“错”或“对”的符号外，鲜有能像中文教师那样，在学生的作业本子上写上自己对学生作业比较具体和明确的看法或意见的。其实，教师的评语，是对学生英语书面表达能力和自主学习情况的评价和指导。我们用英语授课，在培训学生的口语方面已“身先士卒”，做出了表率，让学生在英语交际的海洋里学习游泳。现在，若我们用英语写评语，就可以使学生在书面语的培训方面也同样“下水”了，让学生在真实的英语交际环境中，书面语能力也得到提高。实际上，教师为学生的英语作业写评语，不仅有利于提高学生的英语书面交际能力，而且有利于促进师生的知识、思想和情感的交流，还有利于提高学生自主学习的积极性。下面笔者就如何写英语评语的问题，谈一点看法和体会。1.适应性

首先，给学生写作业评语必须具有适应性：教师写的评语是给学生看的，所以必须使用学生能看得懂的英语来写，要切合学生的实际，符合学生的个性心理发展。也就是说教师在学生作业上的评语所使用的词汇和语法知识不能过高或过低于学生的现有水平。其次，应做到循序渐进：由简到繁、由易到难、由一般化到个性化。这两条是写好英语作业评语的前提。当然评语中偶尔可以有几个生词。

有时候学生通过上下文的猜测就能理解，或者通过查阅字典来解决也能对学生有好处。这样做，有时甚至还能起到“努力一跳，搞到桃子”的促进作用。例如： ·will you please do you work better next time? ·well，your handwriting is very good.·wonderful，your english is very good and your written answerareclearthroughout.byhardworkandconstant efforts.·you are an excellent student who has a natural gift for language.·l’dlike to see your development of your writtenand oralskills inenglish.2.及时性

这里说的及时应有两个意义：(l)对学生的作业及时反馈。首先，学生在家里独立做作业，他们的学习节奏、学习方式也许各不相同，这样，教师的及时反馈就显得很重要。也就是说教师如尽早地批改学生的作业，就能及时了解学生的学习进步状况及学习效果，以便掌握情况进行指导。其次，学生在做作业时，会遇到这样那样一些特殊的问题和想法，他们在急切地盼望着老师的评价和指导，所以，教师应急学生之所急，及时地给予恰当的评价。(2)及时地应用学生新近学到的一些语法知识和词汇来写评语。这样做有助于学生对新知识加深理解和强化记忆，最起码也可以让学生看到一次知识运用的实例。例如：

·you are great.i’mproud of you.·you’ve made fabulous progress and i do not doubt that you’ll succeed.·wonderful!i appreciate what you have done in your exercise-book and believe you’ll be successful in your english study.· i’ll be glad to see that you will do your homework better next time.·this is the best i’ve seen today.· the harder you work，the sooner you’ll improve.3.鼓励尝试，努力让每一位学生都走向成功

现代教育心理学认为：成就动机能够很好地激发人的学习动机。学生们都是渴望成功的，成功的动机是一种巨大的情绪力量，它能使学生产生主动求知的心理冲动，这在做作业中也会表现出来。因此，教师在给学生布置作业时应注

意尽量少一些千遍一律的抄写题，多一些可适当自由发挥的题目或问题，让不同程度和有不同爱好的学生都有自己发挥想象的空间和提出不同观点的机会，然后不失时机地给予表扬或鼓励的评语。这样，可以使每个学生都有成功的机会。例如，在教学英语有关食品方面的内容时，我们布置的作业大可不必让学生抄写vegetable,beef,rice, tomato, bean等等英语单词，可以提出一些实际问题让他们去解决、去回答： · what’s yourfavouritefood? what chinese diet do you like? what western diet do you like? what do you like for lunch? what kinds of food do you usually have everyday??然后再根据学生的口答情况，教师给予不同的表扬或鼓励： ·i agree with you that we should eat healthy food and the chinese food isthe healthiest in the world.i marvel at the maturity of such a young child as you.4.真情感动学生

作业不仅仅是师生间教学信息的互相反馈，而且是联系和沟通师生感情的桥梁。在作业中，学生的思想和自主学习情况，细心的教师都能觉察到。同样，从教师的评语中学生也能领悟出教师对他是否真诚、有信心和有责任心。教师对学生的努力一定要有切合实际的鼓励;对他们取得的成绩、进步，要在评语中表

现出发自内心的赞赏和喜悦;对学生作业中的过错和疏忽一定要诚心诚意地以恰当的方式指出;对于一些成绩落后的学生要有同情心和责任心。赞扬要恰如其分，批评要适当委婉，重在鼓励。例如：

·although you werelate in achieving, you have caught up well with your studies.i would like to see you getting fast development of your written and oral skills in english.· you have don your work better this time.i believe that nothing is impossible as long as you work hard.· practicemakes perfect.i’d like to see you participating more in class activities.·it is the same in studying as in eating, he who doesit isnothewhoseesitdone.·as fire tries gold，so does adversity try courage.nobody knows what he can do till he has tried.you have made a good start.not only energy，but also persistence is necessary to success.有道是“精诚所至，金石为开”，教师的热情和真诚必然会在一定程度上引起学生的思想转折和学习成绩的飞跃。

5.平等地与学生开展评论性的讨论

我们应尊重学生的个性、人格和创新精神。教师应以学生的学习伙伴、益友的身份介入学生的自主学习中，而不要总以“长者”的姿态居高临下地指手划脚，总以教训的语气评头论足;教师应以平等的态度与学生开展评论性的讨论，营造一种平等、自由的学术气氛，让学生与教师能在作业和评语中自由地交流思想，让学生拥有创造性地运用所学知识的机会和自由。例如：

·nothing is more precious than time.do you agree with me? would you like to tell me your own opinions and your timetable? · what do you think about this? is that right? it is only a suggestion.i’d like to see you persisting with your opinions if you’re right.·the great use of a school education is not only to teach you things but to teach you the art of learning.do you think so? 6.因材施教，授人以渔

