第一篇：高中英语议写作指导

上海市共和中学杨家贵英语作文教学向来是英语教学中的难点,学生写作的确也存在着各种各样的问题,如果让学生从基础抓起,一条条地去克服,显然对于学习任务繁重,而有不得不时时紧张备考各门功课的学生来说,是耗不起如此巨大的精力与时间的.但是,只要我们英语教师不断地钻研作文的辅导方法,积累更多的切实可行的英语作文写作模式教与学生,这也不失为快速﹑有效﹑全面地解决问题,提高学生英语写作水平的好方法.分析了高中英语议论文的相关要点，提供两种类型的议论文写作模式,用于对学生的指导，使其能利用所提供的议论文模式轻松地完成写作任务．

一、英语议论文写作要点

议论文通过议论或说理来表达作者见解和主张.作者对某一问题持有一种看法,为了使读

者同意自己的看法,提出若干理由,企图说服他人.高中英语议论文的写作要注意以下要点:

1.论点要鲜明、确切．一篇议论文只能有一个中心论点．论点一般在开头提出，然后加以论证．

2.论据要充分、可靠．一般是以事实为论据，也可以利用成语，格言，名人名言作为论据．

3.论证要严密、得法．归纳法（induction）和演绎法（deduction）是议论文常用的论证方法．归纳法的例子为基础，从几个例子和现象中，归纳出某种道理和看法．例如：报纸是一种媒体（medium），人们可以从中得到现代信息；电视是一种媒体，人们也可以从中获得信息；广播也是媒体，人们同样可以从中获得现代信息．因此我们可以得出结论，其他媒体，如网络等，一定会给人们信息．演绎法以一个或多个看法为基础，从一般论断，演绎到不同事例，再加以论述，最后再回到一般论断上来．例如：所有的媒体都可以给人们提供信息，网络是媒体，因此人们可以从网络中获得信息．在归纳中要注意使用的例子要充分，不能以点概面．如：（课本高二上p81）：

Iborrowedabookfromthelibrarylastweek.Itwasveryboringanddifficult.Ireadonlytenpages.Therefore,Ithinkthatalllibrarybooksareuseless.

评注:Itdoesnothavealogicalargument.Thewriterdislikeonelibrarybook,butnotalllibrarybooksarethesame.Thewritershouldnotmakeageneralstatement(Alllibrarybooksareuseless)basedonhisreactionstoonesinglebook.二、议论文的写作步骤:

1.引言(introduction)．由于英语作文受时间，字数的限制．因此，在引言段中作者就必须简单解释要讨论的问题，并明白地亮出自己的观点，如提倡什么，支援什么，反对什么．

2.主体段（mainbody）．主体段是议论的过程，作者必须有足够的证据．（adequateproofs）来论证自己的观点．一般可提出一个或两个proofs,并对此用一两句话分别进行阐述．

3.结论（conclusion）．结论段可以用一两句话来结束文章．同时要注意与引言段呼应，但不能照搬前面的原话．

例：课本高二上p78第一封信

Tutorialcenterishelpful.

Ihavestudiedatatutorialcenterfortwoyears.MycommandofEnglishhasimprovedconsiderablysinceIstartedthiscourse.

Atmycenter,thefeesarereasonable.Mytutorsarequalifiedteachers.Ihavebeenhelpedalotbythem.Theyaresincereandkind.

OneofmyteacherswasBritish.Atfirst,Icouldnotsayanythingtoher.ButlaterIlearnedhowtocommunicateinEnglishwithawesterner.

