第一篇：ps出国留学申请个人陈述

Personal Statement

I found my faithful love for finance quite early as my uncle, a financial accountant, began to teach me some simple financial knowledge when he provided me with additional coaching of mathematics since I was young.Then as I learned more academic knowledge in finance, E-Finance for example, in college, I gradually made up my mind to develop it as my future career.Thus I’m now applying to your programme of Accounting and Finance MSc to enrich me with more in-depth knowledge in finance.During undergraduate study, I’ve got a systematic learning in Microeconomics, E-Finance, E-Commerce, E-Marketing and Logistics Management of E-Commerce.In particular, I performed excellent in E-Finance as I scored 91, the highest mark in my class, and I became much more familiar with e-banking, online securities trading and the working processes of call center.In the final year of undergraduate study, I’m now learning Principle of Management, Case Study of the Security of E-Commerce, The Criteria and Law in E-Commerce, Customer Behavior and International Trade Affairs.In terms of quantitative courses, I have learned Advanced Mathematics, Linear Algebra and Probability Theory & Mathematical Statistics and in the last course I’ve mainly studied central limit theorem, the principal distributions, testing of statistical hypotheses, parameter estimation, linearity regression and equal analysis, and stochastic differential equations.With my great efforts, I got 85.66 for current overall average and 87.64 for the average of E-Commerce major specializations and ranked of 5/53 and 4/53 respectively in my class.In addition, I was awarded B-class scholarship and won the title of ‘Excellent Student’ as well in 2008.Besides focusing on professional study, I also pay a great attention to improving leadership.Shortly after I entered into the college, I joined in the Literature & Art Unit of the Student Union.In a year, I perfectly accomplished my work, such as field arranging and programme planning, etc., in holding the award ceremony of the Webpage Design Competition and the English Culture Festival.For my excellent leadership and organizing ability showed in the above activities, I was elected as the president of the Unit in September 2007.Thereafter, I successfully organized many ceremonies and festivals which were widely appreciated by students and teachers.When being active in extra-curriculum activities, I also grasped chances to develop my English capacity.I once participated in the shows of English Culture Festival---the English dramas Beauty and the Beast, and Titanic---in which my oral English was well practiced.Meanwhile, I also focused on cross-culture communication as I made friends with several oversea students from England, Finland, and France.I was quite fascinated with the European culture they introduced to me which impelled me to get my postgraduate study in UK.Through the above preparation, I’m sure that I’ve got ready to study in Manchester.I believe with a hard work I can have a deep insight in the accounting and financial courses you provide and what I would learn can greatly contribute to my career development---after graduation, I will work as a financial analyst in a key investment firm in China, and when being experienced with practical financial investment operations, I then plan to be a senior financial advisor in a world famous investment bank.

第二篇：申请留学的个人陈述PS

申请留学的个人陈述PS（NB）

极端装B的PS，非大牛不能handle，作者同时被Harvard, Yale, Stanford, Columbia, NYU, Virginia, UCB Boalt, Georgetown, UCLA, BU, USC等录取，所以吧，仰望为主。

全文692词，以39句I...but排比一气呵成。

I am a thinker, but not one to think out loud.I love myself, but am not in love with the sound of my own voice.I want to be loved, but not at the cost of not loving myself.I want to know everything, but realize that nothing can ever be known for sure.I believe that nothing is absolute, but I can absolutely defend my beliefs.I understand that chance is prevalent in all aspects of life, but never leave anything important to chance.I am skeptical about everything, but realistic in the face of my skepticism.I base everything on probability, but so does nature...probably.I believe that all our actions are determined, but feel completely free to do as I choose.I do not believe in anything resembling a God, but would never profess omniscience with regard to such issues.I have faith in nothing, but trust that my family and friends will always be faithful.I feel that religion is among the greatest problems in the world, but also understand that it is perhaps the ultimate solution.I recognize that many people derive their morals from religion, but I insist that religion is not the only fountainhead of morality.I respect the intimate connection between morality and law, but do not believe that either should unquestioningly respect the other.I want to study the law and become a lawyer, but I do not want to study the law just because I want to become a lawyer.I am aware that the law and economics cannot always be studied in conjunction, but I do not feel that either one can be properly studied without an awareness of the other.I recognize there is more to the law than efficiency, but believe the law should recognize the importance of efficiency more than it does.I love reading about law and philosophy, but not nearly as much as I love having a good conversation about

