第一篇:bec写作部分总结
作文总结: 语法错误:
1.单词拼写,如“installment 分期付款的摊付金,(经常被误用)“installation 安装,设置,军事设备”;”available“误写成availble 2.介词或短语但配用错,多见于固定搭配的介词用错,如”be satisfied with“,有的同学掉动词be,有的人介词搭配错误。“report on…”,“proposal for…”, 3.介词后面接名词或动名词,而不是不定时或动词原形。如“for to do(x)for do(x)” 应为“for doing“;“aim at doing sth.”,“aim to do sth.”“due to+名词”“because +从句”“because of(owing to)()名词”等。
4.句型冗杂,注意从句不要漏了先行词“that”“which”“where”等。例:“I have heard about there was a.....“(x)应为” I have heard about that there was a...“ 5.单词词义和词性变化。”produce“ ”product“ ”production“的区别等。6.主谓一致问题。
7.时态一致。如“last year.....”有明确表明过去时,用一般过去时,而不是用完成时或现在时;recently, already, since等词经常和完成时搭配。格式错误:
1.信函称呼后用逗号,用冒号或不加标点都是错误的。2.信函写完一定记得署名。
3.写report 或proposal时一定要记得左对齐,每一个部分写完要空一格。写作内容:
1.不要漏些信息点,这样扣分很严重!
2.条理要清晰,不要东一句西一句。一般情况下采用“总-分”的形式;每段的第一句是中心句,表明自己的观点,立场,或想法,然后根据中心句展开。内容太多可分成几段,如果是report 或proposal,必要时用序列号罗列,但不可千篇一律都罗列。3.写作中要写明具体事件,理由和实例,不要用“something“ ”somebody“ ”some problems“的含糊不清字眼。(实例和实践可以多参考范文)。
4.句子简洁明了,句型多变,不要整篇文章下来只有一个句型:“I have...” “I think....” “I do...” 5.写report和 proposal时尽量用客观的语气,多用数据,实例说话,主语非人主语。6.多用范文中的句型,如 “It is...“ ”The reasons are as follows"“it is advisable(recommended, suggested)that…”等。
第二篇:BEC写作
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Reference To: Mr.R.Harrison Date: 5 April, 2008From: Tina Sub: The transferring of the Photocopy RoomBecause the complex is being decorated, the photocopy room needs moving to some other building before this Friday for a four-week period of time.Please let me know where you think to be a properly temporal site for it by 8:30 tomorrow morning.To: Sally Date:4 May, 2008From: Jim Sub: the meetingThe monthly sales staff meeting is to be held at 9:30 Thursday(7 May).Mr.Scott is making a presentation at the meeting.Please see to that the overhead projector and computer are ready in the meeting room before the meeting starts.If you have any problem in your arrangement, plslet me know.To: Mr.Braun Date:3 March, 2008From: JesicaSub: New system is working.The Training Dept.is collecting the feedback of he operation of the new system.Plssend them the report on:1.How long the system has been working in your Dept.2.What jobs it is used for.3.How it is working.The report is expected by 4 p.m.this Friday(7 March).
