第一篇：四级写作 怎样避免高分低能

怎样避免高分低能

高分低能一词大多数用于形容中国大陆和香港应试教育下的产物。在此教育制度下，学生即使能够取得优异成绩，亦不会代表学生在其它技能有显注成效。以资优学生为例，能力优异的资优学生的学习能力（或背诵能力）比正常学生较大，当面对诸如填鸭式教育下的学习方式，资优学生便有能力花大量时间精力去学习（背诵）。但由于在欠缺完整的成绩评核制度下，资优学生在其它技能或综合能力上的缺乏并完全不会被计算到学业成绩内，引致“高分低能”的出现。

我们的社会需要全面发展的学生，我们的学校要避免高分低能的学生，所以我们要让我们的学生德智体美劳各方面全面发展。为此，特意给出一点建议。

科学知识要学好。

学生在学校里面学习，基础知识和基本技能是必须要学好的，所有高分还是要有的，而且高分在一定程度上也说明了学生具有能力啊，具有接受知识，记忆知识和运用知识的能力。

积极锻炼身体。

有的学生光知道看书学习，结果时间长了，身体吃不消，反而影响了学习成绩。倒不如每天抽出一定时间来进行锻炼，既提高身体素质还能有利于学习成绩的进一步提高。

学会做人。

做人是一门要求极高的学问，不仅是在学校里面学习，而且还要走上社会以后终身学习。做有品德，讲诚信的学生，做遵纪守法的公民。做尊敬师长，有礼貌的孩子。

动手实践能力。

学生所学的知识只有运用到实践中解决实际问题，才是真正的收获，要把书本知识变成生活中的例子才是最好的学习，所以学生动手能力的培养也很重要。

多参加社会实践。

读万卷书，行万里路，学生应该多读书学习，但是也应该多融入社会，多参加社会实践活动，能有更多的机会与别人交流，可以锻炼和提升个人能力。

第二篇：高分低能

高分低能

秦晓洁，江苏无锡连元街小学6（4）班，指导老师：谢蕾,2003.02.28

偶然看到一幅意味深长的漫画：一位母亲叫儿子称一下她手里的一袋苹果有多重，儿子左手拿着一张面对着我们的数学试卷，卷子上写着一个醒目的“100”。儿子说：“我不会呀！”简简单单几笔，作家就勾画出一个高分低能儿。

其实，这样的孩子还有很多。如今大多数家庭都是独生子女，父母视若掌上明珠，而这些孩子的唯一任务就是好好学习，因此对许多生活小常识一无所知，不能做到生活自理，甚至连一些简单的家务都不会。

高分低能是可悲的。战国时期赵国一位将领兵书背得滚瓜烂熟，但不善于应变，不会把书上的兵法应用到真正的战斗中，所以才会惨败。这就是所谓的纸上谈兵。

我们应该积极做一些力所能及的事，主动帮父母干家务。学习是为了以后能自力更生，不仅仅是了解更多知识，还让我们学会更多生活技能，而不应该是有高分就满足了。希望同学们分数高，能力强。

第三篇：四级写作

四级写作

孙子云：“知己知彼，百战不殆”。想在写作考试中获得成功，就必须首先了解四级考试的要求和评分规则。由于新四级考试还没有开始进行，笔者就以一篇根据现行四级写作题目“Do‘Lucky Numbers’Really Bring Good Luck?”写成的学生作文为例来讲述几个最基本的道理。

例文1：

Some people think that certian(拼写错误)numbers will bring good luck to them.Numbers such as six, eight, sixteen and eighteen are regarded as lucky numbers.There are also people who think that their success is related to certain numbers.However, some other people think numbers have nothing to do with their luck.They believe in their own rather than“lucky numbers”.They don't do things according to certain numbers.As far as I am concerned, I think it is a person's own business whether he believes in a certain number or not.The most important thing is that he has done the work by himself and has done it quite well.As to the belief in numbers, it is their(前后指代不一致，应改为his)personal choice.该文章是当年四级考试命题组印发给全国评卷老师的一篇例文，根据15分制的评分标准，这篇例文被评为14分，供全国评卷老师作为评分参考。乍看起来，本文无论从遣词造句还是思想深度，似乎都算不得一篇佳作；但它之所以能够被评为14分，还是有其内在深层次原因的，那就是经常被考生们所忽视的议论文写作常识。简要地讲，可分为以下三个部分：

(一)英文议论文的结构特点

汉语写作对文章结构的要求不是很高，如开头段应该包括什么、论题句应该在什么时候出现、文章的结尾是否必须总结全文等等。而英语写作要求文章结构必须十分严谨，文章各个部分的功能都要十分清晰，开头、中间和结尾都有严格的要求。

简而言之，英语议论文共有三大特点：

1、观点鲜明的开头；

2、紧扣主题的结尾；

3、有主题句并且衔接自然的中间段落。

这三点当中，第1、2点早已为绝大多数中国学生所熟知，因为开头点题和结尾扣题同样也是汉语文章的要求。但在长时间的学习过程中，这样的要求被很多学生以为是“老土”而得不到足够的重视。如果将这种思想带到英语议论文写作当中，直接的后果就是中心分散、观点不明确，加上中国学生普遍英文表达能力不强，这些因素就为整篇文章的失败埋下了隐患。

