第一篇:英语书面表达的写作步骤
书面表达的写作步骤
1.审:即审题。
体裁,人称和时态,图表作文读数据,图画作文看内涵,2列:即列要点。
内容要点不遗漏,联系句型和词汇,提纲形式逐条列,3.写:采取总分总格局,龙头猪肚和凤尾。
开头结尾句简洁,要点逐一写成句。
时态人称应注意,句要精短长不宜,4.润:即润色。
组织语言来润色,自己熟练的句式。
连词、副词增连贯,定、状、宾从增逻辑。
(如“so that”、“not„but ” “not only...but also”等)
内容主次分。提纲作文要点全
5.查:即检查。
从头至尾读一遍,行文通顺要点全,时态、语态和拼写,大小写、字数和标点,主谓一致及时变,卷面整洁又美观。
要用熟悉的语句。写作
第二篇:英语书面表达
寒假作业Chinese Young People’s Life Goals Today
A recent survey shows that in today’s society, Chinese young people’s life goals have become more persified than before.When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be rich while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams.The survey shows that the society is making progress and people’s life goals have become more practical.A recent investigation shows that nowadays the young in China have more persified goals than ever before.More than half of the respondents aim at making more money to buy themselves a car and a house.44% of them want to improve their living standard while 43.3% of them hope to become rich.Besides, about a quarter of them wish to get a good job in the future.To achieve their goals, 71.9% of these young people said that they would struggle to overcome difficulties on their ways to success.Keeping optimistic
We can know from the passage if we are optimistic we can conquer different kinds of difficulties in life when we meet them, and we will succeed in the end.In my study, I will get discourage when I fail in an exam.I think I’m hopeless and can’t go to my ideal university.Whenever I am in bad mood, my teachers, especially my homeroom teacher, encourages me to be optimistic by saying the proverb “Nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it.” They also tell me to study harder and give me good advice on my study.I’m grateful to them and agree with them.From now on, I’ll no longer feel frustrated when I fail in an exam.On the contrary, I will still keep optimistic and study harder because I know failure is the mother of success.As long as I don’t loose heart and work hard, I’m sure I’ll succeed in the end.第三周:基础写作:
上周六下午,你们宿舍几个同学去森林公园野炊,回来途中淋了雨。晚上李华头疼得厉害。你给她量体温,发现她发高烧。你马上带她去看医生。医生说她得了重感冒,要卧床休息三天。请你代她给刘老师写一张请假条说明情况,并帮她请假两天(周一、周二),因此她不能参加周二的羽毛球比赛了。
Last Saturday afternoon, I went to Forest Park for a picnic with my roommates.Unfortunately we were caught in the rain on our way home and Li Hua got a dreadful headache.I took her temperature, finding that she was having a fever.So I took her to see the doctor right now and she was advised to be in bed for 3 days.Now I’d like to ask for two days’ sick leave for her, including Monday and Tuesday, and therefore she cannot take part in the badminton game on Tuesday
任务型写作
总结:The writer tried to tell us the importance of setting goals through a beaver’s story.After it built a house for the winter, it set another goal for the spring—to chew down a big tree and succeeded by working hard.你认为制订目标很重要吗?The quest for success always begins with a target.Goal setting is the focus of will to move in a certain direction.Without goals, one will never know what he’s doing, neither will he try his best to do it.你认为制订目标后怎样才能成功?There goes the saying, “Hard work leads to success.” If we want to achieveour goals, we must work hard.Also, we should stick to our goals and never give up when we are faced with setbacks.举例:Last year I took part in an English speech contest.At the beginning I made up my mind to perform best though my English was not good enough.I tried every means and even stood in front of the mirror to practise again and again.Finally I succeeded and become one of the 10 students in the final competition.第四周:基础写作
社会实践是学校教育的一个重要组成部分;书本知识有限;社会实践有诸多好处,能用所学的知识解决实际问题,获取经验,了解社会,端正学习态度,激励学习。
Most of the students think that social practice is not important.In fact social practice is an important part of school education.After all the knowledge we obtain from books is limited.Participation in social practice does a lot of good to us.For example, We can apply what we’ve learned to practical problems, from which we can get more