贯彻素质教育的思想，把学生的综合素质作为衡量“材”的标准，把传授知识当成是为学生的多方面发展服务的，是为开启学生的潜能、培养学生的思维方式和能力服务的。在写评语时，除了努力帮助学生提高文化知识外，还应承认学生个体之间学习能力、掌握知识程度的差别，应该因材施教、授人以渔。保护那

些学习成绩落后的、处于不利条件下的学生个体的继续发展权利，让他们也能得到继续发展。在批改他们的作业时，温和地指出错误的同时，指出他的优点以资鼓励，那怕是一丁点的优点。例如：

·where there is a will, there’s a way.·itisnot helps but obstacles that make a man.· it is a rule never to be forgotten that whatever strikes strongly should be described while the first impression remains fresh upon the mind.·your answers shou you have real ability in the course, and you are developing increasing depth of thought and clarity of expression inyour written work.but there are some grammar mistakes in it.· your work is a marvel of neatness and order.i am sure there is nothing difficult for us to learn.if we learn it, the difficult thing will be easy;if we don’t，the easy thing will be difficult.don’t you think so ? · you have given a lot of facts on thewhole.that is good.if theyhad been putina more logical order，the whole essay would have been cleaner.当然，写好英语作业评语的要求还远远不止以上几点，教师不仅需要不断提高自己的英语书面表达能力，更重要的是要深人研究学生的心理特点、思想情绪、个人爱好、课外实践活动、学习习惯以及英语程度等等，以便言之有物、以理服人、因材施教。总之，给学生写评语既是一件艰苦而又有意义的事，又是一门学问，写得好会给学生培养和提高书面交际能力带来很大的帮助，其作用不可低估。

小学教师对学生的评价语言

评价语言是每位教师在每一节课上都会涉及到的，那么我们如何做到准确的运用评价语言，多样化的使用在课堂当中，这对我们教师来说是一个极大的考验。评价语言切忌重复，因此为老师们准备了三类的评价语言，以供参考： 1.回答正确的时候，可选择以下几种语言对学生表示肯定。ok.right.that’s right!you’re right.you’re correct.2.对学生的赞美，可选择以下几种语言进行准确、丰富的评价。good!very good!great!wonderful!perfect!super!excellent!remarkable!marvelous!magnificent!fantastic!terrific!well done!nice work!good job!3.对学生的鼓励，可选择以下几种语言建立学生的自信。try again.try harder.have a try, please!it doesn’t matter.i think you can do it better.you are improving.you’re making progress.you’re on your way.you really tried.i can see your progress.篇三：谈小学英语教师评语

谈小学英语教师评语

现在，在英语课堂上用英语教英语已成为共识。但在与学生通过书面表达方式进行交流时，多数往往 只看到的评价功能，却忽略的语言示范功能与交际功能。例如，很多英语在批改作业时，除了打上一些“错”或“对”的符号外，鲜有能像中文那样，在学生的作业本子上写上自己对学生作业比较具体和明确的看法或意见的。其实，的，是对学生英语书面表达能力和自主学习情况的评价和指导。我们用英语授课，在培训学生的口语方面已“身先士卒”，做出了表率，让学生在英语交际的海洋里学习游泳。现在，若我们用英语写，就可以使学生在书面语的培训方面也同样“下水”了，让学生在真实的英语交际环境中，书面语能力也得到提高。实际上，为学生的英语作业写，不仅有利于提高学生的英语书面交际能力，而且有利于促进师生的知识、思想和情感的交流，还有利于提高学生自主学习的积极性。下面笔者就如何写英语的问题，谈一点看法和体会。1．适应性

首先，给学生写作业必须具有适应性：写的是给学生看的，所以必须使用学生能看得懂的英语来写，要切合学生的实际，符合学生的个性心理发展。也就是说在学生作业上的所使用的词汇和语法知识不能过高或过低于学生的现有水平。其次，应做到循序渐进：由简到繁、由易到难、由一般化到个性化。这两条是写好英语作业的前提。当然中偶尔可以有几个生词。有时候学生通过上下文的猜测就能理解，或者通过查阅字典来解决也能对学生有好处。这样做，有时甚至还能起到“努力一跳，搞到桃子”的促进作用。例如：

·will you please do you work better next time？

·well，your handwriting is very good．

·wonderful，your english is very good and your written answerareclearthroughout． byhardworkandconstant efforts．

·you are an excellent student who has a natural gift for language．

·l’dlike to see your development of your writtenand oralskills inenglish.2．及时性

这里说的及时应有两个意义：（l）对学生的作业及时反馈。首先，学生在家里独立做作业，他们的学习节奏、学习方式也许各不相同，这样，的及时反馈就显得很重要。也就是说如尽早地批改学生的作业，就能及时了解学生的学习进步状况及学习效果，以便掌握情况进行指导。其次，学生在做作业时，会遇到这样那样一些特殊的问题和想法，他们在急切地盼望着老师的评价和指导，所以，应急学生之所急，及时地给予恰当的评价。（2）及时地应用学生新近学到的一些语法知识和词汇来写。这样做有助于学生对新知识加深理解和强化记忆，最起码也可以让学生看到一次知识运用的实例。例如：

·you are great ．i’mproud of you．

·you’ve made fabulous progress and i do not doubt that you’ll succeed．

·wonderful!i appreciate what you have done in your exercise－book and believe you’ll be successful in your english study．

· i’ll be glad to see that you will do your homework better next time．

·this is the best i’ve seen today.· the harder you work，the sooner you’ll improve.有下划线的是形容词或副词的比较级和最高级形式，假如学生们刚学过这类知识，及时地给他们写这类批语就能取得很好的效果。3．鼓励尝试，努力让每一位学生都走向成功