另外，英语文章和汉语不同的是段落的主题句一定要放在段首，而不能按照中文的写作习惯放在段落的中间或者最后，在英文应试写作中更加如此。正因为没有“主题句”的思想，所以中国学生在写英语文章时经常“想到什么，就写什么”，这在英语议论文中是不能接受的。例如，例文1中每一段的首句都简要地概括出了该段的主要内容，换句话说，每段的内容都是根据首句来展开的，其顺序不能颠倒。

(关于段落的衔接，在后面的内容中将详细介绍。)(二)中心统一

在中心统一这个问题上，英语议论文和汉语议论文的概念也有所不同。中国人在写议论文时常常遵循“中庸”的原则，其具体的表现就是认为世界上没有任何事情是绝对的。当他们在文章中表扬一件事物或一种现象的时候，总要指出其不足；同样，在批评一件事物或一种现象的同时，也总不忘记指出其也有合理之处。这种做法从道理上来讲并没有什么不妥，但却不符合英语议论文的写作习惯，因为英语作家在写议论文时关注的是自己的辩论技巧和其结果对公众的影响力。换句话说，如果作者告诉大家两面都有道理也就等于说两面都没有道理，因为读者在读了文章之后仍旧不知道作者的看法是什么，以及自己在这种情况下到底该怎么做。

所以，既然四级考试考的是英语文章，大家就应该遵循英文议论文的写作思路和习惯：表示支持则旗帜鲜明地支持；表示反对就彻彻底底地反对，而不能采取“墙头草两边倒”的做法。以上面的例文1为例，如果作者的观点是“幸运数字是既有道理又无道理的”，这种观点就无法让人接受，因为在英语议论文中，这是典型的中心不统一

大学英语四级写作常用经典句型

1）主语从句

It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known that…

It is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that…

It goes without saying that… It is universally acknowledged that… It is / that 2）宾（表）语从句 We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.3）定语从句（限定性和非限定性）

As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described…in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…, There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.4）状语从句（时间，原因，地点，条件，让步，转折等）

When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster（怪物）which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.5）分词短语做定语或状语

Prof.Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.6）倒装句

Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.7）被动句

Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem.He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds.Many people believe that…（It is believed that…）8）设问句

Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?

大学英语新四级考试写作要求及高分策略(1)一.四级考试对写作的要求

《大学英语教学大纲》和《大学英语课程教学基本要求》都对培养学生的英语写作能力做了明确规定，即学生能在半小时内完成120字左右的短文，包括书信等应用问题写作，要求文理基本通顺，表达思想清楚，无重大语法错误。通过分析历年的真题，我们不难发现：英语作文考查的类型基本包括议论文(一般为三段论式的论说文字)，说明文(目前侧重于这方面的写作训练)，图表作文(要求描述性的语言要贴近图表信息，真实反映语言水平)和应用文写作(包括书信、便条、通知、海报等)。

二.四级改革和写作变化

2005年1月的作文题目是要求学生以导游的身份写一篇演讲稿，不仅包含欢迎辞(表态)行程安排，(说明)，而且包含安排的理由(说理)。2005年6月作文题目是校园文化旅游，要求学生就此阐述不同的观点。2006年1月是个竞选演说，如果我当选学生会主席，我会给大家做点什么事情(说明)。2006年6月17日的四级考试则是一个海报，要求考生构想一个招募志愿者的海报，其中包括应聘人必备的资历和应准备的材料等(说明)。2006年6月24日新题型的作文是传统的议论文形式，讨论大学生选择任课老师相关的问题。2007年1月作文也是传统的议论文形式，探讨对春节晚会所持的不同观点。2007年6月份是欢迎同学加入俱乐部的海报(应用文)。

从上面的题目变化趋势看，描述现象、分析原因、个人看法仍是四、六级考试写作部分主要考查的重点，在今后相当长的时间内，英语写作教学和辅导的主要突破口应集中在说明文、议论文和应用文上。

此外，仔细研究06年6月24日以后的四级试卷，我们还可发现，新四级的写作题目与校园生活密切相关，学生普遍感觉亲切，体裁包括两篇议论文，一篇应用文。不仅如此，新四级写作题中提供的文章框架清晰，思路比较明确，绝大多数考生都能利用“经典句型”或“万能模板”写出及格的作文。尽管新四级前两次都考查了议论文，但这并不能说明写作的重心有任何偏移。根据考试改革方案和课程教学要求的相关规定，应用文写作、说明文和议论文仍将是新四级作文的主攻方向。

三.四级写作高分策略

新四级考试并没有改变对写作的测试标准和要求，但在出题顺序上却做了明显的调整：写作作为第一项考查的内容，被提到新四级试卷的最开头，这令许多考生感觉不适应，部分网友甚至认为这是在折腾考生。其实，提高写作能力虽然较难，但写作教学却是一片大有可为的沃土。在过去十多年的英语写作辅导中，笔者坚持认为：考生如果坚持做到如下几点，就不难在规定的时间内写出一篇成功的英语作文。

1.了解英语写作的测试目的，准确把握题目的要求

英语写作测试，其实主要还是要考查学生组织英语语言的能力，和用英语表达思想的能力，体裁不外乎议论文，说明文和应用文，主题也是在大学生熟知话题基础上的翻新或扩展。综观历年的四级作文真题，变化趋势是从三段论的议论文向实用性更强的应用文体，尤其是书信写作方面倾斜。考生平时应有意识地就他们感兴趣的一些话题进行思考和拓展，争取在实践中磨练敏锐的审题能力。2.迅速梳理写作的思路，列出并借助提纲进行写作