experience and have more knowledge about our society.Thus we will take correct attitude towards our studies and work harder.任务型写作
总结:From this passage,we know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man strong, so parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life.描述你的童年生活 I grew up in an ordinary family, which is notso well off.I could understand the hardshipsmy parents were bearing at that time.Therefore, I work very hard now in the hopeof entering the university and changing thesituation of my family and me.你对童年生活的认识 我认为从某种意义上来说,艰苦的环境可以激发一个人的潜能,为他的成功铺平道路。I think that in a certain sense, difficult situations can stimulate a person’s potential and pave the way for him to succeed.一个人在经历了磨难之后可以变得坚强,勇敢和忠实可靠。One can be strong, brave and faithful after all the hardships he has gone through.总而言之,我认为温室里的花朵经受不起风暴的洗礼,艰苦的生活对孩子来说是有好处的。All in all, I think that flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children.第四周周六下午
热爱社会工作,性格乐观,富有爱心和责任心;英语口语流利,具有相关的教学经验;工作时间:周六和周日,按每小时5元付费;这份工作给自己在经济和人际关系方面的好处;:表达自己做好工作的决心:把快乐和舒适带给自己工作的对象。
Dear Sir or Madam
I cannot wait to join in the social workers team in our neighborhood.Being optimistic, caring and responsible, I develop a passion for social work.Besides, I am so fluent in spoken English that I was once invited to teach a group of young kids English last summer.What’s more, I have no class on both Saturday and Sundays.If I’m lucky to get the position, It not only provides me a regular source of income by paying me 5 yuan by the hour but also does a lot to improve my skills in interpersonal relationships.It is certain that I will do what I can to bring joy and comfort to whomever I work for.I’m looking forward to your reply very soon.Sincerely yours
Ling ming
就学校取消高三音乐课这一事件给校长写一封信
Dear principal ,I am writing in answer to the decision the school made several days ago.It reminds me of the British school where music plays a big part.In Britain,pupils can study an instrument like the piano or violin or the guitar.They also play music together as a class and have fun, even take part in concerts and organize bands.同学们对学校取消音乐课意见不一Therefore, no sooner had the school announced not to offer music lessons to Senior Two and Three students than we held a heated discussion about its advantages and disadvantages.So far, there has been no consensus on it.你对此决定赞成或反对?Personally, I am among those who argue against the decision largely because music lesson provide us with an opportunity to relieve our heavy academic pressure and promote the mutual understanding between students.(理由)以你自己或他人的感受来说明开设音乐课的利或弊。Actually, nothing please me than music lessons, for I am completely relaxed, not caring about study for a while.Also, I am ready to bear my heart to my classmates and feel close to each other.It is the charm of music that brings all of us a realization that there is still joy in our dull life.So it is better to continue music lessons
汕头一模
1.为何与人合作:现代社会必备;可省时间和精力;更多互相学习的机会
2.与谁合作:A与喜欢的人合作:心情愉快,同甘共苦B与不喜欢的人合作:学会容忍,学会挖
掘其优点
3.你的看法:倾听别人意见,不把你的观点强加给别人,有礼貌地指出别人的错误
Good afternoon,everyone!the topic of my speech today is “being a good parner.”In this busy ,modern world ,if we want to complete our work more efficiently ,we must all learn to cooperate with others ,because not only can cooperation save us a lot of time and energy ,but also we can learn much each other.We`ll be lucky enough to find someone we like to cooperate with due to the fact that we can share our joy and sadness with him.however ,it can be difficult to cooperate with someone we dislike.In this case ,we`ll have to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.In my opinion ,to be a good partner ,we should try to listen to others`opinions ,never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes ,try to point out in a polite way.Thank you for your listening!
失败是件坏事吗?
