第一篇：考前冲刺：大学英语四六级高分作文亮点词汇总结

考前冲刺：大学英语四六级高分作文亮点词汇总结

大学英语四六级高分作文亮点心经：

1、是否长短句交叉；

2、是否会使用插入语；

3、用词是否多样，切确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷教员眼球的闪光词；

4、关头词是否换用，切勿老用一再词；

5、句型使用是否切确、地道。

下面给出写好一篇作文的注重事项：

1.恰当用被冻╂换自动，这样能更客不美观的反映事实，句子开首不要老是用we / I（好比写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.）举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.长于使用插入语，好比说把副词、毗连词等，作插入语放在中心，一般放在趾笫览ヒ幄动词或者助动词后，双方分袂加上逗号。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中心，一般放在动词，助动词后，双方分袂加上逗号。

好比说： Other inpiduals, however, take the attitude that „

3.必然要学会换词，换形象，具体的替代太宽泛的。（考试一一般不要呈现good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等）好比膳缦沔例子中，applicable替代proper, approaches替代ways, implement替代carry out, sharpen one's competitive edge替代enhance one's competitiveness（提高某物竞争力）

下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同窗写的优异作文（14分）的例子，看看他是若何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同窗把教员上课讲的各类写作手法和出色替代和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I（By Simmy）

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替代 very

thrilling 替代 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替代 sb.be interested in sth.google 替代 search

an army of 替代 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing inpiduals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个出色句型，用来描述在某个时代发生了什么工作;Increasing popularity 替代 more and more popular

Coincident with „ 很是地道的句型，表达“与„一致”的意思，替代 With „

Advancement 替代 development

Pour into（flood into / swarm into）替代 enter into

Current（currently）替代 now

Appeal to sb.替代 sb.be interested in sth.Growing inpiduals 替代 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不磕张的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替代 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了很是出色的被动

Additionally 替代 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替代 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个出色之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替代 do harm to

Emerging 替代 appearing（fading 替代 disappearing）

Net citizen 网平易近，属于出色用词

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替代 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play，do 强调

Positive 替代 important / good 等

A slice of 替代 a part of

Unfavorable 替代 bad

Impacts 替代 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of „ 使用插入语

Fruits（而且fruits 用的很是形象，merits/ virtues）替代 advantage（defects 替代 disadvantage）Facet 替代 aspect

以下是30个最经典的替代词，可以参考：

1.inpiduals,characters, folks替代（people ,persons）

2: positive, favorable, rosy（夸姣的）, promising（有但愿的）, perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替代good

3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill（有害的）替代bad

如不美观bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替代

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.（an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most）替代many.注：用many, if not most 必然要小心，many后必然要有词。

Eg.Many inpiduals, if not most, harbor the idea that„.同理 用most, if not all ,替代most.5.a slice of, quiet a few , several替代some

6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that，hold the view that, it is widely shared that，it is universally acknowledged that）替think

（因为是书面语，所以要加that）

7.affair ,business ,matter 替代thing

8.shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替代get many benefits）

10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替代 in my opinion

11:Increasing（ly）,growing 替代more and more（注重没有growingly这种形式。所以当润色名词时用increasing/growing.润色形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替代hardly

13„„beneficial, rewarding替代helpful，14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替代customer

15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替代very

16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable „„ 替代 unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替代sb take interest in / sb.be interested in

18.capture one's attention替代attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替代cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替代„„reasons for sth

23.desire 替代want.24.pour attention into 替代pay attention to

25.bear in mind that 替代remember

26.enjoy, possess 替代have（注重process是过程的意思）

27.interaction替代communication

28.frown on sth替代 be against , disagree with sth

29.to name only a few, as an example替代 for example, for instance

30.next to / virtually impossible,替代nearly / almost impossible

第二篇：考前冲刺：大学英语四六级高分作文亮点词汇总结2

为写作增加亮点四六级作文常见精

彩开头法

几种常见的开头法

(1)主题句法：the appeal of advertising to buying motives can have both negative and positive effects.(2)the biggest safety threat facing airlines today may not be a terrorist with a gun, but the man with the portable computer in business class.believe it or not, optical illusion(错觉)can cut highway crashes.(2)问题法：do you know how many people die from traffic accidents every 23 minutes?

why does cream go bad faster than butter?