到了大学阶段，学生还是非常善于思考的，他们不仅想象力非常丰富，晚上做梦，还经常daydream, 各有独特的思维和写作思路。但是，如何将千头万绪的思路梳理清楚，学生则必须有真工夫。为此，在进行四级写作时，考生一定要首先形成自己的观点，之后合理运用一些手段，如常用的有四种：陈述理由、举例说明、提供数据、下定义等，之后充分就此展开论说。这样通过高效思考，严密组织，再辅以提纲形式的文章架构，考生一定会写出较符合规范的文章 3.扩展写作提纲，草拟文稿，表述主要观点

在利用提纲展示个人写作思路的基础上，学生还应充分利用现有的英语水平，按照一定的逻辑思路，充分表达个人的观点。写作之初，学生不必字斟句酌，只要脉络清楚，具备轮廓就可以了。草拟文章的过程实际是把思维结果外在化的过程，学生应力争使文章具有连贯性和流畅性。草拟过程的顺利与否，在很大程度上取决于平时训练所达到的水平。许多考生畏惧作文，经常懒于动笔；还有一些考生认为写作很难提高，干脆放弃平时的训练。这些想法都是错误的。为真正提高写作水平，笔者建议大家从开始准备四级的那天起，就应有针对性地分体裁、分话题、分阶段地进行实战模拟，强迫自己一气呵成将文章写完，不必追求完美，不必在乎自己的文稿到底语言有多么不地道或出现多少语法错误。熟能生巧。只要坚持多写、多练，平时注意扩大阅读，写作的水平自然就会提高。

2005年1月CET作文题目

四级作文题目：

A Campaign Speech 你认为自己具备是什么条件（能力，性格，爱好）可以胜任学生会主席工作，如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么？

范文：

Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students‘ union.I am junior in Chemical Department.Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class.I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my tacher all give me a good praise.I am good at communication and organizing.And I like to help others.Moreover, I have a varity of hobbies,for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.If I become the president, I will try my best to do well.I will organize some siutable activities for you.I will do many things for you to reache your demands as well.I am sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president.Thank you.六级作文题目：

1，对病人的简单介绍：目前的病情和家庭情况

2，目前的困难：无法继续承担医疗费用，需要护理

3，希望捐助，联系方式

Your Help Needed 范文： Dear friends，As some of you may know,Lucy,a lovely girl student,a junior from the Department of Fine Arts,has been seriously ill.In fact,she has been suffering from hepatitis, which is very dangerous.This 20-year-old girl comes from a small town in Shangdong province.Her family has tried every means to save her.Now Lucy is in urgent need of operation to her liver transplanted.However, her family is too poor to afford the expenses, which totaled 120,000 yuan.How can a poor family earning 1000 yuan per month afford such high expenses? But the time is limited.They cannot afford to wait to see the disease untouched.So you help is urgently needed.Let's do what we can to save our fellow student.The life of such a lovely girl is in your hand.Your love can save a life.You can contact 2335648 in the daytime and 2335658 at night.2005年6月CET作文题目

四级作文题目：

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay[ IN honour of teachers on the occasion of Teacher's Day].You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1,向老师表达节日祝贺

2,从一件小事来回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献 3,我如何回报老师的关爱 Teacher's Day 六级作文题目：

In this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products.1.目前盗版的现象比较严重 2.造成这种现象的原因及危害 3.我们应该怎么做？

参考单词：盗版 piracy(n.)盗版产品 pirated products 知识产权 intellectual property rights 侵犯版权 infringe sb's copyright;copyright infringement，Say No to Pirated Products 内容：

1、有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课老师。

2、学生选择老师时所考虑的主要因素是„„

3、学生自选任课老师的益处及可能产生的问题。

As the proverb says, “Knowledge is power.” It is an undeniable fact that a large amount of students prefer to choose their own teachers for certain courses.In fact, some universities allow their students to do so.When choosing a teacher, some factors should be taken into consideration.On one hand, a learned teacher is preferred.After all, for a student, studying is given full priority.A teacher with plentiful knowledge can ease the burden of study for many students and provide them with many opportunities for enlarging their scope of knowledge, while at the same time realizing their potentials.On the other hand, a teacher with a clear and humorous teaching style is favorable.To a large extent, whether a lecture is welcomed by the students or not is depended on the way of delivering rather than its content.No one can deny that interesting interaction is far more enjoyable than monologue.There is a good side and a bad side to everything, including choosing teachers by students.It goes without saying that it can arouse students’ interest in study to the largest extent.Such phenomena as being absent from classes or paying no attention to the classes may vanish.Nevertheless, it cannot be denied that it can bring some side-effects.The management of classes may be in a disorder.Some teachers can be warmly welcomed so the number of the students may be too large while other courses may have few participants.We can conclude that allowing students to choose their own teachers has both positive and negative effects.What we must do is to make sure that the positive ones are encouraged and the negative ones are eliminated as far as possible.春节作文

写春节作文前，我们可以先回忆下过春节是我们参加过的活动，如贴倒福、分压岁钱、吃饺子、掸扬尘、贴年画、贴剪纸、放鞭炮、守岁、给压岁钱、挂千千结、贴春联等，然后挑一个我们印象深刻的上网查些资料，可以到百度搜春节的八个习俗，春节的由来与传说等，也可以上作文网作文素材频道找到相关资料再进行介绍。