To: J.FegusDate:3 April, 2008From: B.SchneiderSub: If the textbook is free for the trainee.The part time oral English course is starting soon and the list of the trainees has been collected.Before distributing the textbooks to the trainees, I’d like to check on matter: if the textbook is free for the trainees.Please let me know about this as soon as possible.To: Fred Date:May 6From: Peggy Sub: I’m having a meeting at HQ during Wednesday and Thursday and back to the office on Friday, so you have to:1.)pick up Ms.Homyat the airport at 5:10 pm(her flight number is CJ 473)on Thursday, and take her to the Grand Hotel where a single room has been reserved for her;2.)tell Ms.Homythat I’m sorry not to be able to pick her personally as planned, but I am meeting her in the office at 10:30 on Friday.Thank you a lot.Try to write a memo1.Suppose you are to send a memo for the Personnel manager to all staff on the May Day holiday, which starts at 4:30 pm on the 30th April and ends at 9:00 am on the third May.2.Send a memo, in the tone of a librarian, to one of your colleagues Jesica,to remind him that the book System Analysisby J.Harding, borrowed from the company’s library 8 weeks ago, has met the returning date on 5 November.Reference 1To: all the staff From: Personnel ManagerDate: April 25 Sub: May Day holidayThe May Day holiday starts at 4:30 pm on April 30 and ends at 9:00 am on May 3.it will be very much appreciated if your desks could be cleared up before your leave.Have fun.Reference 2To: JesicaFrom: Mary from the library Date: 1,November Sub: The book needs renewingI am sending the memo to remind you that the book, System Analysisby J.Harding, borrowed from our library 8 weeks ago is due to be returned by the date on 5 November.If you do need to keep it for another more days, you are expected to get it renewed by the deadline or, regretfully, you’ll have to pay the fine after the 5th November.3.Send a memo to one of your assistants Jimmy as to ask him collect data for your attendance of the coming conference on the latest promotion.Youmay need to know about how much money you spent on the promotion, what were the mainmeans of the promotion and what was the result(or the sales)like.Set up a deadline for the data collection so that you can be sure to obtain thatbefore you go for the meeting.Reference 3To: Jimmy From: MaryDate:27, May Sub: Data on last promotion needed.As at the company conference on the third of June I’m presenting our last promotion for solar water-heater, I’d like to ask you to collect the data on:1.when it was prepared and the length of its operation2.how much it was budgeted and how much exactly it cost finally.3.what the turnovers were like.4.what was supposed to be the strength and weakness.Please send me the data by the first of June.Thanks a lot.John Lathenis General Manager at West Garden Supplies of CreschentRoad.Ipwich.John Lathensays to you today:“I’d like you to write a memo for me to our van and lorry drivers, please.They must report to Leslie Parker, the Transport Manager, as soon as possible.Leslie wants to tell them about some new one-way streets and no-parking zones which have just been made in Ipswich.There have also been a few changes of garages where we get out petrol for our transport at cheap rates, which they should know about.That reminds me---I must see Leslie about old Tom Jones who was stopped by the police for speeding yesterday.Remind them that they should see Leslie about having their vehicles serviced next month.Oh yes, on no account should they exceed speed limits wherever they drive on business.If they are convicted for speeding , they pay the fine themselves.To: All van and lorry drivers From: Mr.John Lathen, General Manager Sub: Reporting to Transport ManagerDate: 5 April, 2008Please report to Mr.Leslie Parker, the Transport Manager, as soon as possible.He has some important information for you about some new one-way streets and no-parking zones in Ipswich.He will also tell you which garages you can use for petrol at cheap rates.You should also make it a point to arrange with Leslie t have your vehicles serviced next month.I would like you to remember not to exceed speed limits, as it is company policy