IthinkthatthetutorialcenterhasgivenmealotofconfidenceinusingEnglish.评注:第一段提出论点,体现家教中心是helpful(段划线部分),主体段分别从几个方面(划线部分)来阐述家教中心的确有帮助,结论段重申家教中心的作用(划线部分),且语句表达与第一段中的不重复.三、议论文的写作模式

1.议论文的类型

英语议论文根据命题特点，从形式上来看可分为如下类型:

①“一分为二”的观点．如“轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭、环境、经济可能产生的影响”

②“两者选一”的观点．如，期中考试作文题，“乘火车还是乘飞机”

③“我认为……”型．如“你对课外阅读的看法”

④“怎样……（howto）”型．如“怎样克服学习中碰到的困难”．

⑤图表作文．通过阅读图表中的数字与项目得出一个结论或形成一种看法．

按照高二上学期的写作要求，学生主要应掌握①②两种类型的议论文的写作．在第①种类型中命题涉及某一事物或现象的正反两个方面：通过正反两个方面的对比，得出结论是利大于弊，还是弊大于利．论证要围绕所要得出的结论来展开，若利大于弊，则有利的一面要多阐述一点．反之亦然．

在第②种类型中，命题要求在A或B两者之间作一比较或选择，两个对象往往各有优势，所以结论部分有两种情况：

a.要么支持A，要么支持B;

b.A、B优势均难的割舍，只好依情况而定在结论部分说清楚在什么条件选A,在什么条件选B．

下面重点介绍第①、②种类型议论文的写作模式.2.“一分为二”观点的议论文模式

Introduction

第1段:Nowadaysmoreandmorepeople．．．/．．．playsanimportantpartin．．．.likeeverythingelse,．．．has/havebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects/bothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Generally,thefavorableaspects/advantagescanbelistedasfollows.Mainbody

第2段：Firstly,..Secondly,…Inaddition/What’smore…

第3段:Everycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspects/disadvantagesarealsoapparent/obvious.Tobeginwith…;Tomakemattersworse…;Worseofall…

Conclusion

第4段:Throughaboveanalysis/Allthingsconsidered,wecanseethatthepositiveaspects/advantagesoutweighthenegativeones/disadvantages.Therefore…例文1.看电视的利与弊AdvantagesanddisadvantagesofwatchingTV

NowadaysmoreandmorepeopleliketowatchTV.SoTVplaysaveryimportantpartinourlife.ButwatchingTVhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Generally,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.

Firstly,youcanexpandyourknowledgebywatchingTV.Asweallknow,learningthingsbyTVismuchfasterthanbylisteningtotheradioorjustbyreadingbooks.Forithascolorfulpicturesaswellaswonderfulmusic.

Secondly,youmayknowanybodyyouwanttoknowsuchasfamoussingers,superstars,scientistsandsoon.

What’smore,youcangoeverywherebytravelingprograms.Let’ssuppose,ifyouliketravelingverymuch,butyouhavetoworkonweekendsorholidays,youmustbeverysad.AndnowopenyourTVandit’lltakeyoutoanywhere.

Everycoinhastwosides.Thedisadvantagesarealsoobvious.Forexample,watchingtoomuchTVcaneasilybecomeshort-sighted,especiallyforchildrenandstudents.Tomakemattersworse,someyoungstudentsarekeenonwatchingTVsothattheygiveuptheirstudiesgradually.

Throughaboveanalysis,IthinkwatchingTVisawayofstudying,itisgoodforustowatchTV.ButwhenwewatchTV,weshouldmakeaplanotherwisewatchingTVwilldestroyourlife.例文2.谈谈出国留学的利与弊WheretoattendacollegeNowadaysmoreandmoreyoungpeoplearegoingtostudyabroad.Likeeverythingelse,studyingabroadhasbothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.Generally,thefavorableaspectscanbelistedasfollows.

Firstly,theythinkbyattendingacollegeinaforeigncountrytheycanlearnnotonlyusefulknowledge,butalsothecultureandcustomsofothernations.Secondly,theycantakeadvantageofthisopportunitytogainagoodcommandoftheforeignlanguagetheyarelearningveryquickly.Moreover,theycanmeetdifferentpeopleandexperiencedifferentcultures,whichmayhelptobroadentheirviews.

Everycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Thecostsaremuchhigherthanthoseintheirnativecountry.Mostoverseasstudentshavetoworkforaliving,whichcan’tallowthemtopayalltheirattentiontostudy.What’smore,theymayfeelverylonely.

Throughaboveanalysis,wecanseethatthepositiveaspectsoutweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iaminfavorofgoingabroadtostudy.写作练习：

①谈谈校服（schooluniforms）.

