第一篇：记叙文

记叙文范文：

幸福号快车

两个小时前妈妈接到了医院的电话，像是一纸诏书，我们赶到医院。医生简单的交代签字，外婆被推进了手术台。外婆病的太唐突。

病情比想象中的严重，大概是她常年的病痛我们一直没有发现罢了。

妈妈与外婆一直有着无法化解的恩怨。这是怎样的怨怼我始终无从知晓，时光流逝，我用不太敏感的神经发现其实长久以来，关于矛盾，唯一没有释然的人只有母亲而已。

自从外公去世后外婆一人怀着愧疚的心情独自居住，离我家只有20分钟的车程，可每次过节只有我和爸爸去看望她，妈妈在心里视她为一个素不相识的人。在我记忆力，她从未喊过外婆一声“母亲”。

依稀记得小时候外婆总会给我买不同颜色的小金鱼，放在透明精致的小鱼缸里，还放进去几块五彩斑斓的鹅卵石。外婆不会敲门，只是默默的放在门口，再孑然一人的默默离开。次日早上我小心翼翼的把鱼缸放在窗台。等回到家里。它已经安静的躺在垃圾桶里。从始至终我不曾看到门外的愁容沧桑的面庞，也没有勇气去想象。现在面前的一扇门，上面挂着“手术中”的字样，刺眼的像是召唤死神的信号。

城市陷入黑暗的漩涡，昏黄的路灯亮起。妈妈蜷缩在冰冷的座椅上，时间粘稠的流逝，上一秒容光焕发的在电脑旁敲敲打打的她，瞬间的憔悴了，面无表情的隐藏了内心的风起云涌，佯装坚强。那惝恍的眼神流露了她内心的忐忑。静谧走廊中暗淡的灯光掩藏母亲婆娑的泪眼。我一直认为妈妈不会为外婆流一滴眼泪，这十几年对外婆淡漠的如同外人，温暖的亲情像是在浩瀚海面上流浪，居无定所。

这个夜晚漫长而阒静，我与近在咫尺的妈妈像是相隔两个世界中。母亲一动不动的凝望着窗外，无法直视那扇门，像是站牌。我想毋庸思忖我就可以懂得她此时此刻的心情。终于放下了倔强的桎梏。她不愿看到刚刚登上路途的幸福与释然转瞬驶向终点站。

外婆在那个叫幸福的站牌下孤独的等待了多年，这个夜晚，母亲亦将抵达。

这样的夜漫长的可以把一个人吞噬掉。彩虹灯奄奄一息，24点之前一切都将成为历史。这些眼泪肆无忌惮的留下来。像是母亲的祷告。她一直爱外婆，一直都是的。那些往事还给天使。

滴答…滴答…

十二小时后外婆从麻醉中清醒，母亲俯身在她耳边呢喃道：妈，病好了，咱们回家。

瞬间的永恒

上了初三，蓄（留）了几年的飘逸秀发浪费了我宝贵的时间和精力，成了我学习上的“绊马索”，羁绊住了我前进的脚步。于是，狠狠心剪了爽利的短发。没想到，这可苦了我的头发，每当我思考问题时，他们总是被我弄得乱糟糟的，难看极了。

（交待自己剪断了秀发。）

时值深秋，天气却冷得很。在一个有着暖和阳光的午后，我吃过午饭，正要去“诌”一篇构思了很久却没想出个所以然的作文时，母亲叫住我，嗔怪道：“看你的头发，短发时还不如长发时整洁！去，拿梳子来，我给你梳梳。”我机械（这个词很贴切。）地拿来梳子，坐在那里不动。

梳子飞舞起来，纷飞的头屑仿佛在给上下翻飞的梳子伴舞，飘飘洒洒地落下来。忽然，梳子停止了舞蹈，在某一处不断地重复同一个动作，像电影放映到精彩部分，机器突然卡壳，又向正在放音的复读机错按了复读键，单调至极，乏味至极，也恼人至极。（前面的内容可以简略一些。）我不耐烦地微抬起头，正要发作，却看到镜片后的一双温暖明亮的黑眸子。我发现那慈祥的面孔上露出庄严的神情，我看到那漆黑的瞳仁闪动着母性的光辉，我感觉到那小心的动作浸透着母爱的仁厚……原来，母亲在帮我消除发间的尘土。哦，我想起来了，好多天没洗头了，头发上已沾满了尘埃。我细心的母亲呵……一缕阳光射进来，照在母亲身上，像一幅辉煌的特写。母亲瞬间美丽的剪影也成为了我记忆中的永恒。

（细腻的描写。将无微不至的母爱表达得非常突出。）

梳子重又飞舞起来，又有头屑悠悠落下，我的泪也欲和着深沉的母爱纷纷扬扬起来……母亲极其认真地为我梳理着头发，俨然一位艺术家在雕刻一座即将震惊四座的雕塑。（很好。）我忽然想起那位完成的作文。那是一篇以“永恒”为话题的作文。我的心中顿时有了数……