现代心理学认为：成就动机能够很好地激发人的学习动机。学生们都是渴望成功的，成功的动机是一种巨大的情绪力量，它能使学生产生主动求知的心理冲动，这在做作业中也会表现出来。因此，在给学生布置作业时应注意尽量少一些千遍一律的抄写题，多一些可适当自由发挥的题目或问题，让不同程度和有不同爱好的学生都有自己发挥想象的空间和提出不同观点的机会，然后不失时机地给予表扬或鼓励的。这样，可以使每个学生都有成功的机会。例如，在英语有关食品方面的内容时，我们布置的作业大可不必让学生抄写vegetable, beef,rice, tomato, bean等等英语单词，可以提出一些实际问题让他们去解决、去回答：

· what’s yourfavouritefood？ what chinese diet do you like？ what western diet do you like？ what do you like for lunch？ what kinds of food do you usually have everyday?„然后再根据学生的口答情况，给予不同的表扬或鼓励：

·i agree with you that we should eat healthy food and the chinese food isthe healthiest in the world． i marvel at the maturity of such a young child as you． 4．真情感动学生

作业不仅仅是师生间信息的互相反馈，而且是联系和沟通师生感情的桥梁。在作业中，学生的思想和自主学习情况，细心的都能觉察到。同样，从的中学生也能领悟出对他是否真诚、有信心和有责任心。对学生的努力一定要有切合实际的鼓励；对他们取得的成绩、进步，要在中表

现出发自内心的赞赏和喜悦；对学生作业中的过错和疏忽一定要诚心诚意地以恰当的方式指出；对于一些成绩落后的学生要有同情心和责任心。赞扬要恰如其分，批评要适当委婉，重在鼓励。例如：although you werelate in achieving, you have caught up well with your studies.i would like to see you getting fast development of your written and oral skills in english．

· you have don your work better this time．i believe that nothing is impossible as long as you work hard ．

· practicemakes perfect．i’d like to see you participating more in class activities．

·it is the same in studying as in eating, he who doesit isnothewhoseesitdone．

·as fire tries gold，so does adversity try courage.nobody knows what he can do till he has tried.you have made a good start．not only energy，but also persistence is necessary to success．

有道是“精诚所至，金石为开”，的热情和真诚必然会在一定程度上引起学生的思想转折和学习成绩的飞跃。5．平等地与学生开展评论性的讨论

我们应尊重学生的个性、人格和创新精神。应以学生的学习伙伴、益友的身份介入学生的自主学习中，而不要总以“长者”的姿态居高临下地指手划脚，总以教训的语气评头论足；应以平等的态度与学生开展评论性的讨论，营造一种平等、自由的学术气氛，让学生与能在作业和中自由地交流思想，让学生拥有创造性地运用所学知识的机会和自由。例如：

·nothing is more precious than time.do you agree with me? would you like to tell me your own opinions and your timetable? · what do you think about this? is that right？ it is only a suggestion． i’d like to see you persisting with your opinions if you’re right.·the great use of a school education is not only to teach you things but to teach you the art of learning.do you think so? 6．因材施教，授人以渔

贯彻素质的思想，把学生的综合素质作为衡量“材”的标准，把传授知识当成是为学生的多方面发展服务的，是为开启学生的潜能、培养学生的思维方式和能力服务的。在写时，除了努力帮助学生提高文化知识外，还应承认学生个体之间学习能力、掌握知识程度的差别，应该因材施教、授人以渔。保护那 些学习成绩落后的、处于不利条件下的学生个体的继续发展权利，让他们也能得到继续发展。在批改他们的作业时，温和地指出错误的同时，指出他的优点以资鼓励，那怕是一丁点的优点。例如：

·where there is a will, there’s a way.·itisnot helps but obstacles that make a man.· it is a rule never to be forgotten that whatever strikes strongly should be described while the first impression remains fresh upon the mind.·your answers shou you have real ability in the course, and you are developing increasing depth of thought and clarity of expression inyour written work． but there are some grammar mistakes in it.· your work is a marvel of neatness and order.i am sure there is nothing difficult for us to learn.if we learn it, the difficult thing will be easy;if we don’t，the easy thing will be difficult.don’t you think so ？

· you have given a lot of facts on thewhole．that is good． if theyhad been putina more logical order，the whole essay would have been cleaner．篇四：小学英语教师给学生写的评语

小学英语教师评语 现在，在英语课堂上用英语教英语已成为共识。但在与学生通过书面表达方式进行交流时，多数教师往往只看到评语的评价功能，却忽略评语的语言示范功能与交际功能。例如，很多英语教师在批改作业时，除了打上一些“错”或“对”的符号外，鲜有能像中文教师那样，在学生的作业本子上写上自己对学生作业比较具体和明确的看法或意见的。其实，教师的评语，是对学生英语书面表达能力和自主学习情况的评价和指导。我们用英语授课，在培训学生的口语方面已“身先士卒”，做出了表率，让学生在英语交际的海洋里学习游泳。现在，若我们用英语写评语，就可以使学生在书面语的培训方面也同样“下水”了，让学生在真实的英语交际环境中，书面语能力也得到提高。实际上，教师为学生的英语作业写评语，不仅有利于提高学生的英语书面交际能力，而且有利于促进师生的知识、思想和情感的交流，还有利于提高学生自主学习的积极性。下面笔者就如何写英语评语的问题，谈一点看法和体会。1．适应性

首先，给学生写作业评语必须具有适应性：教师写的评语是给学生看的，所以必须使用学生能看得懂的英语来写，要切合学生的实际，符合学生的个性心理发展。也就是说教师在学生作业上的评语所使用的词汇和语法知识不能过高或过低于学生的现有水平。其次，应做到循序渐进：由简到繁、由易到难、由一般化到个性化。这两条是写好英语作业评语的前提。当然评语中偶尔可以有几个生词。

有时候学生通过上下文的猜测就能理解，或者通过查阅字典来解决也能对学生有好处。这样做，有时甚至还能起到“努力一跳，搞到桃子”的促进作用。例如： ·will you please do you work better next time？