提示：近年来，越来越多的中小学要求穿校服．对此引发了学生中由对这个问题的讨论，请写一片英语短文阐述你的观点．

Reference:someofthemainargumentsforandagainstschooluniforms.

FORAGAINST

1.Studentslookneatandtidy.1.Uniformsareexpensive.

2.Thepublicknowswhichschoolyouarefrom.2.Childrengrowfast,neednewuniforms.

3.parentsallpaythesamemoney.3.Someuniformsareveryuncomfortable.

4.Studentsdon’tworryaboutfashions.4.Studentsalllookthesame,can’tbeinpiduals.

5.Teacherscanidentifystudentsonschooltrips.5.Getboredwithsameclotheseveryday.

6.Gooddisciplineforstudents.②说广告（aboutadvertisement）.

提示：有人说广告在现代社会是很重要，有人认为广告的促销成分太多，你认为……3.“两者选一”观点的议论文模式

模式⑴:A、B两者优劣势分析,要么选A,要么选B.

Introduction

第1段:Somepeopleholdtheopinionthat(A)issuperiorto(B)inmanyways.Others,however,arguethat(B)ismuchbetter.personally,Iwouldprefer(A)becauseIthink(A)hasmoreadvantages.Mainbody

第2段：TherearemanyreasonswhyIprefer(A).Themainreasonisthat…Anotherreasonisthat…(赞同A的原因)

Conclusion

第4段:Butifallthesefactorsareconsidered,(A)ismuchbetterthan(B).fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayfinallydrawtheconclusionthat…(总结观点)例文:Whichisbetter?Carsorbikes?

Somepeopleholdtheopinionthatprivatecarsaresuperiortobicyclesinmanyways.Others,however,arguethatthebicycleismuchbetter.personally,IwouldprefertheuseofcarsbecauseIthinkcarshavemoreadvantages.

TherearemanyreasonswhyIprefercars.Themainreasonisthatcarsbringconvenienceandmobilitytotheowners.What’smore,acarisfarmorecomfortabletotravelin,especiallyinthechangeableweather.Anotherreasonisthat,whenmorepeoplebuycars,theautomobileindustrywilldevelopmorequickly.Thegrowthoftheautomobileindustrycanmotivatetheriseofotherrelatedindustriessuchasironandsteelproduction.

Ofcourse,bicyclescantakeyoutoanywhereyoulikeintownanddoesnotneedalargeparkingplace.Besides,itisnotasexpensiveasacarandthereforeeveryfamilycanaffordtobuy.

Butifallthesefactorsareconsidered,carsaremuchbetterthanbicycles.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayfinallydrawtheconclusionthatpeoplecanlivebetterwiththeuseofcars.模式⑵:A、B优势相当,依情况而定,有条件地选择A或B.

Introduction

第1段:Whichwouldyoupreferifyouarefacedwiththechoicebetween(A)and(B)?Beforeyoumakethedecision,youhadbettermakeaclosecomparison.Mainbody

第2段：Itistruethat(选择A的优势之一).Itisalsotruethat(选择A的优势之二).But(选择A的劣势).

第3段:Though.(选择B的劣势),(选择B的优势之一).Furthermore,(选择B的优势之二).Conclusion

第4段:Therefore,ifyou…,youshouldchoose(A),butifyou…,youshouldchoose(B).(总结观点,提出建议)例文:Listeningtotheradioorreadingthenewspapers?

Whichwouldyoupreferifyouarefacedwiththechoicebetweenlisteningtotheradioandreadingthenewspapers?Beforeyoumakethedecision,youhadbettermakeaclosecomparison.

Itistruethatlisteningtotheradioisquickandconvenient.Itisalsotruethatwecanlistentotheradiowhilearedoingsomethingelse.Sowecansavealotoftime.Butradioprogramshavetheirowntimeschedule.Youcannotgettheinformationyouneedeverytimeyouturnonyourradio.

Thoughnewspapersarenotasquickasradio,readingfromthenewspapercancertainlybringusnewsmoreclearlyandmoreexactly.Furthermore,whilereading,wehavetimetothinkaboutwhatwearereading,tojudgeit,toanalyzeit,andthenwewillbemoreawareofitscauseandeffect.