not to pay speeding fines.2.Send a memo to inform your upper management of the fact that some of your staff are not quite for the idea of installing an air-conditioner in your office, as some don’t like the unfreshair in a conditioned room and some complain that air conditioned working place makes their skin feel dry and back ache.To: From: Date:Sub: The disagreement on the air-conditionerGetting an air-conditioner installed in our office turns out to be an idea that results in disagreement.About four of the whole staff, which takes up almost 50% of the team, are not for the idea.Their disagreement mainly covers:1)The air in an air-conditioned room is not fresh and since so many people are stuffed in the office, it is likely to make diseases such as flu catching on quickly.2)the dry air in an air-conditioned room is a nuisance and caused skin bothered problem.It seems if there is to be an conditioner in our office, a moisture maker should be installed at the same time and another small office is needed for at least two staff of us.Reference
第三篇:BEC中级写作句型总结(范文)
原因结果
1….(结果)…, owing to(原因)[owing to 为分词结构]
2….(结果)…, attributable to(原因)[attributable to为形容词短语]
3….(结果)lie in the fact that(原因)[ 同位语从句 ]
4….(结果)result from(原因)[句型一般]
5.It is precisely because(原因)…that(导致结果)… [强调结构]
6.…, as a result, …(导致结果)… [as a result做插入语]
7.(原因)be responsible for(结果)[常见句型]
8.(原因),which in turn(结果)
eg.They give rise to unfair competition, which in turn throws original businesses into a commercial panic.九.采取措施,提出建议
1.My suggestion to deal with/solve/relieve the problem are as follows.In the first place,….Secondly,….Finally,… [常见句型]
2.If we let the situation go as it is, ….By that time, ….如果让这种情况继续发展下去,那么……。
到那个时候,……。[比较好的句型]
3.More and more people are realizing the importance of…[进行时态,more and more比many好]
4.Great efforts/More measures/Due attention must be taken/paid to do …[ 被动语态,due attention 和be paid to 搭配]
5.If……, will there be anything that can make me even happier? 如果(我们怎么怎么做),那将没有比这令我更高兴的了。[条件句,反问句]
6.It is important/necessary/urgent/desirable(希望)/advisable(明智)for sb.to do sth.[It is …for …to do…句型]
7.enhance the awareness of people that…
8.The first nut for us to crack is… 我们首先要解决的是……。[比The first thing we should do is … 句型 高级的多,精彩的多,生动的多]
9.……as soon as possible [常见句型]
10.sth.be of the utmost importance [ be of n.结构,比sth.be much important好]
十.方式,比较
1.(Just)as …, so… 正如… [ 比较句型 ]
eg.Just as water is the most important of liquids, so air is the most important of gases.2.in much the same way/manner that… 正如…, 和…一样
eg.The Americans spend Christmas Day in much the same way that the Europeans do.十一.让步
1.now that …… 既然…… [让步从句]
eg.Now that the decision has been made, we must try our best to carry it out.2.unless…not… [ 让步从句]
eg.It is a vicious cycle and unless you consider these social, economic and environmental problems in one context, you are not serious about meeting the challenges.[注意例句中的consider sth.in one context句型:把什么事情放在一起加以综合考虑]
十二.强调句
1.only [既是强调句,又是倒装句]
eg.Only in this way can you hope to improve the present situation.2.It is …that…
eg.It is because he was too careless that he failed in the exam.3.nothing but 只不过;只有…
eg.If what we have been striving for is nothing but pleasure-seeking, our nation will be deprived of the right to rise.(这里nothing but 可以去掉,不影响句意,但有了nothing but,就强调了后面的名词)
十三.假设
1.Supposing……, it is likely that….假设…, 那么很可能… [假设, 虚拟语态]
eg.Supposing you wanted to buy a washing machine, it is more than likely you would obtain details regarding performance, price, etc.from an advertisement.十四.反问
1.What else can …? …………还能做什么呢?
eg.What else can the poor parents do but obey? 这些可怜的家长除了听从外还能做什么呢?
2.How could ……? 怎能….eg.How could I put the English books aside to read pastime books?
十五.比较
1.A is to B what X is to Y.A对于B 就象X对于Y
eg.Food is to man what oil is to machines.2.……more…, less…
eg.The closer to Christmas, the crazier they get;they become more agitated, less patient.十六.否定
1.双重否定
not uncommon = common平常的,普通的not unusual = usual平常的,通常的not inevitable=evitable 可以避免的(尽量把要强调的普通的形容词改成双重否定, 为文章多增加亮点)
2.by no means 并没有;当然不
3.no longer/more 不再
eg.I am no longer that ignorant girl.十七.程度
1.all the more 更加
eg.That makes London all the more fascinating, doesn't it?