作文题目可以自拟，如欢度春节，春节游文庙，除夕之夜，美丽的春节，春节花会

开头部分：大致介绍一下春节，及春节的一些习俗，点明你所要介绍的习俗。（略写）

第二部分：介绍这一习俗的来历、象征意义等，像剪纸、年画、千千结等还可以写写这些物品的种类、样子等。（详细）

第三部分：回忆自己参与这一活动的情景。（详细）结尾结尾部分：写写自己对这一习俗的感受。

每个部分举例：

开头部分：大致介绍一下春节，及春节的一些习俗，点明你所要介绍的习俗。（略写）

例：元宵节是我国的四大节日之一，元宵节一过，春节也就算过完了，所以这一天是非常隆重和热闹的。过元宵节的节目丰富多彩，有充满乐趣的看花灯猜灯谜，有喜气洋洋的舞龙，还有热闹非凡的赛龙船。不过，最吸引我们小孩子的却是那多姿多彩的烟花。

第二部分：介绍这一习俗的来历、象征意义等，像剪纸、年画、千千结等还可以写写这些物品的种类、样子等。（详细）

例：春联代表着欢乐祥和。在我们中国，每逢春节，无论城市还是农村，家家户户都要精选一副大红春联贴在门上，为节日增加喜庆的气氛。一幅幅春联不仅带来了吉祥和祝福，还带来了中国古老的浓浓的文化气息。瞧！“大地春光好，长天晓日红”、“岁岁皆如意，年年尽平安”、“江山万里如画，神州四时皆春”、“春风送春处处***美，喜鹊报喜家家喜事多”…… 幅幅春联让千家万户喜气盈门。春联的种类比较多。按照使用场所，可分为门心、框对、横批、春条、斗方等。因此，贴的位置也不同，如“门心”贴在门板上端中心部位；“横批”贴在门楣的横木上。

第三部分：回忆自己参与这一活动的情景。（详细）

例：记得去年元宵节的晚上爸爸妈妈带我去工人体育馆看烟花。八点整，只听见几声沉闷的声音，一个个烟花带着红红的火星窜上了天空，几声脆响，夜空绽放出几朵美丽的花朵。它们的形状和颜色各不相同，有五颜六色的满天星，金黄色的蒲公英，紫色的牵牛花，火红的玫瑰花，粉红的月季、银色的百合，真是绚丽多彩。随着一声声的炮响，人们在惊呼，在赞叹，夜色中，人们微微扬起的脸上也变幻着多姿的色彩，露出了幸福的笑容……

结尾结尾部分：写写自己对这一习俗的感受。

例：我看着那散发着传统文化芳香的中华结，仿佛品味到了中华民族远古的神秘和东方的灵秀。它的古香古色，它的千变万化，让我神往，让我遐想…… 《春节的街头》

今天，是中国传统节日——春节。早晨我还没醒，就听到了鞭炮的声音。平静的社区，今日显得热闹非凡。这热闹的喧嚣，把我的睡意一股脑的全都打撒开来。于是，起床穿上了新衣服连早饭都来不及吃就冲到门外，看着各家各户的炮竹，烟花。接着就是跟爸爸妈妈一起去走街串巷——拜年！

“李伯伯，新年快乐”“王阿姨，工作顺了”“刘奶奶，身体健康”〃〃〃跟所有的长辈们拜过年之后，妈妈提议说：一会，去街上看看，感受下新年的气氛。

一上街，街上可就更热闹了。人们手里有提着大袋大袋的菜，身边的孩子手上握着一大把小花炮，蹦蹦跳跳地跑着。看！我左边的一位四、五岁左右的小女孩，跑到前面去。一下子又转过头对一位满手是鼓鼓的袋子的大人喊着：“爸爸，快点！我要回去放炮玩呢！”。有拿着那边超市发的小气球的，红的，黄的，绿的，还有蓝的。也有三五成群，手挽着手说说笑笑的姑娘们，小伙子们，忙绿了一年，辛苦了一年，我想这个时候应该是大家最放松，最高兴的时候。你看，路灯上还挂着两个小红灯，喜气洋洋的。就像在说，“我们也要过新年，我们也要过新年”。

一进菜市场，那才更热闹呢！人流窜动，一眼望去，什么也看不见，全是人。还有那翠绿的黄瓜，可真新鲜哪，你看，那金黄色的小花在太阳的照射下显得多么的生机勃勃啊。那鲫鱼，鲢鱼，青鱼，草鱼等等在水里游来游去，真是印证了我们中国的老话：年年有鱼（余）！黄的韭菜，红的番茄，黑的木耳，白的萝卜〃〃〃真是要什么有什么呀。“哎哟！可真够挤的。”我嘀咕了一句。跟着妈妈买了几个我爱吃的菜，结完帐就走出了菜场。超市里的收银台前也早已排起了长龙。

傍晚时分，街上，又渐渐安静下来。店主们把店子关了，超市也比往常早了些许关门。大家都提着东西回家过年去了。

到了晚上6点左右，社区渐渐安静，孩子们都回家吃团圆饭去了。吃完团圆饭7、8点的样子社区又重新热闹起来。孩子们全都出来放花炮了。这个放个“降落伞，”那个又放个“天女撒花”〃〃〃〃各式各样的花炮全有。每放完一个都会聚集好几个孩子，他们在讨论谁的花炮最美丽，谁的花炮颜色最多，之后又是阵阵欢笑。大人们或几个坐在一起打牌，打麻将；或几个坐在一起嗑瓜子，剥花生；或看着自己的孩子放花炮，偶尔还要帮他们一下。大多数的孩子，都是自己独立操作完成。