Wearelivinginaninformationage.Wehavetomakefulluseoftheinformationwecangetifwearetoachieveourgoals.

Therefore,ifwewanttogetthelatestnews,wecanlistentotheradio,butifwewanttogettheexactwords,we’dbetterreadthenewspaper.写作练习:

①健康与财富(HealthandWealth)

提示:健康与财富哪个更重要一直是一个热门话题(hottopic),请简述你的观点.

②哪里住更好(Wheretolive?)

提示:有的人喜欢往城里挤,有的人喜欢往乡下搬.各有所好,孰是孰非,你以为如何?参考文献:

1.OxfordEnglishforSeniorHighSchoolStudents(Shanghaiedition),OxfordUniversitypress,1996.

2.王长喜十二句作文法,王长喜,北京:中国社会出版社,2003.7

3.英语高分指导.写作.高中卷,郭凤高,第二版,上海:上海交通大学出版社,2004

4.高考英语作文直通车,曹越宇,上海:上海社会科学院出版社,2003附录(Appendix):

一、写作常用逻辑衔接词

根据衔接词本身在文章中所起的作用,主要分为以下四类,即“起”“承”“转”“合”.

1.表示“起”的常用词语.用于开篇引出扩展句.

atfirst

atpresent

currently

first(ly)

inthebeginning

tobeginwith

firstofall

inthefirstplace

lately

tostartwith

now2.有关“承”的常用词语.用来承接上文,表递进.

After/afterthat/afterwards

Afterafewdays

Afterawhile

Also/too

Atanyrate

Atthesametime

Besides

Furthermore

Inaddition

Inadditionto

Infact

Inotherwords

Inparticular

particularly

Inthesameway

Incidentally

Indeed

Meanwhile

Moreover

Nodoubt

Obviously

Ofcourse3.有关“转”的常用词语.用来表示不同或相反的意思.

Afteralleventhough

Allthetimenevertheless

Anywaynoheless

Atthesametimestill

Converselyinfact

In/bycontrastasamatteroffact

Despiteespecially

Fortunatelyhowever

Inspiteofluckily

Though/althoughnodoubt

Onthecontraryotherwise

Unfortunatelyunlike

Whereasyet

4.有关“合”的常用词语.用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容.

Aboveallinsum

Accordinglyinsummary

Asaconsequenceonthewhole

Asaresulttherefore

Ashasbeennotedthus

AsIhavesaidtospeakfrankly

Atlasttosumup

Atlengthtosummarize

Brieflysurely

Bydoingsotoconclude

Consequentlynodoubt

Eventuallyundoubtedly

Finallydoubtless

Hencetruly

Inbriefso

Inconclusionobviously

Inshortcertainly

Allinall

高中英语议写作指导飞雪

第二篇：高中英语 写作指导

如何写说服性议论文

【写作任务】

假设你是李华。你的美国笔友Susan最近收到了某所大学的录取通知书，但由于经济原因准备放弃入学资格。请根据以下要点给她写一封信，劝说她不要放弃：

1.上大学的重要性； 2.如何解决所面临的困难。注意：1.词数100左右；

2.信的开头已给出，但不计入总词数； 3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Susan, I am sorry to hear that you have decided not to go to college.____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________

Yours，Li Hua 【写作指导】

这是一篇说服性信函，正文实质上属于说服性议论文。

一般来说，说服性议论文分三个基本段落：第一段引出话题；第二段提出自己的观点并陈述理由；第三段总结全文，表明态度。

就本篇写作而言，首先要符合信函的格式。其次要具备说服性议论文的特点。在具体写作中还应注意以下几点：

1.话题的提出要开门见山，不要拖泥带水； 2.论证要条理清楚，语言应准确精炼； 3.作者的观点必须鲜明，不能模棱两可。【常用表达】 ★阐述观点

Now it is commonly held that...They think...But I doubt whether...These days we are often told that...But is this really the case...Faced with..., quite a few people argue that..., but I conceive it differently.Currently there is a widespread concern that...Now people in growing numbers are coming to realise that...★列举理由