人生是一座藏宝阁，珍藏各种各样的宝贝。随着时光的流逝，这些珍宝都会被或多或少地蒙上岁月的尘埃。然而，记忆中母亲那光辉美丽的剪影却是一块价值连城的宝石，经常被我拿出来擦拭、把玩、品位，从未蒙上过一丝尘埃。这是我最为珍贵的瑰宝，我生命中的永恒。

简评：本文的构思十分精巧。作者选择了母亲为自己梳头这一平常事例，却写出了其中的不平凡。这个平常的动作包含了母亲无微不至的关爱。作者对于人物的动作、神态的描写非常细致，描写传神，是一篇比较优秀的文章。一些地方可以再简略一些。

当流星划过漫漫黑夜刺破无尽寂寥之时，当昙花含苞怒放留下沁人芳香之时，美好的景象留在了人们心中，成就了他们存在的意义，也成就了他们的永恒。依恋与倾慕，这是我对他的情感，“我爱你”，这是我唯一一句想对他说的话，那个名叫夸父的固执的男人。

穿越千年的悲欢惆怅，流浪万载的恩怨情仇，孕育着那混沌初开后最简单也最动人的话语：我—爱—你—

面对着一生的分岔路口，我徘徊过，也迷茫过，不知如何前行。选择平凡，只能将那份深深的爱恋永埋心头，平静的了此余生。而选择烟火，选择了那一瞬间的华丽，将自己最美好的一面，深刻地印在人们的心中，让虚空中的他知道，我对他深深的爱恋…

平凡与璀璨，命运的双生子，势必会被一方所不容。既然已平庸的度过恶劣无数光阴，烦了，也倦了，就让那华美的告白，完结这淡雅的一生，倾诉我迟到千年的爱…

砰…啪…砰…啪…砰…啪…

看着那生命的精华一点点地向天空飞离，大声地诉说那千年的苦楚，华丽的转身，渐渐地，将残存的温度，去寻找逝去已久的身影，我终于找到了，属于我的生存的意义，足够了…

“爸爸，爸爸，快看，那烟火，好美…”

“呵呵，和宝宝你一样的美…”是啊，的确很美，可又有几人能够想到这片华美的背后，隐藏着一颗孤寂了千载的心，还有那即将消逝的，美好的灵魂…听，她在哭诉，哭诉着对他的依恋，哭诉这着那千年相思而来的苦痛…我好希望有一个女子能够这么对我啊…嗐…今天是怎么了？“宝宝，快看，那烟花，那美丽的烟花…”

谁也没有发觉，有一滴泪，随着烟火的消散，而悄然滑落…

不经意的一瞬间，会让你铭记终生；一次小小的触动，会让你感慨万千；永恒的瞬间，怎能不让人震惊。

带着照相机来到草坪上，每一个镜头都是一个美好的瞬间，亲情的瞬间，爱的瞬间，美丽的瞬间，拥抱的瞬间……

“咔嚓”，一声脆响，你猜猜我摄下了什么？一个家庭里的欢笑，瞧，小孩的脸笑得多么灿烂，一对爱人也甜蜜地拥抱在一起，这种图片出现在我眼前时，有一种力量仿佛推动着我。一家人是多么和睦，小孩也健康成长，这一瞬间，是多少人羡慕的啊！看到这么温馨的场面，你当然希望他们是永恒的，永恒地停留在世界上，传达给每一个人，永远不要消失。啊！那是多么幸福！

“咔嚓”，一幅图片又映入眼帘。是无数双手，手里都捧着各种各样的书：科技书，故事书，文学书，作文书……他们都是国家的栋梁，是为“中华之崛起而读书”，是为了打开知识宝库的门，在里面探索更多的奥秘。看着这无数双手，我的心触动了，这一瞬间，又该是永恒的，一代传一代，永不停止。啊！那是多么值得庆幸。

“咔嚓”，这是公交车上司机叔叔会心的微笑。正是这个微笑，才给予乘客舒心和温暖，更给这辆公共汽车带来了生机。往日拥挤吵闹的乘客也被这微笑感动了，变得耐心地等候和移动，他们心中感到无比欣慰。看着这一幅图景，我们不是更希望这种文明能在城市里“开花结果”吗？啊！那是多么快乐！

看着这一组组照片，我也笑了：瞬间虽然很短暂，但非常美好。我多么希望每一个瞬间大家都可以做到最后，甚至做得更好，让瞬间成为永恒的瞬间！

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有一种瞬间可以称作永恒,而又是谁在这瞬间抛开世俗的期许,于高山之上采莲,与命运死神亲吻呢?

