第一篇：学生英语作文

My unforgettable trip

I went to Beijing two years ago.I went there with my aunt, my grandparents and my sister.We went there by train and spent about eight hours on the train.The train was wonderful.The food was great and the scenery was very colorful.The train was comfortable and people was really nice.During the day, I sat on my seat and read books.Sometimes, I talked with my sister or other passengers.During the night, we played cards and had a great time.When we arrived, we were all tired.So we went to a hotel and slept for several hours.Then, we went to the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and so on.They were very beautiful.And we took lots of photos.

第二篇：学生英语作文

My good friend My name is Chen Mengya.In my class, there is a girl.She has a round face, a small nose, two big eyes, a small mouth and two big ears.Her eyes look like grapes.Her hair is short and black.She is tall and beautiful.Do you know who is she? Yes, she is Zhu Guijiao, one of my good friends.Zhu Guijiao is a good girl at school.In class, she listens to my teachers carefully.She studies English very well.She often helps us to solve problems.She is very quiet, sometimes she is very active.When class is over, she goes out of the classroom to play games with classmates.She is very friendly to them.She is a good girl at home, too.After supper, she always helps her mother clean the room.Then she watches TV for a short time if mother permits.This is my good friend.We feel happy when we are together.What about your good friend? Can you tell me something about your good friend?

广东省东莞市厚街镇开贤学校

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（一）班：陈梦雅

指导老师：刘飞

My dream Everyone has a dream.Now I want to say something about my dream.What is my dream? I often ask myself.My dream is to become a successful doctor, helping those sick people and saving their lives.Of course, to be a good doctor is very difficult, but I will do whatever I can do to keep everyone healthy.That's my dream.I want to try my best to help the poor sick people of our country.China is a developing country which needs good medicine and good doctors, especially in the countryside and distant villages.My dream is also that although at present I’m good at study, I’ll still try my best to be the study winner.Now everything I do is close to my dream.I feel life is fill with hope and is colorful, and I have enough confidence to realize my dream.I’ll work hard for my dreams, I’ll never give up.广东省东莞市厚街镇开贤学校

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（一）班：练文智

指导老师：刘飞

The Seasons There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, autumn and winter.Each season has three months.Spring is the first season of the year.In this part of the world, the spring months are March, April and May.In spring, the weather gets warmer and the fields turn green.Summer begins in June.Then come July and August.During the summer months, the plants and flowers are at their best.Next come the autumn months: September, October and November.Autumn is a wonderful season.The fields are golden with crops.It is the time for harvest and the peasants are very busy.Winter is the last season of the year.December, January and February are the winter months, it is cold in winter.The days are short and the nights are long.In many places it snows.On New Year's Day, we wish each other a happy New Year.广东省东莞市厚街镇开贤学校

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（一）班：朱桂娇

指导老师：刘飞

Dong guan One-day tour As we all know, Dong guan is a very beautiful city in Guangdong provice.More and more people like traveling in Dong guan.Here’s a Dong guan One-day tour for you.We will meet at the bus station at 7:00am.Then we will go to Ke Yuan by bus, Ke Yuan has a long history, so we will stay in Ke Yuan for about two hours.Also we are going to have lunch in there.After lunch, we are going hiking on Shui Lian Mountains.It’s the most famous mountains in Dong guan.As for dinner, we will have some traditional food in Dong guan Hotel.At last, we will go to the Central square to take some pictures.A great trip.You can’t wait.Please join us!I hope you’ll have a good time.广东省东莞市厚街镇开贤学校

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（一）班：叶慧莲

指导老师：刘飞

My father My father is thirty-nine years old, but he looks very young.He has two big eyes, a small nose and a small mouth.His hair is short and black.He is tall, he is a cool man.He loves reading very much, he has lots of books in her bedroom.My father is a doctor.He works in a people hospital.He often wears a white uniform.No wonder people call him“Good doctor”.He always works carefully and friendly to his patients.He is very busy.He works for eight hours every day.Sometimes he is on duty in the evening.He goes back home at night, He makes a big dinner and does some housework for my family.Because my mother isn’t at home.She works in Beijing.My father is very great, he is good at cooking.I think he is the best father all over the world.I love he very much.广东省东莞市厚街镇开贤学校

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（一）班：陈坚松

指导老师：刘飞

My friends I have a good friend.Her name is Lin Mei.She is a student.She studies at No.2 Middle School.She goes to school from Monday to Friday.She leaves home at 7:00 and goes to school by bike.It takes her ten minutes to get to school.She has four classes in the morning and two classes in the afternoon.She doesn’t come back home for lunch.She often eats lunch at school.She begins to play the guitar at 4:00 in the afternoon.She likes her school very much, and she also likes English.She says she want to be an English teacher when she grows up.七