the two.I know that logic makes an argument sound, but also know that passion makes an argument sound logical.I have philosophical beliefs informed by economics and economic beliefs informed by philosophy, but I have lost track of which beliefs came first.I know it was the egg though.I always think very practically, but do not always like to think about the practical.I have wanted to be a scientist for a while now, but it took me two undergraduate years to figure out that being a scientist does not necessarily entail working in a laboratory.I play the saxophone almost every day, but feel most like an artist when deduction is my instrument.I spent one year at a college where I did not belong and two years taking classes irrelevant for my major, but I have no regrets about my undergraduate experience.I am incredibly passionate about my interests, but cannot imagine being interested in only one passion for an entire lifetime.I love the Yankees, but do not hate the Red Sox.I love sports, but hate the accompanying anti-intellectual culture.I may read the newspaper starting from the back, but I always make my way to the front eventually.I am liberal on some issues and conservative on others, but reasonable about all of them.I will always be politically active, but will never be a political activist.I think everything through completely, but I am never through thinking about anything.I can get along with almost anyone, but there are very few people without whom I could not get along.I am giving of my time, but not to the point of forgetting its value.I live for each moment, but not as much as I worry about the next.I consider ambition to be of the utmost importance, but realize that it is useless without the support of hard work.I am a very competitive person, but only when competing with myself.I have a million dreams, but I am more than just a dreamer.I am usually content, but never satisfied.I am a study in contradiction, but there is not an inconsistency to be found.

第三篇：出国留学申请个人陈述英文

出国留学申请个人陈述英文模板Personal Statement

Born in Beijing, China’s political capital, cultural center and economic hub, and nurtured in a well-cultured family and an empowering community, I have developed a meaningful outlook on lie.I identify myself with such values that one gives meaning to life when one lives to give.Success stories of my parents , relatives and friends along their career-path have entrenched my belief in being independent and confident as a contributing memeber of the community.As I look back on early days of my schooling , I am just as grateful to my working parents for having sent me to one of the best boarding schools in Beijing where I received quality primary education and learned to appreciate independence.As I recall , being independent was probably the biggest asset I gained as a teenager with the absence of parental guardianship for most of those 6 years.After I upgraded to secondary school, I offered to go to school by bike.Though hesitant at first, my parents gave their well-thought-out consent to the 15-km ride average Chinese parents would simply veto in the first place given the “one-child policy”and subsequent “little emperors” pampered by parents and grandparents.Thankfully, that day-to-day routine bike trip,rain or sunshine,tempered my strong character.I have been holding myself to highest standards, academically and physically from primary school days

through to college life.I have grown up all these years amongst top cohorts and have been exposed to varied horizons and dimensions of school life in and outside of classroom.I am perfectly healthy and stong with a sharp mind and demonstrated commitment to teamwork.I was handpicked to play for school baseball team when I was in primary school.Back then, my proven leadership and excellent skills in the field assured my coach that I was born to be a team leader.And I did justice to his well-timed appointment by heading a team of Beijing to compete in Shanghai and Hong Kong several times.And the strong track record of out outstanding performances each time still fills me with pride and excitement today.During one match tour to Hong Kong in the 1990s, I was immediatel exposed to the enviable luxury and prosperity of the city,the dynamic economic center of Asia.That trip awakened me ,for the first time, to the value of wealth and finance.And it was that very journey to the thriving metropolis that shaped my ambition to be a financer.Years later,when the colleg entrance exam came,that moment of life and death for most of senior high school students in China,my top preference was Finance Colllege of Beijing Technology and Business Unversity.The result came as a sad surprise as I was admitted to Computer Science College instead.But I stuck with my dream major and decided to minor in finance.I have since worked hard to equip myself with systematic knowledge of finance.As a result , I amd now well on my

way to graduation with double degrees in both computer science and finance in 2012.During my college days,I led my cohorts in starting up a micro company as I dabbled into the real business world.We settled for newspaper as our maiden attempt..As a new horn,I took a hands-on approach, from editing to circulating, from cost control to market survey.My strong leadership and sunergy of the entire team kept this mini organization going pretty well in its infancy.Yet inexperience in operation and cost management led to a failed business in the end.But I saw the silver lining in the failed venture.I now know more about where I need to work on.When I was a little boy, my parents taught me how to manage money in the safest way.They helped me put my pocket money in the bank and get interest as a return.Now, as a grown-up already,I recognize that systematic learning and book knowledge can truely help me know how much more about what finance is all about.Naturally, as one’s knowledge about swimming increases, the desire to swim in the sea grows.Yet, with more academic exposure, I have come to realize how I am ill-equipped with the knowledge needed to stay afloat in the trubulent sea of finance.That self-conscious humbleness versus the profundiy of finance as a much-respected discipline has led me to opt for further study in the US,home to a number of world-class colleges of finance.After meticulous comparision and cross-checking, I have settled for

Clark University,the birthplace of the first-ever graduate school in the US.I trust that demanding academic standards here and ,best of all ,great mastermind of finance that Clark can offer will undoubtedly broaden my horizon and update my vision as financier of the future.To me,Clark is the best and right place that can surely make the difference, academically and professionally alike.I am more than anxious to embrace those best minds in Clark and contribute my humble part to its huge wealth of knowledge and innovative ideas.I am therefore very much looking forward to a positive reply from Clark, my dream campus.May that offer come just in time for my journey towards a rewading learning experience in one of the greatest colleges in the US.