The reason for...is that...The reasons for...are as follows.First,...Second,...Last but not the least,...On the one hand,...;on the other hand...We may take a common example to show...A recent study suggests / shows that...According to the statistics provided by..., it can be seen that...There is good evidence to show that...No one can ignore the fact that...★总结

In short,...In conclusion,...As far as I'm concerned,...From what has been discussed above / Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely arrive at / come to / reach the conclusion that...【参考范文】 Dear Susan，I am sorry to hear that you have decided not to go to college.I am writing to try to persuade you not to do that.The reasons are as follows.First, education has a long-lasting influence on our future.No one can ignore the fact that well-educated people usually perform better in their career and enjoy a better life.Second, we all meet certain difficulties in our lives and what we should do is take up the challenges and try to overcome them.Third, you can apply for a student loan or take part-time jobs to earn some money.Of course I will try my best to help you too.In short, I hope you can accept the offer from that college.Yours，Li Hua

【范文点评】

1.范文脉络分明，层次清晰。作者在第一段开门见山地提出主题；第二段列举理由并提出解决问题的建议；第三段总结全文，表明其观点。

2.First, second, third的恰当使用，不仅加强了文章的逻辑性和连贯性，而且使文章结构更加紧凑。

3.No one can ignore the fact that...life及take up the challenges...them具有很强的说服力；apply for...money的建议切实可行。

第三篇：高中英语应用文写作指导和

高考作文之应用文---申请信 感谢信 邀请信 道歉信 演讲稿

写作指导 应用文写作三段式

第一段 开门见山 说明写信事由

1若是道歉信 I am writing to you to express my apologize.I am so sorry that+道歉 which I have promised

1若是感谢信 I am writing to you to express my appreciate.I am so thankful that +

1若是邀请信 I am writing to you to invite you to do.1若是申请信 I am xx I am writing to apply for the opportunity to...1若是演讲稿 Good morning.I’m Li Hua from Fujian, China． It’s my great honor to be here to say something about XX

and ways of dealing with it.第二段 交代具体内容

1若是道歉信 给出原因（适当想象）比如最常用的借口就是我多年不见得亲戚突然从国外回来了 接机

Just now, my cousin, Li Qing, who left home to Australia for his further study lastYear informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him

up at the airport with his family.You know, we haven't seen each other for nearlya year.1若是感谢信 具体内容

1若是邀请信 具体内容

1若是申请信 介绍自己的情况 表达自己能胜任这份工作

1若是演讲

第三段 表达美好祝愿，期待对方回信

1若是道歉信 一定要再次约时间

I sincerely hope you can accept my apologize and can we make another appointmentOnce again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused

1若是感谢信邀请别人 再次感谢

would you like to accept our invitation for travelling in China?

We sincerely wish you a pleasure journey here.Expresses our thanks once more.Have a nice day!

1若是邀请信再次表达邀请

I hope that you can accept my invitation if it is convenient for you.Please call me at+电话号码if you have

any questions

1若是申请信

I appreciate it if you give me the oppotunityI am looking forward to your reply.1若是演讲that is all.thank you

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：

1.未及时回信的原因；

2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）

注意：1.词数：120-150；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time.You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back.In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation.Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details.Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful.To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons.In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends.What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life.I sincerely apologize again for my mistake.By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua

第四篇：高中英语作文写作开头指导方法

高中英语辅导网

重要与必要；（应）注意与重视

[1] NP1 is of great importance(necessity, value)in NP2(or: NP is of enormous significance)

[2] The importance(necessity)of NP(to do sth.)lies in(the fact)that…

[3] NP1 plays, as is known, an irreplaceably important role in NP2

[4] The irreplaceably important role NP1 plays in NP2 is significant(obvous)

[5] NP1 is an indispensable part of NP2

[6] It is important(necessary)to DO(or:THAT)

[7] Special attention should be pay to …(or: We should pay special attention to…)

[8] What we should take into consideration is +NP

二择其一

[1] If it were left for me to decide whether(wh-clause),I would, without hesitation, choose+to DO(or: I would prefer the former/the latter)