概括短文要点Failure is a commom thing in life.But there are different attitudes towards failure.Whoever draws a lesson from every failure becomes experienced and succeeds.失败并非坏事,但从失败中站起来并非易事So failure has a different effect on anyone who has a different attitude.As for me ,I like success.Meanwhile I don`t mind failure because it isn`t a bad matter ,and we cen stand up in the failure ,which isn`t indeed an easy matter.失败对胜利者是必修课,重要的基本功As is known ,the defeat to a victor is actually an important basic skill and the required course.你对失败的看法和态度(1)In my opinion ,we should take a positive attitude towards failure.As a matter of fact ,I think failure can stimulate our potential and from it we can learn a lot ,with which we can achieve success.Just as the saying goes ,”Failure is the mother of success.”
(2)In my opinion ,we should take an active attitude towards failure ,because most of us experience the failure thongh few of us are so lucky as to succeed.Failure tells us such things as why we failed and what should we do to correct the mistakes.Failure also tells us how to approach our goals and ensures us failure is the mother of success.广州一模
基础写作简介学校的植物园
1.概况:位于校园西南角,面积1000平方米 2.历史:20年的历史,202_年重建 3.特色:各种花卉、树木、药用植物 4.功能:美化校园、研究植物场所、休闲之地 5.其他:观赏至少许一小时
Located at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden is spread over an area of approximately 1000 square meters.The garden is over 20 years old and was rebuilt in 202_.as you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs.If you’re planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour.The garden makes our schoool more beautiful and it’s a fantastic place for students to study and learn more about plants or simply to relax for a while.读写任务就学生违纪的处理方式写一篇简评
(1)Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?
概括要点:校长的做法、想法、结果I recentl I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.你是否支持该校长的做法,理由While I congratulate the headmaster on his success I do not agree with the methods he uses to achieve it.Suspending students should be the final type of punishment used for misbehaving students, not the first.Quickly removing such students from the school may be of some benefit to the remaining students but it doesn’t solve the problem of poor behaviour.It only shifts the problem from the school to the community.If these naughty students are not in school then they will only be making trouble out of school.Moreover, as the parents of many of these students are working, the students are unsupervised and thus are in danger of falling in with local criminals who will only encourage such bad behaviour and even teach them worse things.假设你是校长,你会如何处理违纪学生?If I was in charge of his school I would place the naughty students in a class of their own, this way the other students could study in peace but the naughty studetns could remain under the supervision of the school and its teachers.The teachers in the naughty class would also have more time to focus on correcting the actions of these misbehaving students.(2)Should Schools Suspend Troublesone Students?
I recently read a news story about a school in Egland whose headmaster often suspends misbehaving students.The headmster believes that strong discipline improves hoth students’ behaviour and academic performance.His school’s exam results have greatly improved during his time in charge.I believe the headmaster is correct to take this action.If a few students are always behaving poorly in class then it will negatively affect other students’ learning.As a result, many innocent studetns will suffer and they will fail to achieve their full potential.If the naughty students are removed from the class then the others can learn in peace.Hopefully the misbehaving students will learn their lessons and when they return their behaviour will be better.If I was in charge of a school I would also be very strict with students who don’t behave well.I would first warn and then suspend students who interrupt the learning of others or disrespect their teachers.But I would also visit the poor student’s home and discuss the problem with his paents so we could find a solution.梅州一模写一篇短文介绍大豆的生长过程
1.发芽的条件:水分充足,温度适宜,种子就开始发芽了 2.第一步:出现幼根,并朝下生长 3.第二步:幼苗出现,并朝上生长,直至变成绿色 4.第三步:主根、旁根、枝叶出现 5.第四步:数月后开花结果
Where there is enough water and the temperature is right, the bean seed begins to grow.In the first stage , a small root comes out and begins to grow downwards.Then a small shoot begins to grow upswards, getting longer and longer until it turns green.At the same time the root continues to grow downward, becoming the main root together with side roots developing around it while the shoot develops leaves all around.It takes only a few months before the plant flowers and bears fruit.经济危机,大学生就业难
概括材料主要内容This passage mainly tells us…;The story is mainly about…
Increasing unemployment would the biggest challenge for China this year with great numbers of rural and urban workers laid off.The government has launched a stimulus package of 4 trillion yuan to stimulate the country’s economy.现状:经济危机影响全球,就业机会少,工人工资低As it is known to all, nearly all countries in the world have been hit by the global economic crisis, leaving few job chances and lower wages and salaries for ordinary people.建议:树立正确的择业观,降低预期工资,先就业再择业,自己创业,开公司,展示自己的才华Under this circumstance, university graduates should have a proper attitude towards their future jobs.It is my suggestion that they should lower their expectation of their future wages or salaries.It’s a good idea for them to take up a job before considering which job to take.To make good advantage of tehir knowledge, they may set up their own business so as to show off their own talent.政府提供各种优惠政策,免除各种税费,提供一定数量的无息贷款In order to help those new graduates, the government has offered many favorable policies such as freeing all kinds of taxes.Supplying certain amount of loans without interest.I’m sure they will succeed and can have a bright future with the help of the government.
