第一篇:留学文书
PERSONAL STATEMENT
APPLICANT:WANGWEI
PROGRAM APPLICANT:CHEMICAL ANALYSIS
PROGRAM COLLEGE:US SATNA BARBARA
The purpose behind this personal statement is to not only gain admission to your highly-respected and well-known college, but to impress upon you my passion for learning and my tremendous desire to be succeed in the field of chemical analysis.I have based my decision to pursue an academic career not only purely practical reason ,but rather on my own natural interests and aptitude.Without enthusiasm, lifebecome monotonous and boring.My enthusiasm for continuous, life-long learning-particularly in the field of chemical analysis makes me a model candidate for your college.Consequently, I strongly wish that I can be admitted into your esteemed university to undertake an advanced degree program in the field.I know I am no genius and I also know that success is to result from extraordinary efforts.I chose WUHAN INSTITUTE OF TECHNOLOGY as my study point, one of the top universities in China that majored in chemistry research.There besides the specialty and theory studies, I made use of my free time to read large quantities of references both in Chinese and English, to catch up with the latest development in theory and to be immersed in the widest range of information.As a graduate, my academic performance had always be excellent in my class, especially for the specialty courses in the junior and senior years.Many applicants may claim to be from an underprivileged family, but I freely admit that I was born into a middle class family.My father is an ordinary middle school teacher in chemistry and my mother is a general staff in Bureau of Agriculture in my town.Through the influences of both my father an my mother, I fell in love with reading and study in an early age.My passion for natural science comes from my father ’s taught and himself ’s madly love in chemistry.Though, I’m from a impoverished town, but I always keep mother’ s word in mind, that is, “Only one of my family comes to the great city, then it will lead the whole family to create a perfect study and living environment.I have cherished a deep and long yearning for a chance to study at your university.As early as the years when I was an undergraduate, I had a chance to read the book by some professors of your university which influenced me to take up the study of organic chemistry as my area of analysis.Later, during my university of third year, I focused on the development of theGas chromatography-mass spectrometry and High Performance Liquid Chromatography.The comprehensive research and practice that I have performed in this area further reinforce my determination to seek advanced studies at your university when there should be an opportunity.This is because your esteemed university
enjoys a very high academic reputation for the research work you have carried out in the field of chromatography study.This ensures that if I can be admitted into your program I will be part of your well-respected program and I will be able to undertake in-depth study and develop a close understanding of the most updated theories and technical developments in this field.By working together and exchanging experiences with the world’s leading experts in this field, I will be exposed to wholly novel ideas of research and significantly broaden my academic vision.Chemistry engineering industry is the main industry for a country.It started very late in China and lags far behind the advanced countries such as the United States, Germany, Canada and others, its competency comparatively low.To shorten the distance, it is necessary to go abroad and learn from the developed countries the advanced chemical analysis technology and for that reason it is also urgent to perfect my knowledge structure and enhance my specialty level.The specialty of chemical analysis engineering in University of Michigan ranked No.11 in the United States.It has rich technical resources and its research centers and laboratories are proud of state-of-the-art equipments.The research work of Vehicle Power train Dynamics and Control being carried out there by many famous professors well fits into my postgraduate research work.So I wish to continue my education in your university.A scrutiny of my educational background will indicate that I have a solid foundation in chemical analysis.Therefore, my knowledge and specialized trainings in chemical analysis will also enable me to prove competent in analysis-related programs.If my qualifications suit me also for a program in chemistry, do not hesitate to transfer me to such program because I am equally interested in those programs.My study plan is to learn the fundamental knowledge first and then, based on my own research background, decide on a research direction that will best facilitate the development of China’s chemical engineering industry.In this way I will try to work out valuable academic achievements and write high-level doctorate thesis.Mrs.Wang, Wei
Tel: 0086-0713-7226520
Cell phone:0086-***
Address: chemical & pharmacy Engineering school of Wuhan Institute of Technology, special 1# of LiuFang Road, Jiangxia District, Wuhan City, Hubei province,P.R.China.------------------------------
Objective
To gain admission into XXX University’s Chemical Analysis Department
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Education
2009.9-2013.6Wuhan institute of technology University, P.Q.china
Department of Chemical and Pharmaceutical Institute
CET4:516
2006.9-2009.6The First Advanced School in QiChun
Skills:
The use of Win 95/NT, C, C++, Project 98, Office 97,Accountant
English skills Have a good command of written English.I have meet Miss Wang Wei for four years, being his teacher in “Spectral analysis” and her tutor in the experiment of “Infrared spectroscopy”.At the request of her, I am writing to you in support of her application to your graduate program.I am one of the professors in Wuhan institute of Technology University, while at the same time I am the tutor of Miss Wang.In the class, her thinking was very active and she completely understood what I said in the lecture.She showed her strong interest in chemical science and often did further discussion with me after the class.In particular, her experimental methods were so innovative and creative that the experiment done by her was often more intensive than required.I was much impressed by her because of her quick thinking, serious logic and independence.Besides, she was able to sort out various problems in the experiment, having the ability in debugging of both computer and advanced instrument.In additional to masterful abilities, Miss Wang embodies admirable personal characteristics.Balancing both cooperative and independent qualities, she can be both an indispensable team player and an good friend, On the whole the quality of her work was well beyond expectations.I found his interaction with the students to be at times better than my own, he also gave several lectures to the other students and gave them helpful and instructive suggestions.Above everything, Miss Wang thrives in challenging environments.Since her admittance into my research department, she has risen to expectation and surpassed them.If she attains her wish to study chemical analysis at your prestigious university,She will no doubt map out stardom in the field.I therefore recommend her to you without reservation.