[2] To DO/NP is a matter of prerence.[3] It is difficult to make a choice for one can hardly gain most without losing any.[4] The difficulty lies in the fact that the advantages and disadvantages of both cases are equally obvious.[5] In fact, we may well preserve a delicate balance or compromise between the two than go to extreme.[6] It is not sensible to exclude one of the choices completely

[7](of two conflicting ideas, concepts)Though conflicting to one another, they are so closely associated that understanding one will be impossible without discussing the other.[8] The benefits of NP are varied…

[9]While disadvantages are unavoidable, it is the advantages that prevail.论述的展开：说明原因和理由，层进，举例，转折

[1] The reason lies in several aspects,[2] The reason why+clause+[1, underlined]

[3] There are several remarkable reasons.高中英语辅导网

[4] 层进in addition, besides, fruthermore, what’s more, on the other hand, meanwhile, for one thing…for another;finally, above all, in short.[5] 举例for example, for instance, such(general term)as(specific terms),a typical(striking)example is that, a case in point

[6] 转折however, but, nevertheless,on the contrary

[7] 条件if , provided that, unless, as long as,etc

提出异议

[1] However(But),…

[2] Such idea(see[1-2]),if not entirely ADJ1,is somewhat ADJ2 and needs careful consideration.ADJI=unreasonable,unacceptable, inappropriate,improper,undesirable,etc;

ADJ2=misleading,doubtrul, etc

[3] In fact(As a matter of fact),…(follow[2])

[4] However, it is not(quite, necessarily)the case.[5] This(It)is not(quite, necessarily)the case and needs to bo fruther considered/discussed.(or:further

consideration/discussion)

引述他人观点（为提出自己观点铺垫）

[1] It is widely(commonly)accepted(hold)+THAT

[2] A widely accepted(commonly)hold idea(point of view,viewpoint, opinion,assumption)is +THAT/NP

[3] A/The dominant(prevalent, prevailing)idea(see [2])is NP/to DO

[4] It is taken for granted+THAT(or:We often/frequently take it for granted THAT)

[5] People(The majority)seem to get accustomed to the idea(see [2]),without questioning,THAT

[6] People are willing to regard NP1 as NP2/ADJ

[7] People are willing to DO,while reluctant to DO

第五篇：高中英语写作

高中英语写作模板

模板一：直陈观点，以例佐证

观点：More haste, less speed.Before moving to the next step, one needs a practical consideration on what he has already achieved.（欲速则不达）preparation.in one day, it takes one years’ practice to have a good command of the language.If we do not learn from spelling correct words and writing acceptable sentences, we are never able to write a good composition.And without practicing oral English a lot, we can never speak English fluently.If we don’t read and listen a lot and do a lot of efficient exercises, we can not pass English tests.In short, we should have a good foundation if we want to make great achievements in our studies and work or in other things as well.观点:欲速则不达。移动到下一个步骤之前,需要一个实际的考虑他已经实现了欲速则不达。

从我的观点来看,我们应做的每一步一步来。人们经常失败没有充分的准备。

比如把英语学习。正如罗马不是一天造成的,它需要一个多年的实践,有良好的语言。如果我们不学习拼写正确的单词和句子写接受,我们将无法再写一篇好的文章。练习口语,而很多,我们永远不能流利地说英语。如果我们不读,听了不少,但做大量的练习,我们不能通过英语测试。

简而言之,我们应该有一个好的基础,如果我们想让伟大的成就在我们的学习和工作,或者在其他事情。

模板二：呈现看法，分说原由

观点：Honesty is the best policy.（诚实为上）

It is true that most of us value honesty highly.Personally I agree that honesty is the best policy.As we know, if one is honest, other people will deeply respect him or her, and are willing to make friends with him or her.In addition, being honest can make people’s life easier and more harmonious(和谐的).There are a lot of examples to support the argument.consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are Singapore is a trustworthy society and has a very low criminal rate.There is no doubt that being honest is of benefit to both the state and the inpidual.We should have the spirit of honesty.这是真的,我们当中的大多数人的价值诚实。就我个人而言,我认为诚实是上策。