（三）班：雷田雨

ZOO There is a zoo near my home.I often go and see animals there.There are moneys, pandas, tigers, koalas and many other animals.Koalas are my favorite, because they are very cute.Monkeys are friendly and smart.Pandas are kind of shy.Tigers are strong and elephants are very big.All of the animals are very interesting.I like them very much.七

（四）班：陈琪

第三篇：学生如何写好英语作文

学生如何写好英语作文

英语作文,是职中学生英语学习的一大难点。有的学生不知该写什么,有的学生不知该怎样写。不少学生写的是“中文式英语”,先想好中国话怎么说,然后翻译成英文,满篇的英文单词,却是中文习惯,让外国人看不懂,中国人不明白。学生感到作文难,一是“货源不足”又“不懂经营”,即:词汇贫乏,不会句型,不懂语法,如何去写?二是“底气不足,缩手缩脚”,越怕写不好,越不敢写,越不想写,就越不会写。要想帮助学生写好作文,要有一个循序渐进的过程，并养成良好的习惯。

那么，学生要怎样才能写好作文呢？我认为英语教师可以从以下方面对学生进行训练：

一、要求学生阅读优秀英文范文。

首先要搞好阅读。阅读是写作的基础，在阅读方面下的功夫越深，驾驭语言的能力也就越强。所以要写好英语先要读好英语，在语言学习方面狠下苦功，教科书要读透，因为教科书中的文章都是一些很好的范文，文笔流畅，语言规范，精彩的一些课文段落要背诵。再就是要进行大量课外阅读，并记住一些好文章的篇章结构。

二．让学生多模仿。

仿写可以是局部的、片段的,也可以是整体的。仿写能使学生写有样板,练有目的,是初学写作者行之有效的方法之一。如:描写季节、最喜欢的运动、我的理想等。学生能把学到的短语、句子用到作文中,做到学练结合,兴趣大增,并且觉得写作不是难事。但在模仿中也要注意一些问题：

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放之四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that„”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“„because„”，等等。

三.教会学生写作技巧。

训练书面表达是要教会学生一定的写作技巧。如切题，抓住全部要点，不能遗漏有用信息，但也不能加一些不着边际无关紧要的内容。要抓住不同的文章体裁对时态选用的特点。如：介绍性文体、说明文、书信体的等在表达时常常以一般现在时为主，穿插对过去的回忆(一般过去时态)和对未来的展望(一般将来时态)，记叙文，日记等常以一般过去时为主，包括即时的感受，也用一般过去时表达，通知、便条等在表达时常常以祈使句为主，用将来时态交代要做的事情，另外，还要注意选用适当的表达方式·留意直接引语和闻接引语的使用·在写作时

要多从交际角度来考虑。如：在写信时，就要考虑写信的目的，写信人与收信人之间的关系，什么是对方已知或未知的信息等等。对写出的每句话，都要考虑是否能明白的传递信息。是否符合英语的习惯，是否符合写信人的身份；认真对待书写效果。定稿前要打草稿，认真检查无误后再定稿。书写要整齐规范。

四、提醒学生注重句子结构.1.时态学多了,容易弄混,常犯时态错误,往往是主、谓不一致,前、后不统一,整篇文章时态混乱。如:Lin Tao is my friend.He like doing sports.Last week, he goes to the park with he friend.he want to play soccer there.…语法错误是“大错”,时态教学一直是初中英语教学的重、难点。

2、新句型增多,运用不熟常出错。如:They all like flying kites.So we do.针对某些句型反复操练,直到完全掌握。

3、掌握不了重点词的运用,造成词语误用,表达不准确。如:Our teacher often encourages us learn English well.She gives us some good advices.要想减少这些错误的发生,引导学生常复习词汇,多进行造句练习。

五、多训练，多鼓励，让学生充满自信，让兴趣成为学生英语写作的动力源泉.在教学中，学生学习了一些好的范文，在教师的指导下，不断掌握了一些写作技能，让学生多动动笔，学以致用。除了每一单元必写作文外，每周要求学生写随笔，即使几句话也可以。记下身边所发生的事情或感受，或对某现象发表自己的看法等等。把学生的作文、随笔及时给以评价。在批改学生作文时给以准确评价，比如说。学生作文那个词用的好，那句话写的妙，文章整个情况如何，都一一做出详细的批注，在作文讲评课上，充分展现好的方面，给以鼓励，并把好的收集起来，办班级英语作文展或和其他班级交流。对不太好的，个别辅导，指出不足，勉励他们及时弥补。不拉下一个学生，让每位学生都充满信心．觉得自己能够写的好，兴趣是最好的老师，有了兴趣和信心．写好作文就不难.此外，我们还可以在课堂上采用(1)集体写作(2)分组写作（3）课堂讲评等多种 教学方法训练学生写作。