夜，更深了。人们陆陆续续的回家了，有些不肯回家的孩子也在父母的劝说下，不情愿的回了家，一天的热闹景象渐渐被夜幕包围。我不禁感叹又是一年到，时间过得可真快呀！

春节见闻 “当、当、当”新年的钟声敲响了，家家户户的门上早已贴上了或火红或金黄的对联，每一家的老老少少都乐得合不拢嘴。兴奋的孩子们有的目不转睛地盯着电视，品尝着一年一度的晚会大餐――春节晚会；有的急着给自己的长辈拜年，发短信，打电话，所有新年的祝福话语仿佛怎么也说不完；调皮的孩子正在向自己的父辈们 “讨要”压岁钱；屋外的鞭炮声此起彼伏，炸开了锅，五彩的烟花更是把这个特殊的夜晚点缀得绚丽多姿。

正月初一，农历新年的第一天迎着人们的喜悦祥和而来。我这个平时最赖床的懒汉，今天却起了个大早，因为我极想穿上我那美丽的新衣，出去好好炫耀一翻。我要去走亲访友拜新年了，这无疑也是一件高兴的事。我们小孩子走在拜年队伍的前面，见到长辈们拜个年，说几句吉利话，就可以收获一大把的压岁钱，然后拿到街上去买自己喜爱的东西――玩具、零食、鞭炮……，家长好像变了个人似的，对我们的放纵是那么的宽容，一切都有了！这就是过年的感觉。

“放鞭炮喽！”不知是谁喊了一声，小孩子们很快都聚在了一起。一串串鞭炮在人们手中点燃，响声震天，四处飞溅，仿佛要把一个个美好的愿望送到千家万户。一阵阵炮竹声接连不断，热闹非凡。

到了吃饭的时候，望着满桌子平时最爱吃的菜肴，我们小孩子却一点儿也不觉得饿。大人们在推杯换盏之间，谈论最多是：今非昔比啊！今天的幸福生活从餐桌上最能说明问题，现在人们生活好了，天天就像在过年！

奔波在走亲访友的路途上，我见到了春意盎然的田间大地，一条条新修的高速公路缩短了我们的行程，通往乡村的泥巴路也被“村村通”的水泥路所覆盖，城市高楼大厦像雨后春笋，一年一个变化……

春节对于我们小孩子来说，那就是一切都在变化，一切都是新的！

第四篇：四级写作

一.对比观点题型

(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1.有一些人认为……

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2.另一些人认为……

3.我的看法……

The topic of ①________(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②________(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③________(理由二).Moreover, ④________(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,________(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥____________(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦____________(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧________(我的观点).The reason is that ⑨____________(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Some people believe that ①________(观点一).For example, they think ②________(举例说明).And it will bring them ③________(为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④____(我不同意该看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤____(反对的理由之二).Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that ⑥____(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).英语六级考试写作技巧

二.阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述.1.阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.2.分析并举例使其更充实.The good old proverb ________(名言或谚语)reminds us that ________(释义).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,________(理由一).For example, ____________(举例说明).Secondly,________(理由二).Another case is that ________(举例说明).Furthermore , ____________(理由三).英语四级英译汉的目的,要求和评分

In my opinion, ________(我的观点).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say____A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.三.解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

1.问题现状英语四级英译汉的目的,要求和评分

2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem——A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ________(说明A的现状).Second, ________(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, ________(解决方法一).For another ________(解决方法二).Finally, ________(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that ________(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(带来的好处).四.说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1.说明事物现状

2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)

3.你对现状(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First ________(A的优点之一).Besides ____________(A的优点之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ________(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,____________(A的第二个缺点).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to ________(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way, ________(对前景的预测).五.议论文的框架

(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying

that ___观点一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文题目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___优点一______.And secondly ___优点二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺点一______.In addition, ____ 缺点二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.(3)答题性议论文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文题目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.英语四级英译汉的目的,要求和评分

As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途径一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)谚语警句性议论文

It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___谚语_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)

A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.as is indicated above......there is.....in the picture,it is obvious that,by diagramwe know that.for the reason if we realize that we firstly should,secondly we ,not only do webut, in the end it is essential that，,we make a conclusion that it is ,it isthat，,to our surprise ,the cartoon show us to sty.ina word ,we believe that

第五篇：四级写作

1.大学英语四级测试作文评分标准 2.四级作文命题规律 3.怎样写好四级作文 2.四级作文命题规律 2.1.历年四级作文题目

1995.1 Can Money Buy Happiness? 1995.6 Advantages of a Job Interview 1996.1 The Two–Day Weekend 1996.6 Global Shortage of Fresh Water 1997.1 Practice Makes Perfect 1997.6 Getting to Know the World Outside Campus 1998.1 Harmfulness of Fake Commodities 1998.6 Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? 1999.1 Don‟t Hesitate to Say “No”