(3)对比法：some pessimistic experts feel that the automobile is bound to fall into disuse.they see a day in the not-too-distant future when all autos will be abandoned and allowed to rust.other authorities, however, think the auto is here to stay.they hold that the car will remain a leading means of urban travel in the foreseeable future.(4)数据法：according to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.honesty:根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。

living off campus:根据最近的一项统计调查显示，35%的学生不住宿舍，而是在学校外面租房子住。

youth:根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。

the latest statistics show that „

(5)故事法：six o’clock yesterday(june 20th, friday)afternoon when i was walking along the riverbank of our school, an unbelievable scene caught my eyes.(6)引语法：a proverb says, “you are only young once.”(适用于记住的名言)

it goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(自编名言)

第三篇：英语四六级作文高分100词

四六级英语作文高分100个同义词替换精髓词汇

100个同义词替换精髓词汇

1.important =crucial(extremely important),significant(amount or effect large enough to be important)2.common=universal, ubiquitous(if something is ubiquitous, it seems to be everywhere)3.abundant=ample(enough and usually extra), plentiful(enough for people's needs and wants)4.stick=adhere, cling(hold on something tightly)5.neglect=ignore.(difference: neglect means someone has not paid enough attention to something;ignore means no attention.)6.near=adjacent(twothings next to each other), adjoin(the same as adjacent)7.pursue=woo(man woos woman, old-fashioned), seek(if you seek sth, you try to obtain it.FORMAL)8.accurate=precise(precise is exact and accurate in all details), exact(correct in every detail)9.vague=obscure(unknown or known by only a few people)10.top=peak, summit 11.competitor=rival, opponent(especially in sports and politics)12.blame=condemn(if you condemn something, you say it is very bad and unacceptable)13.opinion=perspective, standpoint(means looking at an event or situation in a particular way)14.fame=prestige(describe those who are admired), reputation 15.build=erect(you can erect something as buildings, FORMAL), establish 16.insult=humiliate(do something or say something which makes people feel ashamed or stupid)17.complain=grumble(complain something in a bad-tempered way)18.primary=radical(very important and great in degree), fundamental 19.relieve=alleviate(alleviate means you make pain or sufferings less intense or severe)20.force=coerces into(coerce means you make someone do something s/he does not want to),compel 21.enlarge=magnify(magnify means make something larger than it really is)22.complex=intricate(if something is intricate, it often has many small parts and details)23.Lonely=solitary(if someone is solitary, there is no one near him/her 24.small=minuscule(very small), minute, 25.praise=extol(stronger than praise), compliment(polite and political)26.hard-working=assiduous(someone who is assiduous works hard or does things very thoroughly 27.difficult=arduous(if something is arduous, it is difficult and tiring, and involves a lot of efforts)28.poor(soil)=barren, infertile(used to describe the soil is so poor that plants cannot be planted on it)29.fragile=brittle, vulnerable(someone who is vulnerable is easily hurt emotionally or physically)30.show=demonstrate(to demonstrate a fact means tp make it clear to people.)31.big=massive(large in size, quantity, or extent), colossal(use this word, you emphasize something’s large), tremendous(INFORMAL)

32.avoid=shun(if someone shuns something, s/he deliberately avoid that something or keep away from it.)33.fair=impartial(someone who is impartial is able to give a fair opinion or decision on something.)34.attack=assault(physically attack someone), assail(attack violently 35.dislike=abhor(abhor means you hate something to a extreme extent for moral reasons), loathe(dislike very much)!36.ruin=devastate(it means damage something very badly, or utterly destroy it.)39.always=invariably(the same as always, but better than always)40.forever=perpetual(a perpetual state never changes), immutable(something immutable will never change or be changed)41.surprise=startle(it means surprise you slightly), astound(surprise you to a large degree),astonish(the same as astound)42.enthusiasm=zeal(a great enthusiasm), fervency(sincere and enthusiasm)# 43.quiet=tranquil(calm and peaceful), serene(calm and quiet)!44.expensive=exorbitant(it means too expensive that it should be)45.luxurious=lavish(impressive and very expensive), sumptuous(grand and very expensive 46.boring=tedious(if you describe something tedious, you mean it is boring and frustrating)47.respect=esteem(if you esteem someone, you respect and admire him/her.FORMAL)48.worry=fret(if you fret about something, you worry about it)49.cold=chilly(unpleasantly cold), icy(extremely cold)50.hot=boiling(very hot)51.dangerous=perilous(very dangerous, hazardous(dangerous, especially to people's safety and health)52.nowadays=currently 53.only=unique(the only one of its kind), distinctive;54.stop=cease(if something ceases, it stops happening or existing)55.part=component(the components of something are the parts that it is made of)(h 56.result=consequence(the results or effects of something)57.obvious=apparent, manifest 58.basedon=derived fromcan see or notice them very easily)60.quite=fairly 61.pathetic=lamentable(very uncomfortable and disappointing)62.field=domain(a particular field of thought, activities or interest)63.appear=emerge(come into existence)64.whole=entire(the whole of something)8 65.wet=moist(slightly wet), damp(slightly wet), humid(very damp and hot)!66.wrong=erroneous(incorrect or partly correct)67.difficult=formidable 68.change=convert(change into another form)69.typical=quintessential(this word means represent a typical example of something)70.careful=cautious(very careful in order to avoid danger), prudent(careful and sensible)71.ability=capacity, capability(the same as ability)72.strange=eccentric(if some one is eccentric, s/he behaves in a strange way, or his/her opinion is different from most people)73.rich=affluent(if you are affluent, you have a lot of money)74.use= utilize(the same as use)75.dubious=skeptical(if you are skeptical about something, you have doubts on it.)76.satisfy=gratify(if you are gratified by something, it gives you pleasure and satisfaction)77.short=fleeting, ephemeral(if something is ephemeral, it lasts a short time)78.scholarship=fellowship 79.angry=enraged(extremely angry)80.smelly=malodorous(used to describe an unpleasant smell)81.ugly=hideous(if something is hideous, it is very ugly or unattractive)# 82.attractive=appealing(pleasing and attractive), absorbing(something absorbing can attract you a great deal)83.perse=miscellaneous(a miscellaneous groups consists of many different kinds of things)84.disorder=disarray, chaos 85.crazily=frantically(used to describe someone who behaves in a wild and uncontrolled way)86.rapid=meteoric(ATTENTION: meteoric is only used to describe someone achieves success quickly)87.ordinary=mundane(very ordinary and not at interesting or unusual)88.despite=notwithstanding(FORMAL)89.best=optimal(used to describe the best level something can achieve)/ 90.sharp=acute(severe and intense)91.unbelievable=inconceivable(ifyou deem something inconceivable, you think it very unlike to happen ^ 92.puzzle=perplex(something perplex someone means it confuses and worries him/her because he/she does not understand it)93.method=avenue(away of getting something done)94.famous=distinguished(used to describe people who are successful in their career)95.ancient=archaic(extremely old and extremely old-fashioned)96.decorate=embellish(embellish means make something look more attractive via decorating it with something else)/ 97.possible=feasible(if something is feasible, it can be done, made or achieved)98.so=consequently, accordingly 99.rare=infrequent(doesn’t happen often 100.greedy=rapacious(greedy and selfish)