第四篇：出国留学个人陈述

Personal Statement

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When occasionally reading the master piece Letter to a Young Lawyer by Alan Dershowitz, I was deeply attracted by words such as Lawyer, Justice, Practice Mentality, and Creed of Life.These words led to my further meditation on the qualities of a lawyer---critical thinking, efficient methods to defend one’s opinions, logical mentality.Living in a society in desperate need of justice and rightness, I had determined to devote myself to the cause of law resolutely.And the first thing is to be equipped with professional knowledge and practice skills.Thus, after graduation next year from Chongqing University, which is listed in 211/985 project, I intend to further my study at your university due to your prestigious reputation in this area

With great determination and sense of mission, I devoured the pages to learn and think in and out of class, resulting in the top-ranking score at various courses, for instance, 87% for Lawyers, Notarization and Arbitration Practice;85% for Corporate and Business Law;85% for Financial Law;and 90% for Jurisprudence.Nevertheless, I know that a consistent praise is far away to make my dream realized.Hence I submerged myself in the sea of reference books in the law field, such as The Concept of Law by H.L.A.Hart，An Introduction To The Principles of Morals and Legislation by Jeremy Bentham，Justice in Robes by Ronald Dworkin, Taking Rights Seriously by Ronald Dworkin, Constitution Law of United States, The laws by Plato, etc.Since many cases concerns economic disputes and my second major is economics, I also read some books in this field such as The Economics of Money, Banking and Financial Markets by Frederic.S.Mishkin, Economics by Paul.A.Samuelson，The Problem of Social Cost by Ronald Harry Coase, etc.Apart from that, after a half year’s training, now I am very confident to pass the Judicial Vocational Qualification Test in the near future.I had been the programme manager of SIFE(Student In Free Enterprise)programmes at my university, which is an international non-profit organization that works with leaders in business and higher education to mobilize university students to make a difference in their communities while developing the skills to become socially responsible business leaders.There I had leaded my team taking a series of social cases among which I would like to share the most unforgettable ones.Our first programme was the Bangbangjun Program.“Bangbangjun” is a typical Chongqing way to call the luggage porters, who are the migrant workers.Suffering from frequent discrimination, they live their lives at the foot of the social ladder.There are some companies to manage their business.Through on-site inspection we found that the situation was worse than our imagination in those companies.Deficiencies and shortages existed everywhere such as in legal security, internal systems, labor rights, and the financial management.With the help of the supervisor

as well as lawyers and business consultant we tried to find universal business modes to benefit as more porters as we can.After 3 years’ endeavor we succeeded in bringing the company with advanced business modes and legal aids, setting up websites and establishing brands, perfecting taxing structure and internal regulations;strengthening employees’ protection and helping the company in refunding.There, my tasks were to lead my team to supervise the operation of the procedures, provide legal guidance in equity and interest allocation, social insurance and the process of refunding.Additionally, I also did researches on the life status of migrant workers and guided them to protect their legal rights.In the end I wrote the annual report for the programme.Much as I applied of my professional skills and felt about the hardships of the migrant works, I congratulated myself that I had chosen such a noble cause.Moreover, I had participated in another programme named FedEx Migrant Workers’ Children Success Skills Program.The aim of the programme was to achieve better communications between migrant worker parents and their children, promote more educational opportunities for these children, and help them to establish a scientific life and social value.In order to lead my team to fulfill the task, I invited professionals to come to offer psychological consultation;gave inspiring speeches, recruited volunteers to teach them social etiquette and hygiene knowledge;and organized books and stationery donation activities.With these management experiences I had a more comprehensive understanding on how to lead a team to fulfill a task, making it so easier in the third programme called Global Entrepreneurship Week in Chongqing University.By patrols speeches and entrepreneur interviewing did we provide a communication and resource-sharing platform for university students.In this way did students could learn from the entrepreneurs’ experience and knowledge in a more vivid way.This time I followed up the whole process from scheme, arrangement, implementing, leading the team to solve problems encountered, especially in the status limitation, content prescription, and school official approval convincing.Besides, I took other programmes as well such as GSVC(Global Social Venture Competition), in which I was responsible for checking agreement and compliance;and EOP(Economic Opportunity Program), in which I took charge of protocoling the framework of their cooperation with primary school.Apart from my practice experience in SIFE, I had another internship in summer vacation in Beijing’s No.1 Intermediate People’s Court, where I had learned basic criminal litigation procedures, connecting processes with public security organ and procuratorial organ and the criminal litigation defending skills.One other internship I had was in Bangbangjun Moving Company from 2009~2011.In that company I helped the staff with my professional advice in checking agreement and compliance;