·well，your handwriting is very good．

·wonderful，your english is very good and your written answerareclearthroughout． byhardworkandconstant efforts．

·you are an excellent student who has a natural gift for language．

·l’dlike to see your development of your writtenand oralskills inenglish.2．及时性

这里说的及时应有两个意义：（l）对学生的作业及时反馈。首先，学生在家里独立做作业，他们的学习节奏、学习方式也许各不相同，这样，教师的及时反馈就显得很重要。也就是说教师如尽早地批改学生的作业，就能及时了解学生的学习进步状况及学习效果，以便掌握情况进行指导。其次，学生在做作业时，会遇到这样那样一些特殊的问题和想法，他们在急切地盼望着老师的评价和指导，所以，教师应急学生之所急，及时地给予恰当的评价。（2）及时地应用学生新近学到的一些语法知识和词汇来写评语。这样做有助于学生对新知识加深理解和强化记忆，最起码也可以让学生看到一次知识运用的实例。例如： ·you are great ．i’mproud of you．

·you’ve made fabulous progress and i do not doubt that youll succeed．

·wonderful!i appreciate what you have done in your exercise－book and believe youll be successful in your english study．

· i’ll be glad to see that you will do your homework better next time． ·this is the best ive seen today.· the harder you work，the sooner youll improve.有下划线的是形容词或副词的比较级和最高级形式，假如学生们刚学过这类知识，及时地给他们写这类批语就能取得很好的效果。3．鼓励尝试，努力让每一位学生都走向成功

现代教育心理学认为：成就动机能够很好地激发人的学习动机。学生们都是渴望成功的，成功的动机是一种巨大的情绪力量，它能使学生产生主动求知的心理冲动，这在做作业中也会表现出来。因此，教师在给学生布置作业时应注意尽量少一些千遍一律的抄写题，多一些可适当自由发挥的题目或问题，让不同程度和有不同爱好的学生都有自己发挥想象的空间和提出不同观点的机会，然后不失时机地给予表扬或鼓励的评语。这样，可以使每个学生都有成功的机会。例如，在教学英语有关食品方面的内容时，我们布置的作业大可不必让学生抄写vegetable, beef,rice, tomato, bean等等英语单词，可以提出一些实际问题让他们去解决、去回答：

· whats yourfavouritefood？ what chinese diet do you like？ what western diet do you like？ what do you like for lunch？ what kinds of food do you usually have everyday??然后再根据学生的口答情况，教师给予不同的表扬或鼓励： ·i agree with you that we should eat healthy food and the chinese food isthe healthiest in the world． i marvel at the maturity of such a young child as you． 4．真情感动学生

作业不仅仅是师生间教学信息的互相反馈，而且是联系和沟通师生感情的桥梁。在作业中，学生的思想和自主学习情况，细心的教师都能觉察到。同样，从教师的评语中学生也能领悟出教师对他是否真诚、有信心和有责任心。教师对学生的努力一定要有切合实际的鼓励；对他们取得的成绩、进步，要在评语中表

现出发自内心的赞赏和喜悦；对学生作业中的过错和疏忽一定要诚心诚意地以恰当的方式指出；对于一些成绩落后的学生要有同情心和责任心。赞扬要恰如其分，批评要适当委婉，重在鼓励。例如：

·although you werelate in achieving, you have caught up well with your studies.i would like to see you getting fast development of your written and oral skills in english．

· you have don your work better this time．i believe that nothing is impossible as long as you work hard ．

· practicemakes perfect．id like to see you participating more in class activities．

·it is the same in studying as in eating, he who doesit isnothewhoseesitdone．

·as fire tries gold，so does adversity try courage.nobody knows what he can do till he has tried.you have made a good start．not only energy，but also persistence is necessary to success．

有道是“精诚所至，金石为开”，教师的热情和真诚必然会在一定程度上引起学生的思想转折和学习成绩的飞跃。

5．平等地与学生开展评论性的讨论

我们应尊重学生的个性、人格和创新精神。教师应以学生的学习伙伴、益友的身份介入学生的自主学习中，而不要总以“长者”的姿态居高临下地指手划脚，总以教训的语气评头论足；教师应以平等的态度与学生开展评论性的讨论，营造一种平等、自由的学术气氛，让学生与教师能在作业和评语中自由地交流思想，让学生拥有创造性地运用所学知识的机会和自由。例如：

·nothing is more precious than time.do you agree with me? would you like to tell me your own opinions and your timetable? · what do you think about this? is that right？ it is only a suggestion． i’d like to see you persisting with your opinions if youre right.·the great use of a school education is not only to teach you things but to teach you the art of learning.do you think so? 6．因材施教，授人以渔

贯彻素质教育的思想，把学生的综合素质作为衡量“材”的标准，把传授知识当成是为学生的多方面发展服务的，是为开启学生的潜能、培养学生的思维方式和能力服务的。在写评语时，除了努力帮助学生提高文化知识外，还应承认学生个体之间学习能力、掌握知识程度的差别，应该因材施教、授人以渔。保护那 些学习成绩落后的、处于不利条件下的学生个体的继续发展权利，让他们也能得到继续发展。在批改他们的作业时，温和地指出错误的同时，指出他的优点以资鼓励，那怕是一丁点的优点。例如： ·where there is a will, theres a way.·itisnot helps but obstacles that make a man.· it is a rule never to be forgotten that whatever strikes strongly should be described while the first impression remains fresh upon the mind.·your answers shou you have real ability in the course, and you are developing increasing depth of thought and clarity of expression inyour written work． but there are some grammar mistakes in it.· your work is a marvel of neatness and order.i am sure there is nothing difficult for us to learn.if we learn it, the difficult thing will be easy;if we don’t，the easy thing will be difficult.dont you think so ？

· you have given a lot of facts on thewhole．that is good． if theyhad been putina more logical order，the whole essay would have been cleaner．