第四篇：大学英语四六级高分作文

第一类：问题解决型，如环境污染，大学生是否该兼职，大量使用塑料袋等

1、提出问题

2、分析原因或说明弊端

3、解决问题（归纳总结，预测趋势，建议措施）

第一段好一点的开头语句：

Nowadaypeople’focusisattractedonthe issueof……

/Nowadaypeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningrelizethat……/Nowadayit is widelyacknowledgedthat……

第二段好一点的开头语句：

Thereason for this is not far toseek.First…….Second…….Third……/There are serveal reasons/elements/factors/causeseatedas follow…… 接下来写原因或者好处如以下语句可以用

Oneof the benefits is that…….But it has a hamful effect on on……

/The significant benfit/harm is……（注：此句中significant就是important的意思，四六级写作中禁用significant，因为那个词太低端的，没有得分点。同理也禁用People）

第一段好三点的开头语句：

Based on the above statements/From what we have discussed/Judging from the

above evidence.We can predict the tendency that……/We may safely draw a conclusion that……

建议结尾：

Evidenced, it is high time that we took measure toslove this issue /problem/Immediate measures must be taken before it getstoo serious/late

第二类：正反观点型

第一段观点A

When asked about……/When to comes ^/faced with…………many people believe

that ……,they think/hold/argue/claim/maintain/advocate………………

/When it comes to ^people’s opinions differ.Some hokd the opinion that……….There is ageneral discussion today about the issue of………….These who advocate…………argue that…………

第二段：

while others think /believe …………

三段：

Weighting the pros and cons of this arguments,I am inclined to agree the former/latter point of view that…………

/In my ipinion /To my mind /As for me.Ihold a balance view /a combination of the two is a better choice.…………

第五篇：2011英语四六级高分作文亮点词汇总结

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英语四六级高分作文亮点心经：

1、是否长短句交叉;

2、是否会使用插入语;

3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;

4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;

5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：

1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实，句子开头不要总是用we / I(比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

比如说： Other inpiduals, however, take the attitude that „

3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one's competitive edge替换enhance one's competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I(By Simmy)I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in goggling an army of useful information i had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.google 替换 search

an army of 替换 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing inpiduals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular Coincident with „ 非常地道的句型，表达“与„一致”的意思，替换 With „

Advancement 替换 development Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替换 enter into Current(currently)替换 now Appeal to sb.替换 sb.be interested in sth.Growing inpiduals 替换 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替换 To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法

Our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动

Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides Deliver 替换 send There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,„, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quite a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to Emerging 替换 appearing(fading 替换 disappearing)Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has any weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides Computers do play，do 强调

Positive 替换 important / good 等

A slice of 替换 a part of Unfavorable 替换 bad Impacts 替换 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of „ 使用插入语

Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换 advantage(defects 替换 disadvantage)Facet 替换 aspect

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