formulating the regulations, explicating the pision and assign of stock rights, etc.When I was exhausted from my work and studies, I would do some exercise to get myself refreshed and revitalized.As the reward of unceasing efforts of being the national second-level athlete, I did a good job in 2008 Swimming Competition of the University Games in Chongqing, and won the third place of 50-meter freestyle, the third place of 100-meter butterfly, and the first place of 4 × 100-meter freestyle respectively.Additionally, I also performed well in 2009 Swimming Competition of Healthy Campus Games in Chongqing, and won the first place of 50-meter backstroke, the second place of 4 × 100-meter mix-style and freestyle respectively.As for career planning, I intend to pursue my further study of international business law or trade law after passing the Judicial Professional Qualification Test;In order to be a partner of law office, I would accumulating my experience mainly in non-lawsuit legal matters and foreign matters;afterwards there would be some further academic demands such as applying for Phd degree.The legal system in P.R.China now is changing with a higher pace compared with that of the economics globalization, resulting in a greater demand for qualified lawyers who can deal with international cases such as political disputes among countries, business disputes among enterprises, and cultural transmission.I want to be one of them who can handle international affair easily due to their domestic education and experience abroad.Wherefore hoping that by contrasting, coordinating and coalescing could I view law and justice from a new and unique angle, I intend to apply to study at your honored university.Sincerely hope that you would spare a careful thought on my considerate decision and I am looking forward to your favorable reply.Thank you!

第五篇：出国留学申请之个人陈述写作技巧及

个人陈述(Personal Statement)写作技巧

自述，也即Personal Statement, 是所有出国文件中最重要的部分，它是申请者最主要的自我包装。申请被录取和经济资助就是要把自己推销给评审者。你的重任是让这一文件反映你的个性和才智。写自述即使对以英语为母语的北美学生也是颇费心力的事情，对中国申请者来说，用英语写作本来就是困难的事，更何况自述是为了表现和包装自己，有违我们的文化习俗，写起来往往备感吃力。中国申请者往往没有面谈的机会，这份文件因而愈发显得重要。

我们要忠告所有的申请者，你必须抓住机会，充分而且恰如其分地表现你的人格力量、智慧和已取得的成就。在此文件的创作中要花大量的精力，决不能知难而退，草率从事。你已经花费了多年的心血，完成了大学甚至是研究生的学习，你也可能又在随后的工作岗位上积累了宝贵的经验，现在又通过艰苦卓绝的努力，成功地考过了TOEFL和GRE。然而，你的任务并没有结束。你必须静下心来，有条不紊地处理多种文件，而其中自述是重中之重。

怎样真正地把此项工作当作重中之重呢？那并不是赶紧去习一本所谓范例然后照着抄，而是要借此机会严肃、认真和全面审视自己的才能、潜能、出国留学的目的。这种对自己的能力、向往和追求的透彻的了解是写好自述的基础。根据编者在国外求学、工作的经验，可以这么说，在写好自述这件事上，中国留学生可以说是遇上了一个深层次而且是重大的文化差异。所谓“深层次”就是说这个差异不是西方人喝咖啡中国人喝茶、西方人称“Darling”而中国人称“孩子他妈”那样简单。

北美的许许多多的“雇主”-----大学的录取评审者，确实是非常重视求职者、求学者对自身是否了解，对自己的前途和目标是否明确。在他们的文化中，这样的自我了解被视为是人的素质中很重要的一部分。他们的文化同时也十分重视对自身的了解和对目标的追求做出个性化的表达能力。本文并不是要讨论文化问题，而是力求以最短的篇幅给读者以最大的实用指导。本软件编者最大遗憾就是申请者把写作自述一事当作官样文章而草率应付。北美教育机构的官僚主义常常更甚于我国，但要求写自述，的确不是官样文章，而是给申请者一次表现自己的机会。读者切记，这样的表现一定要富有个性。

怎样判断自述是否反映了个性呢？最简单的就是看第二个人是否能写出一样的或是差不多的内容。真正的富有个性的自我介绍是不可能与其他的信雷同的。尽管有许多人有着看上去类似的求学、求职经历，但是每个人对学习、工作、事业和他人的感受应该是独有的而且也应该是独特的。即使两个人所有的学习和工作经历都相同，也都计划去同一个领域里深造，引发他们对该学科感兴趣的外部事物和内心感受也必定是有区别的。所以，在我们谈到写作自述其他注意事项之前，首先要求读者要独具创意。在写作自述的时候，认真而全面地审视自己的方法就是默默地自问如下问题：