第二篇:留学文书汇总
益博国际
邀请信
范例1.XXX
Invites
XXX
To an/a
XXX
At 时间
Telephone:
Fax:
Email:
范例2
Date
Dear XXX,It’s my pleasure to accept your kind invitation to participate in ……./Please accept my sincere thanks for your kind invitation.Unfortunately my schedule will not allow me to ….Thank you very much for your invitation.I am looking forward to meeting you./Thank you again for your invitation.Yours sincerely,XXX
推荐信
Date
Dear XXX,I take pleasure in recommending XXX to you.I highly recommend that XXX be given the opportunity to study at your university.Yours sincerely,XXX
介绍信
This is to introduce XXX
We should be highly appreciative if you could introduce him to reliable manufacturers and give XXX your help and advice.求职信
地址
时间
地址
收信人
Dear XXX,I’m writing to you about the vacant position in your company as XXX.…..The details of my education are given in the enclosed resume.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,XXX
祝贺信&感谢信:
1.Allow me to convey my sincere congratulations on your XXX
2.Thank you for your XXX
电子邮件
From:
To:
Cc:
Subject:
Attachments:
Date:
通知
Notice
海报
Poster
Film/…
Name:
Time:
Place:
Fare
其它事项
寻物启事
Lost and Found
便条
时间
Dear XXX,……
Yours sincerely,XXX
备忘录
Memo
From:
To:
Subject:
Date:
正文
演讲词
称呼
内容
表示感谢
名片
公司名称
姓名
职称/头衔
Address:
Tel:
E-mail:
Website:
产品说明/厂家介绍书
About XXX
介绍。。
使用说明:Directions for …
Features:
Directions:
Cautions:
文化广告(以傲慢与偏见为例)
Pride & Prejudice
Director:
Writer:
Release date:
Genre: Romance
介绍
招聘广告
招聘职位
Responsibility
Requirements:
Address:
Fax:
E-mail:
产品广告
根据内容逐步介绍,一般需给出有关网站,产品宣传语言等。
简历
Resume
Name:
Address:
Sex: Male/Female
Date of birth:
Place of birth:
Marital Status: Married/Single/Divorced
Job Objective:
Health:
Language proficiency
Educational Record:
Employment History:
表格类短语
Surname/姓
Given Name/名
Nationality(Region)Macao/澳门
Purpose of the Trip/旅游目的: office/官方Business/商务Leisure/休闲
Immigration/移民Visiting friends or relatives/探亲访友 Return residents/回国居 民
Flight No./Vehicle No./Vessel Name: 航班号/车号/轮船名
Number of Persons under the age of 16 traveling with you /同行16周岁以下的人数 I am taking out of China’s Customs territory/我从中国领土带出了…