eg.It is all the more surprising therefore that…
2.more than 做副词, 意为 “多过…”, “比…以上”, “比…更”
eg.I am more than happy to hear from you.3.more than you can… 远超过你…
eg.The situation is very abominable more than you can stand.环境非常恶劣,你无法忍受.十八.论相互关系
1.A have much(nothing)to do with B
2.A be closely related to B
3.A be directly bound up with B
4.a definite link between …and…
十九.直陈观点
1.more than…can 简直不,无法,难以…
eg.The beauty of the city is more than I can describe.2.beyond description 无法描述
eg.The beauty of the city is beyond description.3.There is no point(use)in doing… …是没有任何意义的.4.The first nut for us to crack is … 我们首先要解决的问题是…
5.short-sighted policy 眼光短浅的政策
6.while ……with one hand, ……with the other.当(我们)一方面…., 而另一方面…eg.While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.7.far from 远离,远远不,非但不
eg.Far from taking exception(take exception:反对), no one is even mildly surprised.8.be bound to
eg.Any discussion of this topic is bound to question the aims of education.9.(or)vice-versa 反之亦然
10.sth.be measured in terms of … sth.用…来衡量
eg.“success” is measured in terms of freedom from insecurity.11….(现象)…, upon which views vary from person to person.12.A be more essential to B.对B来说, A是尤为关键重要的.13.Distinguished scientific accomplishment is a matter of opportunity and of continuous and concentrated effort over long years.(很优美的句子,值得借鉴)
14.from the …point of view 从…角度来看
eg.From the health point of view 从健康的角度来看
15.……must be rooted out in order to ….…必须根除以…
eg.Moral corruption must be rooted out in order to preserve the integrity of the state.为了使国家健康发展,必须根除腐败.16.…represent only the tip of the iceberg.…….只是冰山一角
eg.The most famous stars represent only the tip of the iceberg.17.The rapid progress in science and technology has given a powerful shove-ahead to the productive forces of the world and the economic and social development of humanity.科技的快速发展带给世界生产力和人类经济和社会的发展一个强劲的推动力(2001年****的七.一讲话).18.….stand tall and aim far, broaden one's vision and give full play to one's intelligence and wisdom on the broad arena of reform, opening-up and the modernization drive.站的高看的远,开扩自己的视野,在改革开放和现代化建设的大舞台上充分发挥个人才智(2001年****的七.一讲话).(句中很多的词组都是作文中可以运用到的,比如改革开放:reform(and)opening-up等)
19….demonstrate the value of one's life and work hard to achieve feats that will live up to the expectations of the people and the times.证实自己的人生价值,努力的工作取得成就,而不辜负人民和时代的期望.(出处同上)
20.When asked about…, the overwhelming majority of people say that ….But other people think of … as…./ But I think quite differently.(对报刊上某一问题(已有不同的人发表了不同的观点)发表自己的观点)
21.It is generally believed/accepted/held that… 通常认为….It is no denying the fact that….无可否认…
23……… , so…that…
eg.The river is very clear, so clear that you can see the fishes coming and going in it.eg.Everything is covered with a thick layer of dust, so poisonous that all the grass, trees, vegetables and flowers gradually die.二十.辨证分析
1.Just as the popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”.From one side,….from the other side,….正如一个谚语所说的, “每个硬币都有两面(事物都是一分为二的)”.从一方面看……… 从另一方面来看………
二十一.比喻,拟人
1.They are taken prisoners by fame and their achievements turn into a bar to further advance.2.True and deep love of life is the spring from which flow courage, confidence and power.二十二.副词
1.admittedly 应当承认:
Admittedly, a few governments have taken timid measures.2.simply 简而言之:
The answer is simply money.3.discreetly 小心谨慎地:
point out discreetly that…
4.conceivably 可以想象地:
Smoking may, conceivably, be harmful.5.surely 肯定地:
This is surely the most short-sighted policy you could imagine.6.eagerly 渴望地
7.increasingly 不断增长地
While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.8.honestly: 诚实地:
the government is honestly concerned about the welfare of its people政府真心实意地关心它的人民的福利
9.certainly: 当然地
As inpiduals we are certainly weak, but if …作为个人,我们当然是弱小的,但是如果…
第四篇:BEC中级写作精选
BEC中级写作范文精选
1.November 13
Dear Ms Goddard
With reference to your letter of November 3, I am writing to thank you for your kind invitation.I would be very pleased to accept your invitation to visit Oxford and see Trackplus’ production facilities.I would also be interested in meeting your colleagues at Head office, the design team in particular.I should also be delighted to accept your offer of arranging for me to see a play in the West End.Unfortunately, due to a business trip abroad, I am unable to come to England at the end of November as you suggested.However, as I feel it is important that we meet before Christmas I would be grateful if you could tell me if the second week of December would be suitable for you?