正如我们所知道的,如果一个人诚实,别人会非常尊重他或她,并愿意广交朋友,与他或她。此外,诚实,可以使人们的生活更轻松、更和谐(和谐的)。有很多例子来支持这个论点。举例来说,消费者不会害怕被索要如果经销商是诚实的。再比如,新加坡是一个值得信赖的社会,有一个很低的犯罪率。

毫无疑问,诚信双赢的国家和个人。我们应该本着诚信。

模板三：先抑后扬，肯定观点

现象：Should the students have the sense of competition?（是否应该培养学生的竞争意识）will do harm to the relationship between people.Besides, don’t want to try hard to succeed so that they can find an excuse of their failure.From my point of view, we should try to encourage students to have the sense of competition because there exists great competition in our modern world.Having the sense of it will certainly be important for students to develop after they leave school.However, we should guide our students to have a correct sense of it, getting them to know that they only have opponents but not enemies.We should also teach our students not to be afraid of failure because everyone may meet it more or less.Instead, try to face to and overcome it.有两种相反的意见的竞争。有些人认为小,相信它会伤害到人与人之间的关系。除此之外,一些人不想努力成功,以便他们能找到他们的失败的借口。

从我的观点来看,我们应该鼓励学生有强烈的竞争,因为存在着巨大的竞争在现代世界。在这个意义上,这肯定会是重要的,因为学生离开学校后。

然而,我们应该引导学生有一个正确的感觉,让他们知道他们的对手,但不是敌人只。我们也应该教我们的学生不要害怕失败,因为大家都可以见到这或多或少。相反,试着去面对和克服它。

模板四：先扬后抑，否定观点

现象：Can “lucky numbers” bring good luck?（吉祥数字能带来好运吗？）lucky numbers that they even spend a lot of money to buy lucky numbers.Many other people hold different ideas about lucky numbers.numbers at all.Numbers and luck are two different things.So far as I’m concerned, I agree with the latter.Obviously, such belief is only a kind of superstition.Perhaps it holds true for some cases, but often it does not.Numbers can never bring good luck to a person at all and our luck is in our own hands.Therefore, everyone can have good luck only if he tries his best.Let’s always remember

在一些人眼里,幸运数字能给他们带来好运。他们认为这样高的幸运数字,他们甚至花很多钱去买幸运数字。

很多人持有不同看法幸运数字。他们认为没有幸运数字。编号和运气是两回事。到目前为止我个人而言,我赞同后者。显然,这种信仰只是一种迷信。也许对有些案例,但是经常,它不适合你。数字都无法带来好运的人,我们的运气是掌握在我们自己手里。

因此,每个人都能有好的运气,只有当他试着自己的最佳状态。让我们永远记住”的机会只有做好准备”和“一分耕耘,一分收获。”

模板五：确定主题，分步解说

主题：Reduce waste on campus（减少校园浪费）It is certain that the problem of waste is becoming more and more serious on campus and it’s time for us to reduce it.For one reason, we have already wasted a lot of precious resources such as water and electricity.For another, our waste adds our parents and the society a burden.electricity as much as possible.we should not spend too much money.we should stop wasting water when we bath, or clean faces, or wash clothes or dishes.教师是确信无疑的废物问题变得越来越严重的校园和它的时候,我们必须把价钱降低。因为某种原因,我们已经浪费很多宝贵的资源,例如水和电力。对另一些人来说,我们的浪

费我们的父母和社会增加负担。然而,有些人还不知道怎样才能降低校园浪费。这里有一些建议。

首先,我们应该关灯,当我们离开宿舍或教室,以便节省电能当做很多当做可能的。其次,我们不应该花太多钱。第三,我们应该停止浪费水,当我们洗澡,或干净的面孔,或洗衣服或盘子。