Passengers who are taking any articles included in items 9-14 shall fill out this form in detail./ 携带9-14条中规定物品的乘客,请填写以下表格。
Description: 描述
Quantity: 数量
Value: 价值
Type/model: 型号
Customs remarks: 海关评价
Passenger’s signature: 乘客签字
Occupation: 职业
Spouse’s name: 配偶姓名
Contact person: 联系人
调查表
Reference check for instructional staff
Instructions to interviewer:
Check-out date:/入住时间
Check out date:/离店时间
合同/contract
借据/I.O.U
时间
…borrowed from….东西 and will return 时间
借方签名
收据/receipt
时间
Received from ….东西
收方签名
请假条
时间
I’d like to ask for a sick leave of 几天.I hope you could grant the leave.I will make it up/resume my work when I come back.请假人
第三篇:留学文书写作
留学文书在申请过程中的重要性
在考托、考g一族经历了少则数月,长则一两年的痛苦准备和考试的洗礼后,取得了toefl和gre(gmat)成绩,这也只是说明他(她)具备了申请国外大学研究生的资格,达到了申请的基本要求。可是在申请旺季,每所学校的教授面对的是成百上千符合基本申请条件的申请者,大家toefl、gre的成绩普遍都很高。你如何能够脱颖而出,得到洋教授的青睐呢?教授和您相隔万里,对你的印象、评价完全来自于你所提供的申请材料,所以申请文件所能提供的信息更加重要,几乎成为洋教授评判学生的最重要标准。
好的申请文件能够充分反映您的专业水平和人格魅力,并因此在一定程度上弥补语言考试成绩和其它方面的不足;差的申请文件轻则埋没自己的优秀素质,重则让人怀疑您亮丽的成绩背后是否有弄虚作假,从而导致您功亏一篑。
洋教授要不要给您录取和资助,最主要的要看您有没有在相应专业上的水平、才华、成就、潜力、抱负和追求。也经常要看您的人格魅力和力量。这些都需要您用申请文件去反映。他们要不要读完您的申请文件,要看您文件的内容是否感人、语言是否精当。
文书写作的主要内容
留学文书写作主要包括:自述信或学习计划(personalstatement,statementofpurpose,studyplan,etc.)、本科和mba所需的essay、推荐信(recommendationletter)、简历(resumeorcv)的写作。这部分文件是超越统计数字(gpa,tg成绩)之上,是展示申请者学习计划、职业目标、专业素质、综合素质和个性的材料,是留学申请的最核心的部分,是学校录取委员会做出录取决定的主要依据。同时,这部分也是中国学生所最不熟悉,最不擅长的。
留学、移民文书包装
自荐信(personalstatement,statementofpurpose)
推荐信(letterofrecommendation)
简历(resume)
mba短文(mbaessays)
签证文件写作服务
签证自述信(coverletterforvisaapplication)
拒签申诉信(appealletter)
学习计划(studyplan)
文书写作的服务流程
(1)签约、交初稿
申请者需首先与新起点前程公司签订《文书修改服务合同书》。可在同时或此后择日提交打印稿及软盘,也可以通过e-mail提交初稿。
注意:
???我们希望大家尽快提交初稿。我们是按交初稿的先后顺序来安排稿件的处理进程的,而非按照签约时间。
最好是整套文件。由于文件之间的互补性,整套文件有助于客户经理及写稿老师更全面地了解一个人。
(2)审稿
初稿首先交到客户经理手中,由他们进行第一道审查。我们的客户经理全部都是训练有素的,对留学程序和申请要求非常了解。他们一般都具有名校英语系本科或研究生以上的英文水平,对英语文章的质量具有高度的鉴赏能力。
(3)谈稿
客户经理在对您的初稿进行第一道审查后。如发现内容或思路有不足,他们会与您进行谈稿,谈稿的目的在于使客户更深刻的认识自己、认识自己所申请的专业,帮助您打开、调整思路,启发您发掘出自己的优势和独特点。
(4)补稿