1999.6 Reading Selectively or Extensively? 2000.1 How I Finance My College Education 2000.6 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? 2001.1 How to Succeed in a Job Interview 2001.6 A Letter to a Schoolmate 2002.1 A Letter to the University President about

the Canteen Service on Campus 2002.6 Students‟ Use of Computers 2003.1 It Pays to Be Honest 2003.6 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident.2003.9 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill(or Got Injured)2003.12 A Letter in Reply to a Friend 2004.6 An Introduction for Tourists 2005.1 A campaign speech 2005.6 In honor of Teachers On the Occasion of Teachers‟ Day 2005.12 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? 2006.6 An Announcement for a Voluntary Program 2.2.命题形式 4.2.1.提纲作文

提纲作文实质上是议论文，其下可分为四种类型：

现象阐释型 : 2003年1月四级作文考题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象；

2.诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实。

.问题对策型：分析问题，找出成因，提出解决办法，题目实例如下： 1997年6月四级英语作文真题

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus.You should write at least 100 words and you

should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:

1.大学生了解社会的必要性；

2.了解社会的途径（大众媒介、社会服务等）；

3.我打算怎么做。

观点对比型：辨析两种对立观点，题目实例如下： 1995年1月四级作文真题

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Can Money Buy Happiness? You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1.有人认为金钱是幸福之本（source of happiness）2.也有人认为金钱是万恶之源（root of all evil）3.我的看法

论说反驳型：支持或驳斥一种观点，题目实例如下： 1998年6月四级作文真题

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运； 2.我认为数字和运气无关，…… 2.2.2.图表作文

近十年来图表作文只考过一次柱状图

2.2.3.情景作文的实质是记叙文，主要考过这几种类型： A.书信

（1）告知信/ 建议信:2004年1月 四级作文真题

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friend's inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1.建议报考的专业及理由； 2.报考该专业的基本条件； 3.应当如何备考。（2）综合信

2002年1月四级作文真题

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

B.演讲致辞

2005年1月四级作文真题

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a campaign speech in support of your election to the post of chairman of the student union.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.A Campaign Speech 1.你认为自己具备是什么条件(能力，性格，爱好)可以胜任学生会主席工作，2.如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么？ 议论文（共14题）现象阐释型：

1995年6月，1996年1月，1997年1月，1998年1月，1999年1月, 2003年1月

问题对策型：

1996年6月，1997年6月，2000年1月，2001年1月，观点对比型：1995年1月，1999年6月，2000年6月 论证反驳型：1998年6月 图表作文（共1题）

柱状图：2002年6月 记叙文（共7题）

告知信/建议信：2001年6月，2004年1月

综合信：2002年1月

综合叙事：2003年6月，2003年9月

演讲致辞：2004年6月，2005年1月，2005年6月 2.3.命题规律

1）新：对传统的三段论式作文提出挑战，新的题型层出不穷。特别是2003年以来，先后考过交通事故目击证词、导游词等首次出现的题目，所以仅仅依靠背诵套句变得越来越行不通。需要同学们重视提高自己的真正写作水平，以不变应万变。

2）综合能力考核：纯粹的记叙、说明或议论文的考核被同时考核三种能力的综合性题目所代替，如2003年9月份的考题，就要求考生在第一段叙述你的classmate生病或受伤的过程，第二段要求说明一下各方面对他的关心，第三段要求你对这个事件展开讨论。这要求我们要全面发展自己的写作能力，不可偏废。

3）实用：实用文体的写作出现得越来越多，书信作文屡次出现，2004年6月还考了一篇导游词。这体现了四级作文对学生实际运用英语能力的关注，也是四级作文备考训练的重点之一。

2.4.四级作文可能会出现的题目

1）考试的命题作文大都是议论文结构，一般来说题目内容应该是考生所熟悉的，能够有话可说的，如那些社会热点问题就是经常出的题目。

2）但不是所有的热点问题都会成为考试题目。考试题目还要和考试对象的文化背景，年龄特点相一致，所以有关大学生生活，学习，理想等的题目经常出现。

3）作文题目会考虑到考生的语言水平，也就是说学生要求掌握的词汇和结构能否足够表达所考的题目。

总的来说，根据学生要求掌握的词汇，根据学生的知识结构，年龄特点和文化背景，出题的范围可大致如下：

科学技术：计算机，克隆，电视，小汽车等对社会和生活的影响 社会问题：如住房，交通，就业，犯罪，婚姻，环境，能源和广告等

校园生活：如学习方式，考试，课余活动，体育锻炼，人际交往和兴趣爱好等

青少年问题：如父子代沟，抽烟吸毒，个人思想，职业选择，文化教育和成功失败等 文化教育：阅读，道德修养，出国留学，学生减负，教育与成长等

3.怎样写好四级作文

3.1.如何开头

(1)主题句法

The appeal of advertising to buying motives can have both negative and positive effects.(2)问题法

Do you know how many people die from traffic accidents every 23 minutes? Why does cream go bad faster than butter?