第三篇:英语书面表达
202_年济宁市中考英语书面表达
假设你是李华,已报名参加暑期英语夏令营,根据夏令营之活动安排,你需要准备一份关于英语夏令营英语阅读方面的发言稿,具体要求如下:
1.对英语阅读重要性的认识;
2.个人开展英语阅读的情况(1-2点具体做法)及感悟;
3.将来的打算。
参考词汇:play an important part;in the past;borrow books;at the beginning;something easy and interesting, in the future, form a good habit of;read everyday;be helpful for.要求:1.词数,100词左右;(开头已给出,不计入总词数;)
2.可根据具体要求及参考词汇适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名。
Good morning, everybody,I’m pleased to be here to talk about my English reading.As we know, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening.
第四篇:英语书面表达
Dear Andy,I‘m so glad that you‘ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday.I‘m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged.You‘ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on.We‘ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.In the afternoon, you can tour around the city.And I‘ll act as your tour guide.Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look.You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we‘re interested in.I‘m sure you‘ll enjoy yourself.I‘m looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely, Li hua [名师点评]
本文行文自然流畅,文章要点齐全,意思表达真切。详略得当,重点突出。从语言使用的角度来说,不但使用了一些生动的动词,准确的名词,同时为了使本文串联自然,又使用了时间状语为连接词,将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。
第五篇:202_高考英语祝贺信书面表达写作
202_高考英语祝贺信Congratulatory Letter书面表达写作
祝贺信
祝贺信是社交中的一种礼仪性信函。通常包括以下几个方面的内容:说明祝贺事由,表达热烈、诚挚的祝贺;围绕祝贺事件表述贺喜内容;表达美好祝福。写作“三步走”:
说明事由并表达自己衷心的祝贺->展开评论事件、赞扬收信人->再次表达良好祝愿
在写作主要内容的时候,可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。Tips in English Here are some principles that congratulatory letters follow: 1.The purpose of writing the letter is to make your reader feel certain that he or she deserves the special message of recognition and praise.2.The note should be brief, dealing with the primary topic only.These messages are most effective when they conduct no business.3.The whole message should carry a tone of being positive and conversational(会谈的,谈话的).4.Be sure to send the letter within a few days of the event.Any delay in delivery of the message would make your effort worse than no effort at all.开头常用句式
It was exciting news for me to learn of …
Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on … It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on … I was delighted to learn of your success /achievements in … I am really happy to learn that you have been elected… 结尾常用句式
Wish you good luck!We wish to share your honor and joy.I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.May all go wonderfully in your new post!May every happiness be yours!All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.Every good wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity!闪光词汇及词组:
delighted: adj.高兴的,欣喜的 achievement: n.成就,功绩 essential: 本质的,基本的,重要的play a...role: 起......的作用 enhance: v.提高,增强
comprehensive: adj.全面的 embrace: v.拥抱
pave the way for: 为...铺平道路
brilliant: adj.灿烂的
书面表达祝贺信写作模版祝贺信 模板1:Dear_____________,Congratulations on your _______.I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement.I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success.This new position, on the other hand, adds a new dimension to your life and is bound to
________.What’s more, I also believe that
.May all goes beautifully in your new post!
Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模板2:Dear_____________,Good news travels fast!It was delightful for me to hear that ______________.Please accept my sincere congratulations to your ___________.I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in.Now you prove to me a matured and well-rounded________in every respect.Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________.May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!
Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模版3Dear ______ , ①I have learned with delight that you ______(祝贺事由).②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______.③You must be ______.④And I feel very happy for you.⑤ ______(所取得的成绩)is quite exciting news!⑥I know this is surely owing to ______(被祝贺人过去的努力).⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______(被祝贺人的优点).⑧Kindly let me know when you ______(咨询对方何时有空).⑨I hope ______(表达自己的愿望).⑩My best wishes for your further success.Yours sincerely,Englishtec Li Ming
写作练习
书面表达 假如你是高三学生李华,得知你的美国笔友Peter被Harvard(哈佛大学)录取,请你给他写一封电子邮件。要点如下:表示祝贺且备受鼓舞;介绍自己目前的学习情况;请教学习方法。注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。书面表达参考范文:
Dear Peter,I have received your e-mail.I am very excited and inspired by the good news that you have been admitted into Harvard.First I’d like to offer my congratulations to you on your great success and I also hope to enter a famous university just like you.Now I want to tell you something about myself.As you know, I’m busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination.Day after day I work very hard and have to stay up late doing piles of papers.However, I’m always feeling stressed out because my efforts don’t seem to pay off, which makes me frustrated and exhausted.Will you be kind enough to give me some advice? I would appreciate it if you could write back to me as soon as possible.Yours,Li Hua
写作练习请按照英文提示写作 Directions: Your friend Jason is elected as the Chairman of the Students' Union of your university.Write a letter to congratulate him, state the reason for his success, and express your best wishes and encouragement.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.范文: Dear Jason, I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the Chairman of our University Students' Union.This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of your achievement.The Students' Union plays an essential role in our campus life.Managing and leveraging such an organization not only poses a great challenge to you, but will also fundamentally enhance your ability comprehensively.I believe this position will be a new beginning, and a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a brilliant future career.Please accept my most sincere congratulations!Best wishes, Li Ming 亲爱的詹生:
听说你被选为学生会主席,我感到非常高兴。对你来说,这是一个特殊的时刻、一个高兴的时刻,我为你的成就而感到骄傲。
学生会在我们的校园生活中起到了重要的作用,要管理和权衡这个组织对于你提出了一个很大的挑战,同时也将综合地提高你的各方面能力。我相信这是一个新的开始,这个机会将使你拥抱一个充实的生活、并为你将来的灿烂未来打下基础。
请接受我最诚挚的祝福!
衷心的祝愿,李明 真题背诵: Dear Henry,I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your admission into the Biology Department of Peking University as a graduate.As your close friend, I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your admission.In my view, you work hard and besides that, you are a very intelligent person.This admission is a reward which you richly deserve.I am sure you will make
greater progress in your study and obtain a bright future in your life.I wish you greater success in your school career and I am looking forward to good news from you soon.Best wishes.Englishtec Yours, Li Hua 作业
假定你是李华,得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲,并给他写一封祝贺信,因为他天天练习讲汉语,从不会到流利,终于成功。继续努力,有机会来中国留学。希望见面和交流。
注意:1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛 “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest Dear Peter,I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest.I know that you were not good at Chinese at first.However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day.As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”.Finally, you succeeded!In my mind, this match is very difficult for a foreign student.So I’m so surprised that you become champion of this competition.If you go on studying Chinese harder,you will have the opportunity to study in China.At last, I hope to see you and communicate with each other.Sincere congratulations to you again!Yours, Li Hua