I look forward to hearing from you again.Yours sincerely
Paolo Fellini
2.MEMORANDUM
To: All members of staff, Northern Branch
From: K.J.L
Date: 5 December 2004
Subject: Personal Computers
The board urgently requires feedback on our experience with PCs in Northern Branch.I need to know, for our report:
1.What you personally use your PC for and your reasons for doing this.If you are doing work that was formerly done by other staff, please justify this.2.What software you use.Please name the programs.3.How many hours per day you spend actually using it.4.How your PC has not come up to your expectations.5.What unanticipated uses you have found for your PC, that others may want to share.Pleas fax this information directly to me by 5 p.m.on Wednesday, 7 December.If you have any queries, please contact my assistant, Jane Simmonds, who will be visiting you on Tuesday, 6 December.Thank you for your help.
第五篇:BEC写作QUESTION1
BEC写作范文QUESTION1
HEADLINE
Below is a report on the changes in turnover for three kinds of outlet,owed by one company, over a three-year period.The charts below shows sth given by customers in sth
Performance Report 2011-2012
Introduction
The aim of this report is to describe the company’s performance in the years 2011-2012
This report outlines the development of profits in three plants, in London… and describe the staffing situation in each plant.Article
The highest overall sth of number pounds was obtained/reached , on the other hand, the smallest turnover was made in sth.注意按顺序写,否则就是没逻辑
Plummeted to about 1000 in 2012
Almost maintain this position throughout /remained almost unchanged Turnover rose steadily from 2000
-reaching it’s peak in 2012 with 1000(reach a low at 7.5 million)(peaked in the second quarter with earning exceeding the 4 million level.)
A slight increase of 100 in 2012
In conclusion, 把前面的总结一遍
不出数字者死。
Whereas
Said something negative/positive 想不出就用这个
结构上要变换: asked about… looking into… sth is… people say that总之不能一样 否则就是BAND2 OR BAND3
连续下降不需要写所有数据 Bristol employed 600 people and reached profits of 12 million in the first quarter.The profits plummeted steadily to 9 million in the last quarter.Are likely to maintain
换段之后可以直接出现名词,例如:
TV sets, on the other hand
Increase during the time from xx to xx.再次上升soar once again to xx during xx.有波动: are likely to fluctuate starting off at 5000, sakes will increase to 10000 during the time, only to decrease to 5000 during the time.比例: ratio is xx to xx in a time, the first representing the number of women and the latter-men.In the group 44 to 49 the split is slight(29 male to 28 female)
The difference reaches 20 in range 50 to 59, with 39 male directors and 19 female.women hold the position in comparison to 21 men.Ending at 最后一个数据
背诵 higher4 test3
Regarding the passenger revenue during 2005 it started around 280 in the first quarter, and increased slowly to around 300 in the third quarter.Then it fell to around 290 at the end of the year.In 2006 the revenue increased steadily to 330 during the second quarter before falling rapidly to around 230 in the 3rd quarter ending at 225 at the end of the year.The percentage of trains arriving on time stayed stable at around 88% during the 1st and 2nd quarter in 2005 and then decreased to 85% in the 3rd quarter before recovering at around 87% at the end of 2005.Till the 2nd quarter in 2006 the percentage decreased steadily to 85% before falling rapidly to 68%(3rd quarter)and recovering to 75% at the end of 2006.Conclusion
It was concluded that sth will be the company’s core product area in the following year.