1.对所要申请的学校和专业是否有了深入细致的了解，能做到在写自述时紧扣学校和专业的要求及特点，突出自己申请的优势？ 2.我的人生经历中有什么独特的、非同寻常的地方？在我的家庭生活和社会生活中有哪些人或事件影响了我的人生观和事业追求？这些影响有什么与众不同的地方？

3.我最初是如何对目前所选专业感兴趣的？我在其后的岁月中又是如何加深了对这一学科领域的认识？我在这一领域已经取得了什么样的成绩？是什么因素使我自信，能够在这一领域有所建树？

4.在上学期间我从事了那些助教、助研、社会实践、暑期工作？通过这些活动在什么方面得到了提高(比如科研能力、组织能力和领导能力等)？在步入社会后的工作中完成过什么项目，取得了哪些成就，表现出何等才干？ 5.我的最终的事业目标是什么？

6.在我多年来的考试成绩上有没有需要解释的地方？比方说我大学成绩一直很优异，但GRE成绩却不怎么理想；我高年级的成绩是否比低年级的成绩有显著的提高？

7.在自我奋斗的过程中是否需要克服超常的困难，如家庭生活贫困、身体残疾等等？

8.我是否具备杰出的品格，比如诚实，可靠、善良、刻苦等等，而我能否提供真凭实据来加以证明？我是否具备值得一提的很好的特别的工作习惯和态度，以及禀性上的优势。9.我具备什么样的特殊才能，如分析能力、领导才能和交流才能？我为什么比别的申请者更具有在事业上成功的把握？

要回答这些问题的确是不容易的，但你必须在正式写作自述之前全面准备，对这些问题加以认真思考，因为你的自述需要回答所有这些问题或其中的大部分。

对内容有了把握后，就是要注意写作技巧了。这里说的写作技巧不是英语水平的问题，而是写作的思路、取材和段落的安排。写自述的最大忌讳就是写得毫无特色、枯燥乏味。要知道每一个录取评审委员需要阅读成百上千份自述，其中大多数的自述的内容都是雷同的，他们不可能有时间、精力和气力在平淡中寻找不寻常，努力发掘你的优秀之处。要写得醒目，抓住读者的注意力，这个责任完全在于你自己。

所以，自述的第一段或者是前二段至为重要。这头一、二段必须能够引起读者对你的兴趣，并且能够得到关于你个人的最重要的信息。如果你的头一、二段的内容中有闪光之处，能够给人留下不可磨灭的印象，那就达到了最佳效果。绝大多数的申请者的的确确有着类似的学历和工作背景，而且现在又追求一个共同的目标：攻读研究生。在这样的情况下，读者应该不难想见，不论我们是汉语，还是用英语，描述自己的经历和追求的语汇和句式终究会趋向雷同。编者所强调的“独特性”，决不是仅指在语言上要独树一帜。获得独特性的更重要的有两个方法：一是寻找独特的思想方法或者说是审视自己的独特角度，二是在陈述过程中采用故事手法。

采取第一种方法时我们从多种角度着眼确定文章的基调，我们在此对三种较常见的类型写作时所应遵循的策略进行简要论述：

1.克服生活中的逆境型：Peterson's Guide中曾经登载的一封外国人申请时写的自述，作者的家庭背景是贫苦的、不识英文的第一代亚裔移民。作者没有回避自己多花了几年时间才完成大学的教育并且成绩较差这一惨痛的事实，而是就此问题展开对自己的介绍。他的家庭贫困，作为长子肩负帮助父母抚养年幼的妹妹的重任。这样，完成大学教育对他来说需要艰苦卓绝的努力。因此，通过他的叙述，一位奋斗不息、刻苦耐劳并具有高度责任感的年轻人的形象跃然纸上。

这位作者申请的学校是法学院，难度较大，但作者有力地陈述了他的理由：他的父母像许多亚裔移民一样，不通英文，更不懂在美国用法律的手段来保护自己的权益。他现在申请读法学院，目的就是为了将来能够运用法律的武器维护在美国少数族裔的权益。

这样的信读起来感人至深，作者当然也被录取了。成功之处就在于作者能用独特的角度来看待自己的经历和追求的目标。他所陈述的经历、思想和感受与其人生奋斗的目标达到了高度的统一。

在写这种在逆境中奋起的自述时，应通过用事实来描述过去的经历及其对自己的求学、事业和人生目标的正面影响，但切忌耽于自我怜悯，或因一种谴责评判的方式使文章显得充满怨气。

2.自我成长型：这种 申请人在生活、学业和工作上虽不可避免地会遇到挫折，但相对来说，他们的生活进行得比较一帆风顺。写这种自述一定要用正面、肯定的语气，清楚、精炼，同时又要充分、多方面地展示自己独特的才智、事业和求学的追求方向。