当然，写好英语作业评语的要求还远远不止以上几点，教师不仅需要不断提高自己的英语书面表达能力，更重要的是要深人研究学生的心理特点、思想情绪、个人爱好、课外实践活动、学习习惯以及英语程度等等，以便言之有物、以理服人、因材施教。总之，给学生写评语既是一件艰苦而又有意义的事，又是一门学问，写得好会给学生培养和提高书面交际能力带来很大的帮助，其作用不可低估。篇五：英文老师评语 coupled with smart you work hard you can achieve very good results.you are a smart little girl, respect teachers, love learning, the classroom often to see your eyes full of aura, and consciously take the initiative to learn more.but when teachers see you operating the scribbled writing on and go to school often say when whispering, can not help but frown a smart girl, the next semester you will not be disappointed teachers, right? if you can set strict demands on themselves, to speak boldly to set their goals high and then some, then the teacher, students will be more like you, it up!你的聪明加上你的勤奋，就能取得很好的成绩。你是一个聪明的小女孩，尊敬师长，爱学习，课堂上常能见到你充满灵气的眼睛，学习上较自觉主动。可是当老师看到你作业本上潦草的字迹和上课经常讲悄悄话时，不禁皱眉了，聪明的女孩，下学期你一定不会让老师失望的，对吗?如果你能严格要求自己，大胆发言，把自己的目标定得再高一些，那么老师、同学会更喜欢你，努力吧!你文文静静，秀气美丽，课堂上总是眨着乌溜溜的眼睛专心地听讲，作业完成得认真又整洁，每次值日你都能有始有终，认真完成，老师真喜欢你。在课堂上积极举手发言，你的思维敏捷，口头表达能力非常出色。但是有一点，无论是说话，还是做事，要提高速度!这是成功的关键!you are a quiet little girl and stable, loving teacher, love the class, courteo-us, learning to consciously take the initiative, excellent results.school actively speak your progress this semester to a maximum.your understanding, too eage-r to help those in difficulties, you are also very hard, learning is always meti--culous, seriously, if you can see more after-school books, to improve their reading ability, more than the accumulation of a good vocabulary, and that your a higher level of performance will be!beautiful when you smile, laugh some more.你是一位文静稳重的小女孩，爱老师、爱班级，讲礼貌，学习自觉主动，成绩优秀。上课积极主动地发言，是你这学期进步最大一项。你善解人意，热心帮助有困难得人，你也很勤奋，学习总是一丝不苟，认真对待，如果你课后能再看些书，提高自己的阅读能力，多积累好的词汇，那你的成绩会更上一层楼的!你笑的时候很美，一定多笑一笑。

你是个聪明、活泼而且非常可爱的小女孩。思维敏捷，学习积极主动。特别使老师高兴的是，你的 英语词汇量 丰富，造句 多么与众不同。

你是个聪明、活泼而且非常可爱的小女孩。思维敏捷，学习积极主动。特别使老师高兴的是，你的 英语词汇量 丰富，造句 多么与众不同，简直棒极了。你是一名聪明、文静而勤奋好学的孩子。学习上能刻苦钻研，课堂上常能听到你那清脆悦耳的回答声;你工作积极，乐意当老师的小助手;成绩总是 那么优秀;平时你总是带着甜甜的笑容，与同学友爱相处。相信你在新的一年里会有更多的收获的!在老师的眼里，你是一位很乖巧可爱的女孩，你的字迹潇洒漂亮。看你平时不多言多语，课堂上你却专心听讲，认真完成作业，课堂上你也 总是 把手举得高高的，让同学听听你那 精彩 的 回答，常常受到同学和老师的赞赏。老师希望你继续努力，你 会得更出色 的!你思维敏捷，想象力丰富，某些问题有自己独到的见解。的确，你很聪明，常问出别人无法想到的问题，多么与众不同。但你好动，有时 不专心，如果能克服缺点，这样的话你一定 会很棒的。

你是一个文静的女孩，默默地吮吸着知识的甘露，学习成绩十分出色，老师喜欢你在知识的海洋里畅游的学习劲头，更愿意 听 到你 流利的英语。

这学期 后半期，你 学习成绩 逐 步提高，只要勤奋，相信你 一定会有更大的收获。

老师想送你一句话： 天下无难事，只怕有心人。困难 是 挡不住勇敢者的脚步 的。你是位聪明又可爱的小男孩，老师好喜欢你上课专心听讲，勤奋好学的劲儿。书写也 越来越漂亮 了，但要记住 学习英语一定要多读多听，注意纠正自己的发音，这样 你才会说得一口流利漂亮的英语。成功的喜悦是辛勤的汗水浇灌出的，而懒惰的人大多一事无成。其实，你是很聪明的孩子。你发现没有，只要勤奋一点，你的听写就会多对一个;只要努力一下，你的字就可以写得漂亮;让脑子多思考一下问题，你就可以得出令人满意的答案，努力吧，你 会有 更大的进步!你有礼貌、聪明、机灵，问题的回答总是很精彩。可是你有时仍贪玩，爱纪律松懈，也让老师失望。好孩子，你那么聪明，要是把更多的心思用在学习上，谁也比不上你。努力吧，老师期待着你更大的进步!你可以成为一名佼佼者 的!你聪明伶俐，思维敏捷。你看，你一认真起来单词、课文一会儿就背到了。但不专心听讲是你最大的缺点，假如你能纠正你的这些不良态度，老师相信，你将是最棒的!努力吧!你是一个聪明机灵的小男孩，只是 在 学习上缺乏积极主动。希望你在学习上多下点功夫。我相信你定能取得好成绩，你说对吗? 老师 能 发现你身上的优点：尊敬老师，聪明机灵，能积极举手回答问题。老师希望你课堂上再专心些，作业本上潦草的字迹再工整一些。你要知道 老师 一直在 期待你的进步。你有些调皮，有些好动，有时也会 挨批评，可在老师的心中，一直认为你是个聪明的孩子。