事实上,有不同的解决方法,根据不同的情况。因此,我坚信,我们能够减少浪费在校园。

模板六：（名谚开篇，烘托观点）

观点：Failure is the mother of success.（失败是成功之母）

People often say,the painter, the doctor and the scientist have failed time and again before they succeed in the end.helpful experiences from them and learn little by little what is the right way to our goal.It seems that failures are the steps in the mountain paths leading up to the peak where success lies.You have to climb the steps in order to reach the top.We should all take a positive attitude to failures and keep on working hard so as to meet with the final success in our studies and careers.人们常说:“失败是成功之母。”几乎没有任何成功赢得了没有失败。一个画家可以把许多失败才使图纸满意。医生可能会尝试了很多次才找到有效的治疗一种怪病。科学家可能使数以百计的实验之前,他得到了他所需要的数据。换句话说,画家,医生和科学家都失败了一次又一次地之前,他们成功。

从上面的例子中,我们可以得出这样的结论:失败是很常见的。我们可以得到一些有益的经验,学一点一点什么是合适的方式,是我们的目标。看来,失败是一步一步的山路上山顶那里成功的谎言。你必须爬的步骤以达到顶峰。

我们都应该采取积极的态度去失败,继续努力,以满足最终成功的在学习和职业。模板七：实证调研，数据为先

现象：Cell phones in China（手机在中国）

number of cell phones was 85,260,000;in 2002, the number was 180,000,000;in 2003, 206,600,000;in 2004, 269,000,000;while in 2005, the number went up to 315,000,000.From these numbers, we can see the increasing use of cell phones.There are many reasons for this development.Firstly, cell phones are very convenient to be carried everywhere.Secondly, cell phones can make us get news, play games, listen to music and chat through sending short messages.Thirdly, the drop of price, including the phone price and the communication price, has made it possible for an average person to buy one and make more use of it.作为一项调查显示,手机在中国的普及程度越来越高。在2001年,这个数字手机是85,260,000;2002年,这个数字是18万元;2003年,206,600,000;2004年,26万9千人、在2005年,这个数字上升到31.5万只。从这些数字,我们可以看到越来越多的手机。

这其中有很多理由发展。首先,手机是非常方便携带。其次,手机能使我们得到消息,玩游戏,听音乐,发短信聊天。第三,价格下跌的价格,包括电话沟通的价格,已使得平均每人买一个,让更多的使用它。

模板八： 正反观点，各圆己见

话题：Wealth or health, which is the more important?（金钱与健康哪一个更重要?）Some think that wealth means everything.In their eyes, they can have everything done with enough money.Some of them take risky chances to make money only with the result that they get neither wealth nor health.Actually, health is more important than wealth.Health is the foundation of one’s success If one gets sick, it is nearly impossible for him to do his work well.On the other hand, a person suffering from illness, in fact, cannot get any wealth: has to spend a lot of money on the medical treatment;enjoy his wealth.Health is the source of energy and it’s the starting point where everything begins.Therefore, you should exercise every day with proper diet, forming good living habits and trying to avoid any minor disease.一些人认为财富意味着一切。在他们眼中,他们就可以得到每件事,有足够的钱。他们中的一些人采取冒险的机会赚钱以致他们既不卫生。财富,实际上,健康比财富更重要。健康的身体是事业成功的基础。如果一个生病,这几乎是不可能的,他要做自己的工作。另一方面,一个身患疾病,事实上,找不到任何的财富:首先,我来治好他的病,他不得不花大量的钱在医疗;可是对另一位妈妈来说,如果他病了,所以他不能真正享受他的财富。

所以,如果你想变得富有,保持身体健康。健康是能量的来源和它的出发点都开始了。因此,你应该每天锻炼身体以适当的饮食,形成良好的生活习惯,尽量避免任何次要的疾病。

附：常用英语谚语：

1.Time flies.--------------时间过得真快。

2.Kill two birds with one stone.--------------一举两得。

3.Where there is a will, there is a way.--------------世上无难事,只怕有心人。

4.Don’t put the cart before the horse.--------------不要本末倒置。

5.The early bird catches the worm.--------------早起的鸟儿有虫吃。

6.Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.--------------世上无难事,只怕有心人。

7.A fox may grow gray, but never good.--------------江山易改,本性难移。

8.You cannot eat your cake and have it.--------------鱼与熊掌,不可得兼。