(3)对比法

When asked …., most of college students say that….But I think quite differently.I would prefer a career that will help realize my potentials.(4)数据法

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.(5)故事法

Six o‟clock yesterday(June 20th, Friday)afternoon when I was walking along the riverbank of our school, an unbelievable scene caught my eyes.(6)引语法

As the proverb goes, “You are only young once.”(适用于记住的名言)There is an increasing awareness/popularity among people that…..3.2.如何结尾

3.2.1．重复中心思想 回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到再次肯定和强调的效果。

With all these benefits, it is no wonder that sports and games have now become more popular with people than ever.3.2.2．作出结论 文章最后用几句话概括全文内容，并进一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者的观点。

In conclusion/to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, a good teacher-student relationship can be mutual beneficial.The students gain knowledge eagerly and enjoyably, and the teacher gains satisfaction from his job.3.2.3．应用引语 用格言、谚语或习语总结全文，既言简意赅又有更强的说服力。

If you have anything to do, try to do it yourself, for that is the safest way to permanent success.Remember the famous saying.“God helps those who help themselves.“

3.2.4．用反问结尾 虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，具有明显的强调作用，引起读者思考。

Therefore, listening skills must be consciously improved.Since it is such an important means of learning and communication, why shouldn‟t we develop this ability as far as possible? 3.2.5．提出展望或期望 表示对将来的展望或期待读者投入行动。

I am sure that Chinese will become one of the most important languages in the world in the next century.As China will open further to the outside world，the language is sure to be spread world widely.From the discussion above, we may safely arrive at/come to/reach the conclusion that… 3.3.行文中间

3.3.1.用词多样丰富

think vs.hold the view that/maintain that… so vs.consequently

because vs.resulting from, on account of the fact that and so on

3.3.2.长短句交错使用

When it comes to…, I hold the view that… I am for/ against the view that… There is no denying the fact that… There is no doubt that No wonder …

The reason why…is that… On no account can we…

Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that… 3.3.3.通过遣词造句使英语更加地道 遣词

抽象名词的使用是现代英语的一大特点 Family life makes me feel happy.Family life is a source of happiness to me.Our parents always expect that we should make progress in school, and will ask why we fail to do so.Our parents always anticipate progress and question its absence.The mayor said he was very grateful because the construction workers were dedicated and competent.The mayor expressed his appreciation of the dedication and competence of the construction workers.The news made us no longer anxious but joyful.The news turned our initial anxiety into joy.If we don‟t recognize the serious problem of growing population, we will make a big mistake.Failure to recognize the seriousness of growing population will lead to a big problem.造句

汉语句子信息密度高，而英语句子冗余度高 汉语句子按照时间和因果顺序进行线性排列，重心落在最后，而英语句子却可以运用各种虚词着眼于空间的立体组合，把重心放在句首，不拘泥于时间发生的时间和因果次序，也不必担心其逻辑关系上的混乱

When I first visited Shanghai, I could not find any trees and flowers in the streets.I was really surprised.I was really surprised at the absence of any trees and flowers in the streets when I first visited Shanghai.Some shows will have bad effect on children.But our parents fail to notice it, so they allow children to watch whatever program is on.Children are allowed to watch whatever program is on, with little thought on parents’ part of the bad effect that some shows will have on children.In summer vacation, I visited several places and met different kinds of people.I can tell you many wonderful stories about them.There are many wonderful stories to tell about places I visited and different kinds of people I met during the summer vacation.3.4．四级作文范例

06年12月英语四级作文点评及范文

Direction：

1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会

2.但有些人提出取消春节晚会.3.我的看法.The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala.Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations.It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes.Some inpiduals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs.These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance.The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives.Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve.They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television.I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned.Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year.To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan.We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show 4.如何提高写作能力 原则一：丰富词汇 原则二：重视阅读

一方面做大量的泛读。作文和阅读是相辅相成、互相促进的。

另一方面做有意识的精读。一要精读一些内容接近现实生活的例文。二要精读优秀范文。看的时候要着眼于三个方面：范文是如何提出观点并进行论证的，运用了哪些论证手法；范文是如何安排段落的，段落之间以及句子之间是怎样衔接的；范文里有什么精彩的词、词组和句型是值得我们模仿的。如果考生能够举一反三，仔细思考并且适当借鉴的话，定会获益非浅。

原则三：加强背诵 原则四：收录材料 原则五：勤于练习

练习四级真题。在练习的时候要注意应该在规定时间内完成。在练习频率上，基本应该保持两天写一篇以上。

在练习写作的时候也不一定非得要写完整的文章，有时候可以进行段落论证的写作。写完之后对照范文，反思自己作文中存在的问题。英文里有句谚语：Practice makes perfect.（熟能生巧），只要坚持，提高四级作文分数指日可待。

提纲

1.大学英语作文新动态分析 2.四级作文写作步骤解析 3.四级作文常考题型分析

4.写作对策

5.最新作文解析

6.写作注意事项

1）.写作时间没有变，字数要求有变化。

2）写作提纲没有了，出现了写作情景或语境

2011年12月的作文没有给出中文提纲而是设定了一个语境(context)。这与之前相比难度相对增加了，考生必须在30分钟内，首先用三至五分钟，来给自己打个腹稿，确定全文的结构或outline。

其次，也是从今往后的考试中最大的一个变化是，在写作要求(instruction)里，会给你设定好一个情景(situation)或语境(context)。这就给考生提出了更大的挑战。

考生必须要在文章中，以这个情景或语境为出发点，来展开对命题的探讨。决不能脱离这个所给定的情景或语境，随心所欲地大发议论，以免跑题。

基本形式：三段落式； 评分标准及注意事项：

1.切题：根据该段所给的题目及情景或语境来写相关内容

2.语言：完整句子，减少语法错误

3.连贯：运用列举法，使段落结构清晰；

免俗 2.写作步骤解析

（1）分析所给语境与题目之间的关系 1.审题列提纲：

（3 min)（2)确定三部分的写作结构和基本内容 2.写作（24 min)3.检查（3min)3.四级作文常考题型分析 1）现象解释型 2）观点对立型 3）问题解决型