第五篇：作业评语集锦

英语作文激励性评语

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在一篇教学杂志上看到一些对学生英语作文的激励性评语，觉得不错，摘录如下。

一、宏观性评价

1.整体印象类评语

Super!Excellent!Perfect!Wonderful.Fantastic.Marvelous.采用整体印象类评语对于高中起始阶段的学生有较好的激励作用，但若千篇一律德使用此类评语，就会使学生无法正确认识自己的写作水平，最终导致教师的评语失去应有的作用。

2.规范导知类评语

Beautiful.Clear.Wonderful.Good hand-writing.You'er careful of using pronounciation.Glad to see your improvement in handwriting.I'm expecting clearer/more beautiful hand-writing from you next time.YOu'd better pay more attention to word order.Better be more careful of your spelling.It's important to compose a draft beforhand.3.情感调控类评语

I appreciate your handwriting.You have a good knowledge of English proverbs.You are quite aware of making meaningful sentences.You are richer than others in collecting and using typical sentences an idioms.I'm expecting greater progress from you in writing.Come on.If you need my help, never hesitate to come to me.警句：

Hard work leads to success.Not to advance is to go back.No one is without faults.Keeping is harder than winning.Keep it up.二、微观写作技能方面的评语

1.专项点拨类评语

It's proper to use the proverb in Para.2 Quite clever.You are good at using attributive clauses in your writing.The “struck” sentence is perfectly used.You'd better use “third person” in the first para.It's good to use the past tense in your writing.2.佳句欣赏类评语

教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的符号（如E--Excellent)或标识不同星级等。What a wonderful sentence using “cover”.It's really clever of you to use this beautiful sentence.The inverted sentence is well written.3.谋篇布局类评语

A good beginning.A perfect ending.Well-organized.Perfectly-expanded.The first para.makes a good beginning.The last para.makes a perfect ending.All the points have been covered.It's clever of you to use a topic sentence at the beginning of a para.It's wonderful to use proper conjunctions between sentences.You are good at developing a para.You have made great progress in developing a passage.I am glad to see the sentence conherence in your last para.Better pay more attention to the relationship between sentences.It's really wonderful to start/end your sentences with adverbials.1．批评式评语

统计数据表明了几乎所有的学生明确表示不喜欢这类评语。可是，在实际教学中老师用得最多，而且学生最熟悉的竟然是这样评语。例如：

I am sorry to see you didn’t use your own brain this time.The points in your composition are not clear-cut.Rewrite your composition.How I wish your handwriting were better!那么，是不是学生不愿意老师把他们作文中使用不当的语句或语法错误指出来呢？面谈中，学生解释说他们交作文的目的之一就是想老师帮他们把作文中所出现的问题找出来，以便改正。他们不喜欢老师写评语时采用的方法——严厉的批评。他们认为老师应该改进写评语的方法。不少学生喜欢老师以读者的身份所写的评语。例如，The topic sentence in the first paragraph is “Man is faced up with more and more problems which threaten man’s existence on Earth.” However, what you have written next has not supported the topic sentence.You are required to list at least three problems related to the topic, such as population…

学生的反应：

a．批评式评语极大地挫伤了我们英语写作的兴趣和积极性，因为从评语中我们似乎发现自己不仅英语写作能力差，而且思维方式都有问题。

b．老师似乎想把自己的观点强加给我们，但毕竟我们在写作时表述的应该自己的观点，而不是老师的观点。我们发现有的老师并不愿意让学生写自己的观点。虽说评语内容是正确的，但是语气伤人，我们觉得老师太苛刻。

2．表扬式评语

所有学生表示特别喜欢或喜欢这类评语。可是，我们发现30条评语中真正称得上是表扬式的只有两条。常见的也是含义不太清楚的good, better, best, very good, well done等。就是说这几个简单的表扬式评语学生的反应也是相当不错的。学生说，这至少表明了老师肯定了他们的所写的观点。不过多数学生还是希望老师能指出他们写得好的地方并解释好的原因。例如：Well done—in the second paragraph you have listed all the main measures that have been taken to solve water pollution both in developing and developed countries, which greatly help make your composition more convincing.有一位同学说，每次交完作文，就在期待老师能对作文给予肯定，但是老师很少给作文下赞扬类的评语，他常常感到失望。

学生的反应：

a.表扬式评语表明我们和老师拥有了类似的观点或老师喜欢我们在作文中表达的观点。

b.表明了老师已注意了我们在写作方面有大的进步。为了获得更多的表扬，我们通常会在下次写作时写得更加完整和细致，尽量不出现语法的错误。

c.我们希望老师能给作文一个中肯的评价，好让自己保持对作文的兴趣。3.指点式评语

在指点式评语中老师首先肯定了学生表达的观点，然后用比较委婉的语气提出了自己的看法。学生在修改作文时愿意参考老师的建议，因此修改后的作文内容更加细致完整。这种评语给学生提供了具体的帮助，因为老师在评语中给出了实例或解释，给学生提供了具体详尽的指点。学生知道为什么要修改，怎样修改。学生最喜欢这样的评语：You have done a good job.However, you could make your argument more convincing if you can list two more examples to show the disadvantages that television has.For example, many of the programs now available show violence and scenes harmful to children.学生的反应：

a.老师就作文的主题思想、论点给我们提出了具体的指导。

b.老师并没有直接指责我们，而是用实例指导我们如何修改，这增加了我们的信心。4.命令式评语 学生对这类评语所持的态度是不一致的。特别喜欢或喜欢的学生认为老师如实地指出了存在的问题。不喜欢这类评语的学生认为师一点也不尊重他们的劳动。有时这类评语的内容含糊，学生不知道老师要他们怎样修改作文，例如学生就不喜欢这样的评语：You need to make your argument more convincing.学生的反应：