针对高考而进行的作文练习,要求要明确:卷面整洁,文章符合题意;语句通顺,形成上下文语气和逻辑连贯的整体,不能东一句、西一句,语无伦次;句式正确,但不能过于单调,要多样化，尽量避免语法和拼写错误;整篇文章要达到所要求的字数,但不能过多。总之,学生写出好的作文,并非难事,关键是要坚持不懈,指导到位,并形成好的习惯。

第四篇：学生心理健康英语作文

As is known to all, psychological health is as important as, if not more important than, physical health for a student during his/her growth.However, it’s quite worrying that nowadays some students are not quite psychologically healthy.Undoubtedly, schools and universities should take great account in the responsibilities of students’ psychological health.Relevant courses and activities should be introduced to students so that they would be more aware of the significance of psychological health and find appropriate ways to maintain and improve it.For example, there should be a psychological counseling hotline or office for students to turn to when they need some psychological aid.Of course no psychological health can be obtained without the efforts from the students themselves.From my perspective, what they can do is trying to stay positive, optimistic and follow the right guidelines from their schools.To be more specific, they can participate in some activities such as voluntary work to cultivate an opening and caring mind.Meanwhile, harmful impacts from the cyber space should definitely be avoided.1众所周知，心理健康是一样重要，如果不是更重要的，身体健康的学生在他/她的成长。然而，这是相当令人担忧的是，现在一些学生不健康的心理。2毫无疑问，学校和大学应采取大客户的责任，大学生心理健康。有关课程和活动应向学生介绍了使他们更了解心理健康的意义，找到适当的方式维持和改善。例如，应该有一个心理咨询热线电话或办公室为学生打开当他们需要一些心理援助。3当然，心理健康可以获得不努力的学生。从我的角度来看，他们所能做的就是试着保持积极，乐观和遵循正确的指导方针，从他们的学校。更具体地，他们会去参加一些活动，比如志愿工作，培养一个开放和关怀心。与此同时，有害影响从赛博空间绝对应该避免。

As is known to all, psychological health is as important as, if not more important than, physical health for a student during his/her growth.However, it’s quite worrying that nowadays some students are not quite psychologically healthy.Undoubtedly, schools and universities should take great account in the responsibilities of students’ psychological health.Relevant courses and activities should be introduced to students so that they would be more aware of the significance of psychological health and find appropriate ways to maintain and improve it.For example, there should be a psychological counseling hotline or office for students to turn to when they need some psychological aid.Of course no psychological health can be obtained without the efforts from the students themselves.From my perspective, what they can do is trying to stay positive, optimistic and follow the right guidelines from their schools.To be more specific, they can participate in some activities such as voluntary work to cultivate an opening and caring mind.Meanwhile, harmful impacts from the cyber space should definitely be avoided.1众所周知，心理健康是一样重要，如果不是更重要的，身体健康的学生在他/她的成长。然而，这是相当令人担忧的是，现在一些学生不健康的心理。2毫无疑问，学校和大学应采取大客户的责任，大学生心理健康。有关课程和活动应向学生介绍了使他们更了解心理健康的意义，找到适当的方式维持和改善。例如，应该有一个心理咨询热线电话或办公室为学生打开当他们需要一些心理援助。3当然，心理健康可以获得不努力的学生。从我的角度来看，他们所能做的就是试着保持积极，乐观和遵循正确的指导方针，从他们的学校。更具体地，他们会去参加一些活动，比如志愿工作，培养一个开放和关怀心。与此同时，有害影响从赛博空间绝对应该避免。

第五篇：初二学生英语作文及评析

Hi,my name is Li hua.I am 14 year old.My Birthday is on May 10th.I have two habbits.I am good at singing.I like to dance and I like to play to guitar.If your need me,please call me at 643-2508 today.老师评语：本文出自一个初一升初二学生手中，整体来说句子还算连贯，逻辑清楚并且应用了初中一些重要的短语例如：be good at ,call somebody at,like to do something.但是还有一些错误：

1.乐器名词前要加定冠词the.Play the guitar

2.You是指你，你们

3.Your是指你的你们的，形容词性物主代词

4.年龄的表达方法：14 years old或者是14-year-old

5.只有首写字母或者是专有名词要大写。因此文章的Birthday→birthday

6.Like to do something 或者是like doing something

7.不要遗失信息点。在打电话后还可以加上邮件即 or email at ****** 建议：对于这些刚接触英语写作的学生来说，多读，多背，多记是写好作文的关键。同时这些作文也需要专业老师细心地评论。经过多次的这样的修改，学生一定会有很大的提高。

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