3.家庭影响型：这种情况下可以是好的家庭背景对申请者产生了正面的影响，也可以是艰难或不好的家庭环境作用于申请者，使之反思而发奋图强。写正面的影响时注意不要过分渲染家庭的帮助，督促向导作用，因为这样的作者往往不知不觉中会给评审人留下一种自我缺乏主见和动力的印象。同样，写不好家庭的背景时，也不要太多着墨于那些问题，重要的是突出自己不随遇而安、屈从命运安排的精神和志向。

下面再谈谈“故事手法”。所谓“故事”并不是要为自己的经历编故事，而是要有一点(不要太多)生动的情节。除了思想角度外，生动的情节是表现个性和独特性的又一法宝。许许多多的人可以有类似的经历和背景，但他们生命中的具体经历一定具有独特的场景。恰当地描绘一下这样的场景，就会使全文散发出生动而新鲜的气息。比方说有人在谈到家庭的不幸时具体地讲述了因交不起房租被赶到街上过夜的惨痛经历。还有的文中虽然没有任何戏剧性的情节，但作者在好几处细节都突出了自己善于独立思考的个性。作者用朋友们的疑问来衬托出自己决定重返学校、出国深造所饮食的智慧和胆识。作者在谈到自己的业余爱好时，也没有像大多数申请者那样列举出一长串清单，以表现自己多才多艺、面面俱到，而是诚实地说自己没有什么爱好，只是喜欢独自旅行，在大自然中汲取营养和力量，但这爱好却与全文塑造出的深沉和独立思考的性格十分吻合。

至此我们谈到了全面和深刻地审视自己、寻找独特的角度以及注重运用细节等问题。下面还有一些材料的取舍问题提出来供读者参考。

首先，千万不要遗漏掉那些有用的和中肯的成就、经验等等事实。

申请研读的学位越高，那么以往科研、学术成果和工作经验等等就越是重要。许多申请者错误地认为自己发表的文章已经列在履历里面了，在自述中就不应该再提。其实，个个履历是一份完全不同的文件。它是对个人经历的一种简洁而全面的介绍，使读者对申请者能够很快有一个大致的了解。自述则是需要(或是希望)读者仔细阅读的，它要介绍申请者的成就、抱负和个人品德。所以申请者不用担心内容上的重复。还有许多申请者硬是要把自述的篇幅压缩在一页纸内因而只能很简要地提到自己的成就。其实，如果内容充实，为什么不能写到二至三页呢？比如说到发表的论文，往往只提到一个题目。其实，写一篇科研论文往往是要付出巨大心血的。这不光是写篇文章，而是反复的科学论证和无数次实验的结晶。申请者起码应该用二至三个句子，说明这篇论文所代表的实验、实验用的方法、目的和获得的成绩。还应该说明通过发表这篇(或几篇)论文，申请者在这一领域做出了什么贡献，获得了哪些思想方法、认识和科研手段上的提高。

还有的申请者犯的是一个相反的错误，他们把高中甚至更早的成就也不厌其烦地列在自述上。比如当上了三好学生、少先队长之类的。因为中国学生申请的学位最低的也是硕士研究生，大学时期的成绩或是随后工作上的成就更为贴切，也应该足以用作素材了。当然，少儿时期的成就，若是对随后的学术道路产生了重大的影响，也可以提。有的申请者对某一学科，比如说数学，情有独钟，很早就显露出天才，在中学时期在数学竞赛中获奖，由此激发了对此学科的强烈兴趣，从此矢志不渝，这样提就非常妥当。

最好不提的还有政治观点、宗教信仰和其他一切容易引起争议的不同寻常的话题。有个别申请者在文件中提到了“上帝”这样的字眼，犯了西方社会宗教和学术分离的大忌。

我们建议你撰写自述时没有必要对自己的事业和生活道路上的挫折讳莫如深。只是在描述或提到经历的苦难，挫折或失败时，切记不要流露出乞求怜悯恩赐，或气愤怀恨的情绪。许多杰出的人物都曾经历过困屯。人们一般会欣赏那些不被困难压倒，不因失败沮丧，在逆境中寻找光明的人，关键在于你是否用积极正面的态度对待挫折并表现出这种积极的态度。

最后需要提醒读者注意的是，写自述绝对不能一蹴而就，写好后需反复修改，清除多余的部分，增加与针对申请学校和专业相对应的内容，密切注意句与句之间，段落之间，及整篇文章意思的逻辑联系。可多方听听他人的意见。务必做到文章中不存在任何文法，语法或拼写上的错误。这种疏忽看似无关紧要，实际上它们有时恰恰能出乎意料地破坏你力图在评审人心目中树立的形象。很难想象，繁忙的教授在连着数次看到简单的语法或拼写错误后，还会相信你是文中所说的一个认真的精益求精的人。