a.评语的语气太严厉，好像老师越来越不礼貌，但是我们还是感谢老师帮我们把问题找出来。如果老师的语气稍微委婉一些，效果可能会更好些。

b.看了老师的评语，我们感到自己真笨，总是达不到老师提出的要求。评语太抽象，不知道老师希望我们怎么做。

5.商讨式评语

学生一般接受这种评语。尤其是内容详尽，且阐述了文章优点的评语。例如大多数学生喜欢这样的评语：In your topic sentence you say “Computers have brought many changes in our world.” However, you only write “Computer is of great help in scientific research.” Is computer of great help in financial and industrial activities or even in our everyday life? You had better list some examples to support your idea.学生的评价：

a.商讨式的评语引发了我们的思考，自由选择与主题相关的观点。可以看出老师在努力帮助我们。b.并没有直接告诉我们哪里有错，我们需要自己检查文章，这样促使我们反思作文的内容。c.老师应该提出具体的建议和做些有利于修改的评价。经过调查我们得出如下的思考： 1.构建评语的原则

为了帮助学生根据评语中中肯的建议修改作文，老师在给学生写评语时不应该认为自己是批评家或裁判，而应该把自己当成读者或向导，把写评语看作是与学生信息交流的一种方式，帮助学生了解读者所需的与主题相关的信息。评语的重点首先应放在作文的主题思想、概念论点和情节上，然后再处理与语法有关的问题。每次写评语重点讨论一两个问题。评语中所用的词和句子应该是学生所熟悉的。学生一看就明白老师期望他干什么。教学实践告诉我们，学生十分注意老师的评语。因此，老师在写评语时要时刻注意评语给学生写作带来的负面影响。

通过总结教学经验，我们发现能够引起学生兴趣，并对其写作有帮助的评语都是按照如下的步骤构建的：

准备阶段

通读全文，全面了解作文的写作情况，找出值得评述的地方。

写评语要有选择性，不可对作文的全部内容进行评述，所涉及的内容应该是与文章密切相关的一两个问题，而且应该是老师在课堂上反复强调的内容。

调整自己所扮演的角色，以读者的身份对作文进行评述，尽量不用或少用批评的言语。有时，有必要使用称呼，如Mr Wang等，这样学生会把阅读评语当作是看一位朋友的来信，对老师的评语更感兴趣。

二、如何撰写评语 首先，老师应该找出学生写得好的段落和语句，并对其进行充分肯定，提出表扬。通常需要向学生解释或说明老师为什么认为某个段落写得好。要告诉学生老师作为读者，对作文中所表述的哪些观点感兴趣。

然后，列举作文中需要修改、补充和重写的地方，并提出具体的修改建议指导学生进行修改。结尾时，使用鼓励的话语，告诉学生尽管文章中某些地方需要更详尽一些，但是老师对作文中列举的一些事例和采纳的观点感兴趣。

最后，检查与修改。不要认为写评语是一种负担，写完了事。老师应该对写好的评语进行检查，看评语是否内容清晰。如有不当之处，需要进行修改。

确保评语中有对作文进行中肯评价的语句。不可把评语的重点放在改正作文中所出现的语法错误上，而应该把重点放在与作文主题有关的思想上。

老师千万不可在评语中犯语法错误，否则学生会怀疑老师的英语能力。

谈如何写好英语作文评语

发布时间： 2005年7月7日

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责任编辑： cityboy

台山培英中学

陈曼慈

运用英语写作的能力，作为四项基本语言技能之一，其重要性是为英语教学界所公认的。然而，在当前的英语教学实践中，存在这样一种现状：教师重视英语写作训练，但却忽视对学生作文的反馈，未能正确认识自己在学生作文批改中所扮演的角色。翻开学生的作业本，看到的多是简单的对、错符号或分数或等级，几乎没有评语，至多是千篇一律的Good / Not bad / All right / Ok或Perfect。以致许多学生对教师的这些简单评语感到莫名其妙，无法正确认识自己的写作水平。以下是本人结合自己的教学实践和亲身体会，就如何写好英语作文评语，及时向学生反馈指导性的意见，浅谈一下自己的几点看法。

一、评语中的语法修改不仅要让学生知其然，更要知其所以然。

中学生在学习英语的过程中，最大的难题就是动词及其用法。由于汉语中动词没有时态变化，英汉的这一差别往往会干扰学生正确使用英语时态。如在表达“我差点忘了。”此意思时，学生在作文中写成“I

almost

forget.”。其实，此例句独立表意，不受上下文的限制。在评语中，教师应引导学生进行这样的逻辑思维：The action “forget” just now happened, so we should use the Past Tense。Its use is something like the verbs--know / think / recognize„.Do you still remember the sentence---“Sorry, I didn't recognize you."

学生写记叙文时常混用时态。如，When my cousin was a child, he likes sports and reading.He played volleyball, basketball and so on.He is reading many books about scientists such as Einstein, Madam Curie, Edision etc.And he wants to be a scientist after he graduates the university.这段文字虽时态混乱，但内容不错，简单地否定或肯定都是不对的，轻则使学生茫然失措，重则挫伤他们的学习兴趣和积极性，比较好的方法是先表扬做得对的地方后纠正错误的地方。我们可以批上：How lovely your cousin is.So are you.In your composition, you meant well, but try to make the tense correct.If you take your story as a past event, use the Past Tense all the way;if you make your story seem to take place now, use the Present Tense.Y

ou cant't use tenses at randam!

又如我们教师在批改上面的例文时，如果仅仅在 graduate后添上 from，其结果是接受能力稍差的学生会不知道它为什么这样算正确。但我们教师若再画龙点

睛地在旁边批上：

“graduate”是不及物动词，其后与from搭配才能接宾语。Remember!