北风凛冽,弯月悬于孤空上,几分梅花香,给这寂静的黑夜添了几许萧瑟.却又显得如此哀悯,是谁人徘徊在西楼上?是谁人临风抚悲琴,怅惘故国茫茫?又会有谁看见你相思闲愁的眉头呢?

请君莫要哀愁,人生一世,熟能无恨?朝代的变迁.百年终轮一回.既然是上天注定,就应了错把他乡当故乡呵!继续你的踏雪寻梅,使你的诗词重拾红粉.管他岁月沧桑,时光荏苒!

“争渡,争渡,惊起一滩鸥鹭”的瞬间,是你永恒的高雅.“依门回首,却把青梅嗅”的瞬间,是你永恒的骄憨，“依遍阑干,只是无情绪”的瞬间,是你用很的清洁.“寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清,凄凄惨惨戚戚”的瞬间,是你永恒的释怀.人生总是坎坷的!高雅,骄憨,清洁和释怀便敲响了你,千秋的绝响――李清照,多少个瞬间汇成了红藕香残的你?我想,后人之所以爱慕你,就是因此吧!

千言万语,言不尽你的婉约,清描淡写,写不完你的远志,还是让这瞬间永恒下去吧!

清明天凉,你独坐山亭,明月高挂,酌一杯烈酒,饮下,无尽的感叹.给谁悦容,与谁共赏?你在想些什么?你为何要作放白鹿于青崖的断肠人呢?没有人会为你拭走眼角的清泪!

人生能有几回搏?自古而来,侠之大者,为国为民,抛头颅,洒热血,何等豪情壮志!而你却终日醉熏淘淘?官场失意是难免的!又何必灌愁肠呢?不如归去,不如归去!

你吟唱“人生得意须尽欢,莫使金尊空对月”的瞬间,或许是你永恒的豪迈/

你高歌“署道之难,难于上青天”的瞬间,或许是你永恒的洒脱

你嗟叹“黄云万里动风色,白波九道流雪山”的瞬间,或许是你永恒的释然

你哀怨“安能摧眉折腰事权贵, 使我不得开心颜”的瞬间,或许是你永恒的骄傲

就一曲豪迈的长河,向东流去,流成了你――李太白,瞬间的流聚,成就了永恒的美名,不问尘世浮华,只问美酒美诗笑繁尘.的确,战火后的江山,摸样妖娆.风雨后的你,如此多骄.蓦然回首,转眼已是千年.我们执手于天涯的两端,虽然只是一瞬儿,远远望去,却显得那么永恒.

第二篇：记叙文

记叙文写作

适合人群：小中学生

内容简介：写事，往往要交待事情时间、地点、人物、事情起因、经过、结构六要素，大多在开头交待前面四要素，然后再写事情经过，最后写结果。

叙事还有三种方式，顺叙、倒叙、插叙。

顺叙——事情的起因、经过、结果顺着排列。

插叙——叙述的过程中，插进一段相关的内容。

倒叙——先写出事情的结果，然后再写事情的起因、经过。

第三篇：记叙文

环境描写作用

一、交代事情发生的地点或背景，增加事情的真实性。

二、渲染气氛，三、烘托人物的心情。

四、寄托人物的思想感情。

五、反映人物的性格或品质。

六、推动情节的发展。

七、深化作品主题。

结构上的作用

⑪开头：①渲染气氛；②奠定感情基调；③为下文埋伏笔；④为下文作铺垫；⑤设置悬

念；⑥引起读者的兴趣或思考；⑦开篇点题；⑧总领全文；⑨与下文形成对照；⑩揭示主题。⑫中间：①呼应前文（后文）；②承上启下；③总结上文；④引出下文；⑤推动情节发展；⑥为下文埋伏笔；⑦为下文作铺垫；⑧补充交代

⑬结尾：①照应开头；②照应前文；③篇末点题；④总结全文；⑤点明中心，升华主题；⑥含蓄隽永，引人深思。

第四篇：记叙文

记叙文范文

Sample one

A Rainbow Smiles

With a cup of tea in hand, I was reading my favorite novel in the study room, all alone.All at once, a short message came, saying, “Darling, are you missing me?”

It was sent by Emma, who is now a postgraduate in another part of the city.She's my girlfriend and we've been in love for four months.Every time I receive a short message from her, I can't help recalling her lovely face, and our love story.It was a busy day during exam season and I went to the study room as usual to review my material, with a thick dictionary.I took a seat near the window and, very soon, I was deep in reviewing.Some time passed and I looked out the window to take a break.When I turned back, I noticed a little notebook being pushed towards me.The owner of the notebook was the girl seated opposite me.I curiously took the notebook and read, “Hello, my name is Emma, can we be friends?” I wrote in reply, “Of course.My name is Sammy.How do you do?”