避免错误开头方式（工程类）

PERSONAL STATEMENT previous Education: When in the high school I first used the computer, I was attracted by it.From then on, to become an expert in the field of electrical and computer technology has been my favorite dream.In 2098, successfully passed the most competitive examinations, especially in the mathematics I got the full score(120 out of 120), I was admitted by the Electronic Engineering Department of Tsinghua University which is the most distinguished university in China.（这是中国学生最喜欢的一中开头方式，可是并不符合statement的一般习惯，请学习修改稿的开头方法。）

During my academic years, I worked hardly（work hardly 与 work hard 的区别相信大家都知道，这样的错误是不可原谅的。）and obtained good scores in most courses, especially in the basic courses and major courses.When graduation, my overall GPA ranked the upper 10% among about 200 students.Education at Tsinghua University emphasizes practice.In the third year of study, I applied to join the Lab.of Information Systems.In the lab I successfully designed “2Mb/s PCM Digital Interface(32 frames)” which was used in the analogue PBX(Private Branch Exchange).In 1993, I independently designed “Speech Signal Processing Card” which was used in the SUN SPARC station.This card's successful design solved the problem that the SUN SPARC station could not be used to the speech processing and the multimedia application.From these designs I accumulated the experience of hardware development and mastered the knowledge of communications theory and computer technology such as the hardware structure of the RISC computer, UNIX operating system and programming.Through the five years of study in Tsinghua University I have not only mastered rich professional theory but also accumulated strong experience on hardware design and software program.All of these laid a solid foundation for my further work and study.Because of my hard study, as reward, I was recommended to enter the graduate program at Tsinghua directly, waived of the admission test.It is Tsinghua's policy to endow the most distinguished students such preference.However, anxiously wanting to practice my knowledge in the real work and because of some other reason, I resigned the esteemed privilege.Work Experience