2008/06

Recreational Activities 2008/12

Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags 2009/06

Free Admission to Museums 2009/12

Create a Green Campus 2010/06

Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling 2010/12

How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent 2011/06

Online Shopping 2011/12

Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will近四年来四级作文的题型归类 1）现象解释型

----2008/12 2）观点对立型

----2008/06，2009/06, 2011/06 3）问题解决型

-----2009/12,2010/06,2010/12 4.写作对策 1）、现象解释型

a.阐述现象

b.分析原因或影响因素

c.存在的问题或作者的观点 以2008/12的作文为例进行分析 2008年12月的作文

Part I Writing(30 minutes)

注意：此部分试题在答题卡1上。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags

1、一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用

2、由此带来的问题

3、限制一次性塑料袋的意义

写作范文 写作范文 写作模板 A.Nowadays_________is a common phenomenon in society.For example, ________.People/prefer doing ________because______._________ do more(good)than(harm)to us.For one thing, _________.For another, ____________.B

Recently ________ has aroused public concern.It ______________________.People/prefer doing ________because______.___________ do both(good)and(harm)to us.On the one hand,________.On the other hand,________________.2)、观点对立型

a.一些人对某一事物的 观点是… …

b.另外一些人对该事物的 观点是… …

c.我的看法… …

（以2011年6月的作文为例进行分析）

2011年6月的作文

Part I Writing(30 minutes)

注意：此部分试题在答题卡1上。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: Online Shopping

1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚

2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题

3.我的建议 观点对立型模版

第一段提出问题模版：

1.There is a hot debate going on about____

2.Recently many people are involved in the heated discussion about_____近年来，…...引起了激烈的争论.第二段 论述两种不同的观点模版

1.As for such a question, different people hold different views.Some believe______, While there is also an opposite voice,___.2.Some insist that _____.Others, however, are voicing quite a loud protest.They pointed out that___________.3.Some maintain that_________, others argue that__________.4.Most people take it for granted that________..However,others hold________.第三段 我的观点模版

1.As for me, I hold that ______________.2.I firmly believe that_____________.3.As far as I‟m concerned, ___________.4.For my part,it is______________.5.Personally, I believe the trend that____.6.From my perspective,____________.7.In my opinion__________________.练习：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Credit Cards.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.越来越多的人使用信用卡，信用卡有哪些好处

2.信用卡的弊端

3.你自己的观点

Credit Cards 3）问题解决型

a.阐述问题、解决问题 b.解决问题的办法 c.我的看法

以2010/12的作文为例进行分析 2010年12月的作文

Part I Writing(30 minutes)

注意：此部分试题在答题卡1上。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: How should parents help children to be independent?

1，目前不少父母为孩子包办一切

2，为了让孩子独立，父母应该..How should parents help children to be independent?

This is a thought-provoking social phenomenon that parents monopolize their children’s everything.From going to university, selecting majors to hunting for a job, parents make every crucial decision for their sons and daughters.No doubt, what the parents do leads to a most serious problem—children are badly dependent on parental help.Every morning the children wake up, but

they don’t know what they should do and how they could do.They lose the ability to take care of themselves, and in turn, lose the opportunity to succeed.Don’t keep on spoiling the children anymore, because they need independence.These are some suggestions for parents.Firstly, parents should create an independent climate for their children.Secondly, parents should try to help children maintain their independence.Finally, parents should always believe that their children have the ability to make their own decisions in their lives.写作模板

A

Sometimes we find there are really many problems/difficulties in _______________.Then how can we manage to overcome all these? Step by step, first,________.Secondly, __________.Thirdly,__________.Last, _____.After a period of painstaking efforts, I feel that _______________________________.B

These days we often hear that___________.There are some possible reasons for that.In the first place,______________.In the second place, _________________.To solve the problem is not easy at all, but it is worth trying.We should do something such as _________ to improve the present situation, And I do believe everything will be better in the future.5、最新四级作文解析（2011年12月的作文）Part I Writing(30 minutes)

注意：此部分试题在答题卡1上。

”you're allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world.I 've done it hundreds of time.” You'd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.” ? 从命题要求中，我们可以看到此次命题的考试内容为励志型话题，与学生的日常学习生活和人生观有关。命题属于依据材料来分析问题的文章体裁，对于这样的话题，我们可以借用三段式这一模式，首先依据背景材料来提出问题，“从戒烟的问题引出做任何事情都需要坚强的意志，需要坚持到底，不可半途而废。”之后分析这一问题，可以正反论证，也可举例论

证，此为主体段落，可以通过“人生要靠自己创造”、“人的潜力无穷”、“任何苦难和痛苦都是对自己的挑战，其收获到的经验将是无穷的”。也可以引用名人名言，如“where there is a will, there is a way”。最后一段，可以总结来论证坚强的意志对于成功的重大意义。提纲

（1）阐述现象“Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world.I „ve done it hundreds of time.”，并进行评论

（2）举例证明Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will

（3）作者的观点

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will

Everyone tries to achieve success in his career.However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails.Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway.Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means

steadiness in one's work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts.6、写作的注意点: 1.字迹一定要清晰工整

2.第一段不要出现语法错误,如：nowadays的拼写.3.不能出现的标点(1)书名号(2)顿号

(3)6个点的省略号(4)中文形式的句号