谈稿后客户即可按照与客户经理达成的共识补充素材,充实内容。当客户提供的补稿再次交到客户经理的手中,他们会再进行审查,如客户经理认为您提供的补稿内容、素材已充分后,将材料转给专业改稿老师修改。客户经理根据客户的具体情况组织一个或多个老师进行精心修改。
(5)改稿
我们的专业改稿老师由学贯中西的中、外专家组成。他们运用自己的知识、写作技巧从结构、内容和语言多方面对你的文件进行修改,帮助你最充分地展示你的能力、水平和人格魅力。
改稿老师修改完毕后,稿子回到客户经理手中,由客户经理再次认真审查,以核实是否达到公司所规定的要求。如没有,会将稿件连同进一步修改的意见退回给老师,要求老师继续或重新修改,直到客户经理满意。同时负责质量控制的老师也将对改后稿进行抽查。
(6)取稿
当客户经理满意稿件的质量后,会立即通知客户来办公室领取稿件。客户取稿时将有20分钟阅读时间,如果不满意,可以拒绝接受,并获得75%的退款。客户也可以在接受稿件后,在一周之内一次性提出进一步的修改意见,我们保证一次性修改。
第四篇:留学项目文书
1、toefl成绩单。
2、gre成绩单。
3、gresubject成绩单。并非每个专业都要求你有专项成绩,但你有的话,通常能增加你赢得奖学金的机会。
4、tse成绩单。并不是所有学生必须提供的,但有一个良好的tse成绩,能增加拿助教津贴的机会。
5、本科四年成绩单。如果大学尚未毕业,可只提供现有的成绩单。所有成绩单都应当是中、英文对照的,最好两份同时盖上公章并封入信封,在封口上再盖上封签章。每所大学都会要求
一、两份这样的成绩单。由于联系学校的数量一般在10—20所,所以应该准备好不少于30份的成绩单。
6、研究生成绩单。国外学校一般要求提供所有post-secondaryeducation的成绩单,如果你读过研究生,自然也包括你在研究生学习期间的成绩单。这些成绩单的制作要求与本科成绩单相同。
7、本科、研究生的毕业证书和学位证书。在联系过程中,通常只要将这些证件的复印件寄给所联系的学校就行,但在使馆签证和到美国大学报到时,则需要出示原件和公证件。寄这些证件复印件时,应随附英文翻译。
8、personalstatement或statementofpurpose。这是一份各专业都需要的自我表白材料,一般要求500—1000字。在这篇十分重要的文章中,你既要把对所学专业的精深看法写出来,还要把自己的精神状态和对前途的看法写出来。既要写得具体、实在,又要写得生动感人。
9、三封推荐信。各学校一般要求每个申请者提供三封推荐信。大部分学校都有固定的推荐信表格,只要按照表格填写就行。多数情况下,推荐信也可以由推荐人另行用信纸写成,单独或随表格一起寄给国外学校。每份推荐信都必须由推荐人亲自签名,不能复樱推荐人最好由了解你的大学老师、单位领导及专业知名人士担任。如果有外国教授比较了解、欣赏你,请他们写推荐信,效果往往不错。
10、资金证明表。该表由各大学寄给你,要求你填上自己和家庭的经济状况,去美国读书的资金来源以及由谁提供担保等。
11、resume或简历。个人简历并不是每个学校每个专业都要求的,但写出一份个人简历,把自己的教育背景、工作经验和优点一目了然地呈现在洋教授们面前,对你只有好处没有坏处。
12、论文摘要或项目设计介绍。有些学校明文要求这些,但即便没有要求,你也应尽可能地提供,因为它们能够显著增加你的自述的可信度,从而大大提高你获得录取和资助的机会。
13、各大学所需的其他表格。有些学校和有些专业可能会要求某些特殊的申请文件,如有的大学要求你的健康证明等,应按要求准备并寄出。
14、正式申请大学的申请费。中国学生现在已不可能逃避这项30—70美元不等的费用。通常你可以到中国银行办理美元汇票,或请国外的亲友们帮你用支票交纳。
15、录取通知书。各大学在正式录取你后,都会给你发出正式录取通知书。该通知书通常与奖学金无关。
第五篇:留学文书使用说明
中国2011年留学文书修改机构排行榜出炉-编辑群专业度及咨询质量要考虑
随着国内经济的增长和美国签证放宽,海外留学申请竞争战况激烈,常春藤名校包括哈佛、哥伦比亚,录取率已经降到7%以内。哈佛大学最新学申请人数更是破天荒高达3万4千多人,在学生实力方面,斯坦幅统计该校申请学生中有超过3千人在该毕业年级排名第一。申请人的质量与数量皆达前所未见的巅峰,换言之,想拥抱「海归」金字招牌,除了自身实力背景坚强,学生需要更具洞见及特色的自我推荐策略,才能从众多申请者中脱颖而出
本科背景已非申请成功保证,优质文件才是致胜关键
愿意自费赴美留学的人口激增,随之而来的便是严重的排挤效应,连优秀的本科背景都不再是申请成功的保障,就读北京大学环境相关科系并于今年获得
Stanford 大学环境相关硕士全奖的李同学表示,同样的G(GRE)、T(TOEFL)成绩,师兄姊可以申请上哈佛、Johns Hopkins等全奖,但是他们今年这届就没有那么幸运,很多自己申请的同学,后来结果并没有很好,让人非常惊讶。