After graduation, I have been working as an electronic engineer in North China Institute of Computing Technology(NCI).She, awarded as “Chinese royal computing institute”, is the earliest and most famous computer institute in China.In the institute I entered a new field---automation and got the chance to practice my knowledge learned from the university.In order to work better, in these years I have learned some textbooks by myself, such as: Computer Control Technology, Contemporary Control Theory, Electrical Control Technology, Process Control & Automation Device.In more than three years I worked very hard and completed some projects perfectly.Because of my firm skills in hardware and software and strong background of theory, in 1995 I was appointed as the leader to manage and design the computer control system---“Distributed Control System(DCS)”.In the period less than a year, under the cooperation and support of others, my colleagues and I completed the design of system structure, modules' development, software system programming and the debugging of the whole system.This system is the Real-time computer control system and can be combined up to the 2048 channels.In the project I independently designed the kernels---CPU module, two other modules and the I/O interface software.This system is at the leading position in the automation field of China.Electrical and computer engineering is developing fast, in order to keep up with the advanced technology, I left North China Institute of Computing Technology(NCI)in Aug.1997 and joined my now working companythe ability to excel in the face of challenges.In fact, the outcome of my efforts in undergraduate studies did prove that the determination that I conceived at the beginning of college years to excel my classmate was not a breed of vanity.By the time I completed my four years of undergraduate studies, I had outperformed most of my classmates.On the strength of my outstanding academic record, I was chosen by my professors to enter into the graduate program of my university without having to pass the normally mandatory admission test, a privilege that is only reserved for the very best students each graduation year.Four years of undergraduate studies equipped me with basic research skills in international politics, and my outstanding performance naturally placed me on the path to higher academic pursuits.As a highly motivated undergraduate, I took many politics and economics courses, such as Political Science, International Relations, International Organization, International Finance and International Trade, as you can see from my transcripts.My overall GPA ranked me first among the 40 students of my academic year, wining me top honors.I was one of the 80, selected from the university's 8,000 students, to receive the Excellent Academic Achievement Scholarship(First Class)in the 1994-95 school year.In the 1995-1996 school year, I was one of university's 15 students awarded the BaoGang Scholarship(First Prize).In the 1996-1997 school year, I received the Outstanding Academic Performance Scholarship, one of the only five students at the university who earned this honor.In my junior and senior years, having grasped a basic understanding of the discipline, I started to read many classic works on international relations, including Politics among Nations, Theory of International Politics, War and Change in World Politics, and Power and Interdependence: World Politics in Transition.I also frequented the library to read a host of journals on a regular basis.By reading critically such authoritative publications as American Political Science Review, International Organization, World Politics, and Foreign Affairs, I kept myself well informed of the latest academic research findings and also improved my English language skills.To cultivate other capabilities, I also engaged myself in extracurricular activities.From 1995 to 1998, I was elected president of the International Politics Class, a departmental student association responsible for the management of academic studies, extracurricular activities, student orientation programs and other student affairs.Serving as president of the association, I was closely involved in the communication and collaboration with other student organizations and sometimes took part in the activities organized by them.By organizing those extracurricular activities, I trained myself in leadership and organization skills.The Class performed exceptionally well, winning “Excellent Class of Beijing” for several years in a row, an award given by Beijing Education Bureau to the best student associations of the capital.As a graduate student, I was designated an Excellent University Graduate of Beijing(1997-1998)for my outstanding academic and extracurricular performance, an award given to only 200 students in Beijing a year.I began my graduate research with the aim of acquiring abilities in doing independent research because I believe that advanced education is more than a continuation of undergraduate studies.The graduate work should not only lead a student deeper into the ocean of research but also train him to enter a profession in which his acquired knowledge is constantly required in his daily work.A desirable graduate education should involve a student to consciously build up his independent research abilities by working closely with a distinguished scholar whose research work can be modeled after.It is with this understanding that I began my research career at the Center for European Studies of People's University in early 1998.The center, directed by distinguished Professor Song Xinning, Deputy Head of the Department of International Politics, is manned by several professors with European research background from social sciences pisions of the People's University.Immersed in this stimulating environment, I have been well trained in advanced research methodologies.By attending workshops and seminars presented by visiting professors from overseas, I acquainted myself with new concepts and theories in political science, broadening my disciplinary perspective and gaining insights into the field.Satisfied with my performance, Professor Song hired me as his research assistant to work on a project headed by himself, China Policy of the Clinton Administration in its Second Term.I believe I have acquired the necessary theoretical framework and practical experience for advanced studies.If I am accepted, I will pursue graduate studies on international relations as my major and comparative policy analysis as my minor field of study.Equipped with the ability to teach myself and conduct independent research, I will be able to attain competence quickly in areas that I may at first know very little about.I am confident that I can make quick progress in my fields, especially in international relations theory, international political economy, foreign policy and international security.To me, graduate studies are as intellectually exhilarating as they are challenging.Choosing which school to attend and what degree to pursue is not an easy decision.After careful evaluation and comparison, I have now settled on applying to your distinguished graduate school as my first choice, because I believe that the courses I can select from your curriculum can best train me for the realization of my goals.The graduate program of xxxxx, ranking among the best in the United States, is playing a pioneering role in international studies.I believe your school sets an ideal stage for me to exercise my mental power and diligence, and that my intended disciplinary training can be best pursued with the aid of your distinguished faculty and remarkable research facilities.After I complete the program, I plan to devote myself to a teaching career in China.With the friendship I can strike in your program with both students and faculty, I should be able to arrange academic exchanges by inviting leading scholars to visit China.Such exchanges will be conducive to building up shared understanding between China and the US about the world and the relationships our respective countries enjoy with each other.China undoubtedly takes its relationship with the US as its most important relationship with any foreign country, and, correspondingly, the US is attaching increasing importance to its relationship with China.As American politicians have realized, the nature of Sino-US relationship will determine, to a large extent, whether the 21st century is one of peace or conflict.As China strives to feed its exploding population, it cannot do without a peaceful international environment.I would like to attain the necessary knowledge and forge the necessary understanding so that I can help your country and mine coexist in peace in the coming century.化学类

With the approach of new century, the developing China is requiring better trained and more highly educated men and women than ever before in history.In order to make more contributions to the society and, at the same time, satisfy my keen interest in science, I am looking forward to beginning my graduate study.I heard of Case Western Reserve University as early as when I was an undergraduate student.She is one of the most highly regarded universities in the world and is an ideal place for ambitious youth.I plan to study for Ph.D.in Biochemistry at Case Western Reserve University with special interests in metabolism, macromolecular synthesis, and protein crystal growth.I have had plentiful preparations.First, when being an undergraduate in the Department of Chemical Engineering at Tsinghua University, I got very extensive and intensive education.I took many courses on chemistry and the related subjects, and earned high scores for most of them.Second, my major, Polymer, can be put into good use in Biochemistry programs because Polymer is closely related with biological Macromolecule.Third, I have working experience that enriches my theory and laboratory skills.From 1990 to now, I have been engaged as an Assistant Engineer by the Research institute, Beijing Yanshan Petrochemical Corporation(RIBYPC).In the first year, I was in charge of a 5-litre reactor for polymerization of Carboxylated Butadiene-Styene Latex.Then I was transferred to another research group to synthesize PET/PHB copolymer, a kind of polyester, which has the property of Liquid Crystal.I am the assistant head of the group.We can prepare the novel polymer with high molecule weight and excellent