这样，学生就会一目了然。

二、评语要从语篇层次上指导学生如何谋篇布局。

在作文批改中，只是订正学生所犯的语法错误是不够的。在学生习作中常常会出现一些句子，本身并没有错，却是一些涉及到语义整体中有关逻辑纽带、语法纽带和词汇纽带的问题，即是语篇质量方面的失误。对于这些失误，不能简单地以非对即错来论处，无法用语法去解释，而是要靠形成语篇时所应遵循的原则去处理，即要分析语篇的有效性、表达的得体性，并讨论遣词造句是否合乎所用语言的习惯性。例如，在笔者所任教的高三毕业生的习作中有这样的一个句子：“Teachers' Day is coming.I'm going to see my middle-school English teacher next week.从句子平面看，既无语法错误，亦无书写错误。但从深层上分析，不难看出句子受到严重的母语干扰，且选词不当，造成意义模糊，影响了交流的有效性。批改时，笔者不仅在

English teacher 下划一条横线以示错误，并在此句旁边写道：

Enjoy yourself with your teacher on the coming Teachers' Day.But I wonder who you are going to visit next week, a teacher from England or a

teacher who teaches you English.后来该学生修改后交上来：“I'm going to visit my teacher who taught

me English in the middle school.又如在学生写作中发现一个精彩的句子，我们教师应及时给予表扬，可批上：oh, what a nice sentence!/ It's very clever of you to end(begin)your wor

k with this beautiful sentence.„„

三、作文评语要以情导知，注意师生间的情感沟通。

前苏联著名教育家霍姆林斯基认为：“情感如同肥沃的土壤，知识的种子就播种在这片土壤上。”教学过程一旦触及学生的情感和意志领域，触及学生的精神需要，这种教学就能发挥高度有效的作用。

长期以来，有的学校一味地抓应试教育，以分数论英雄。于是很多教师只注重对作文本身进行评价，评语中批评多于表扬，纠错多于激励，结果容易使学生在写作时产生急躁、焦急、恐惧、恼怒等负情感体验，从而对培养学生写作能力产生干扰作用。笔者认为，现在的中学生大多数为独生子女，过多的要求甚至批评难以凑效。“愉快教育”才能适应现代化教育发展的需要。我们教师可在评语中给以学生恰如其分的评价，并表达对他们的希望。只要这些希望是真诚的、适时的和有内容的，学生就会从中理解老师对他们的信任、关心和爱心，从而转化为学习的动力。

学期伊始，给差生的评语中要批评但更要多几分鼓励。例如：

John, don't you think you were a little lazy in the last term? Now, a new term begins and I hope you can work harder just from the beginning.Cheer up!You know, a good beginning makes a good ending.To tell you a secret, I like your handwriting very much.给中等生的评语中最好要多一些督促，因为这一类学生往往就缺少那么一点“推动力”，推一推就上去了，松一松便

下来了。例如：

Mark, you made much progress last term.However, you can do best of all if you study harder.I'm waiting for your good news.给优等生的评语表扬中要有指正，向他们提出更高的要求。可以批上：

You've done best of all in your class, but try to make your handwri

ting nicer.Cora, you always did well in English last term.But I'm sorry you sometimes made some silly spelling mistakes.You see, little by little one

goes far.如知道某个学生家里最近发生不愉快事情，我们教师可在评语中说些安慰的话：

Andy, I'm sorry to know what happened to you.Your class and I hope you won't be sad any more.Remember: if you need help, please come to me.又如发现一位学生抄袭作业，可在评语中委婉地提出劝戒：

Why not believe yourself? I'm sure you can do better if you try to do it b

y yourself.这些充满温馨的鼓励或提醒的话语，相信每个学生都乐于接受，都喜欢这种与教师在作业本上的交流。做得好的，会期待着下一次的表扬；做得不够的，会仔细分

析自己的错误，不辜负教师的期望。

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“答案条理些！”、“细心点！”、“认真审题！”。“务必端正学习态度！”、“学习有些马虎，望深思慎行！”“解题思路清晰！”、“继续努力！”、“保持良好的学习状态！”，每次作业完成得很好，令老师感到非常满意。作业认真完成，书写端正。

作业本上那工整的字迹，是你文静开出的花朵。每次的作业都能欣赏到你那清秀的字体。每次打开你的作业本就有一种美丽的享受。老师很喜欢你那写得端端正正的字。每次作业完成得都很出色。作业书写整洁，成绩良好。你的作业总是玲老师很满意。工整正确的作业是同学学习的榜样。字比以前漂亮多了。字体端正整洁漂亮。学习努力，作业进步。幽默批语：

（1）该给老师配个放大镜啦！（字太小的学生）（2）让你的字站直了！

（3）你的字伸胳膊伸腿，管管它，让它规规矩矩，方方正正。哲理性批语：

（1）懒惰会使你的一生蒙上阴影。

（2）懒惰是魔鬼，千万别把它放出来偷走了你的心。（3）中国方块字要方方正正，做人不掺假，学习不虚假。建议性批语：

（1）你的字如能做到横平竖直就会更加好看。（2）最近你的作业让人担忧，愿意找老师交交心吗？（3）送你一言：知识＋方法＋训练＝成功。（4）从今天起每天仿写字贴练字吧！

“你好棒!”“太妙了!”“best!” “very good!”。

“你很聪明,如果字再写得好一点,那就更好了!”“人们说一个人写的字是一个人的第二张脸，你有一张帅气的脸，我想你写的字也会和你一样帅气的”。方法太好了，可要细心呀！”、“你的字写得可真漂亮，要是能提高正确率，那肯定是最棒的！”

“搬开你前进的绊脚石——粗心,奋勇前进!”

是不是还可以尝试另外一种解法”“爱动脑筋的你肯定还有其它路子”。“希望你告别粗心，与细心交朋友”，或者“再细心一些，准行！”

你与众不同的见解，真让人耳目一新，你真棒！老师还没想到的这种做法，我向你学习。”“你的头脑真灵活，这种方法比老师的方法强多了