另外就读北京工业大学的张同学也提到,同样的成绩师兄去年申请上华盛顿等大学,今年却真的不那么容易,他提到,现在回想起来,有几间知名设计学院给他ad,他已经觉得很幸运。
留学申请门坎提高,受访同学们都同意,一份能清晰指出自身优势并造成与其它申请者的差异化的申请文件,能大大提升申请的成功机率。毕竟世界上优秀人才多如过江之鲫,懂得自我表现的人,才能成为面试委员眼中的人中龙凤。想一叩名校大门。塑造第一印象的留学文书,便成为学生们是否能抢滩成功,取得资格的关键第一战。
文书机构抉择基准: 申请成效胜于广告知名度,美国机构咨询专业度优于本土团队
留学市场竞争激烈的结果,让DIY留学文书修改写作机构的角色逐渐吃重。许多学生表示能有专业的申请文件,是他们申请成功的重要因素。不过坊间机构质量良莠不齐,真正拥有良好的修改能力和专业的网站使用接口的公司并不多,申请结果和文书质量是他们评估机构好坏的首要条件。因此广告曝光相对不频繁、却拥有专业编辑团队的文书机构,意外的备受学子推崇且使用者众。访谈中也发现许多号称号和上海一所明星大学合作的知名留学文书机构,实际申请成效反而没有很显着。
此外,由美国发迹的文书写作公司机构因对留学市场有着深入的剖析和了解,又比本土机构更能给予学生专业协助。以名列前茅的公司Top Admit(加州)和 Essayedge(波士顿)为例,Top Admit是由斯坦福毕业生创办,背景涵盖MIT、Stanford及Yale;Essayedge也是以美国常春藤名校的毕业生作为主要编辑老师,这些公司的利基点为native speaker及名校毕业背景的编辑资源,更能就顶尖观点给予学生建议,产出能精准抓住申请委员眼球的优质文件。
服务质量普查: Essayedge与TopAdmit共享第一,修改专业度及客服满意度为学子选择考虑。
因此,为了让未来众多留学生有更好的选择依据,我们和知名市调机构合作,做了一次整体性的服务质量调查。评估基准包含以下数项:服务价格、客户满意度、申请效果、使用人数、修改程度。总分总和排名为Essayedge(总分89)与Top Admit(总分89)并列第一名,第三名为Shine write(总分: 82),第四第五则分别为abroad essay(总分: 77)和Help You Apply(总分: 75)。
Essayedge与Top Admit在本次普查中并列冠军,两者拔得头筹的共同因素有二:一则为修改幅度皆能依个案状况作调整,给予最为客制化的服务,其二则为透明方便的结帐机制,依不同修改需求设定收费标准,收费较公正方便,比较不像本土公司订价无所清楚依据,质量与价格都缺少一分保障。其中TopAdmit 有个别科目专业顾问可针对学科差异作文章修正,又可用中文直接沟通修正需求,近来后势看涨。
以下为这次各机构的普查结果,整体而言,文件修改专业度及客服机制是消费者最重视的特质,价格与知名度反而非主要考虑选项。
1.Essayedge(总分: 89)
服务价格: 16;客户满意度: 17;.申请效果: 19 ;使用人数: 17 ; 修改程度: 20一般评论: 修改幅度大;有非常大篇幅的评论;几乎等于没有客服,只能用email沟通;价钱实在太贵;大多限于英文美化修改, 专业部分并没有很大修改;结帐很方便。
1.Top Admit(总分: 89)
服务价格: 16 ;客户满意度: 18;申请效果: 19 ;使用人数: 17; 修改程度: 19一般评论: 修改幅度大;有非常大篇幅的评论;客服回复快且有耐心;可以用中文和电话沟通;北京、上海有服务人员;价钱虽贵但是专业够,顾问会针对不同学科做评论修改;申请成果很满意;结帐还算方便。
3.Shine write(总分: 79)
服务价格: 17 ;客户满意度: 16 ;申请效果: 16;使用人数: 16;修改程度: 14一般评论: 修改幅度普通;没有独立评论服务, 只用追踪修订评论;用email沟通还算方便, 回复速度普通;价钱也不便宜;大多限于语法修改, 专业和结构部分并没有很大修改, 充其量只是润色。
4.Abroad essay(总分: 73)
服务价格: 17;客户满意度: 15;申请效果: 15 ; 使用人数: 13;修改程度: 13; 总分: 77
一般评论:语法修改, 专业和结构部分并没有很大修改;结帐不方便。
5.Help You Apply(总分: 71)
服务价格: 17 ;客户满意度: 14;.申请效果: 16 ;使用人数: 12;修改程度: 12 一般评论: 语语法修改, 专业和结构部分并没有很大修改;服务众多很好, 但使用上会让人不知道怎么选;结帐不方便。
本排行榜透过知名市场调研公司(NL)做问卷设计后透过知名留学论坛发放问卷及追踪统计,按照五个项目做量化及质化深入分析,再去除无效问卷及统计后产生如下结果,发放问卷于2011年秋季班入学,共5722份问卷,总共回收4169。