“How do you do? I'm looking for a friend majoring in English and I guess you're the one,” she wrote.“How do you know I'm an English major?”

“Your thick dictionary gives you away.”

By communicating in the little notebook, we became friends and I began to learn something about her: She was a senior majoring in literature and was preparing for the postgraduate exam.However, her English was not so good and that worried her a lot.I was moved by her trusting me because we were complete strangers.So, I promised in the notebook that I would try my best to help her on the condition that she treated me to a meal after she succeeded.She accepted with a big smile.From that moment, the “English class” began.In the morning, I would take her to the library to do some reading, and would correct her pronunciation.In the evening, I would ask her to review the new words we had learnt that day.Sometimes, I would invite her to English corner, where she could practice her spoken English.We spent most of our time together in the study room and encouraged and helped each other.Since you couldn't talk loudly in the study room, we asked and answered each other questions in the notebook.We both liked communicating this way.As the days went by, I began falling in love with her.But she was busy preparing for a very important exam and I didn't want to upset her and hid my feelings in my heart.The day after she took the exam, we met at the same study room table as usual.I took out the notebook and wrote, “How'd it go with the exam?” “Very well, especially English,” she replied.I hesitated for a moment, but finally got up the courage to write, “Would you mind coming to the study room with me in the future?” “What I mind is if you don't ask me to be with you in the future.” Upon reading this, I couldn't help grasping her hands firmly.Her lovely face began to blush.Three months later, she got the news that she had been admitted to university and she was so excited that she kissed me the moment we met.According to the prior agreement, she treated me to a meal at a nice restaurant.At the table, we took out the notebook and looked through everything we'd written.We had gone through a storm and a colorful rainbow was smiling at us.Sample two

Sweetness of Secrecy

She is one of my best friends, but we've never met each other.We only know each other's Net name.Mine is Time Catcher, while hers is Remember-to-laugh.We met on the Internet when I was a sophomore in 2006.I was bored and chatting on QQ when an interesting Net name flashed up.It must be a special person, I thought.“Where are you?” I asked curiously.“In heaven,” she replied with a smiling emoticon.”And you?“

”Oh, we are neighbors, but I don't think I recognize you.“

We chatted in that joking way for the next couple of hours.I didn't pry into her real identity, and she didn't bother me about mine.I inferred she must be an out-going freshman, and I thought we could be friends because we had many things in common.We met on QQ every Saturday.Sometimes we discussed current topics, but we never exchanged our identities.One Saturday she was about to go offline when I sent my telephone number to her with my heart beating wildly.I waited anxiously until she responded with a simple ”bye“.I felt disappointed.After a short while, I received a message that said, ”Hi, Time Catcher, I had a nice time talking, I'd like to meet you online next Saturday“

Oh, it's her, Remember-to-laugh!I nearly cried out.I suddenly felt much closer to her.I looked at the number again and again to make sure that I remembered it.Though we had each other's numbers, we seldom got in touch by cellphone, both of us wanting to obey our unwritten pact.We still chatted on QQ, but we felt a bit closer to each other.I used to wait expectantly for her to appear online, and always felt excited when I saw her head portrait pop up.Once she was late getting online, I was worried because she was a punctual person and was never late for no reason.Since my mobile phone had run out of battery, I borrowed my roommate's to call her.When her voice came through the phone, I was so attracted by her soft voice that in one minute I forgot what to say.Then I asked anxiously, ”Are you OK? What's the matter? Why aren't you on online?“

”Are you Time Catcher?“ She asked.”Oh, yeah.“ I replied, then I felt a flush of embarrassment, ”Forgive my rudeness, I was too anxious to introduce myself.This is Time Catcher, big surprise, huh?“

”I didn't realize it was you, and this is not your number, if my memory serves me correctly,“ she said humorously.”Yeah, my phone is on charge, so I borrowed one“

”I sent you a short message to tell you it is my friend's birthday tonight.“

”Oh, got it.So have a good time“.I was obsessed by her mysterious character and charming voice.One day when we chatted on the phone.I said in a low voice, ”I like you“.To my surprise, she answered in a happy voice, ”I like you too, Time Catcher.We are good and unique friends, aren't we?“

I knew what she meant, so I replied, ”Oh yes.We are good friends and our friendship will last forever."

We are good friends but we have still never met.We chat about almost everything but we never talk about ourselves.We just care about each other and treasure our invisible friendship deep in our hearts.

第五篇：记叙文

是以记叙、描写为主要表达方式，以记人、叙事、写景、状物为主要内容的一种文体。分类

1.从内容及表达方式分：

①简单记叙文。

②复杂记叙文。

2.从写作对象的不同分：

①以写人为主的记叙文。

② 以叙事为主的记叙文。

③以写景为主的记叙文。

④以状物为主的记叙文。